I'm sorry that I havn't updated in a while. I can't find my notebook and I don't remember squat about what I wrote, so I guess I will pick up from here... Oh, i'm such a bad, 13 year old author!
Aaaagh! The 8th paragraph!! WHY!!!!!


Ed's throat went completely dry when Kagome spoke the words. He noticed how sexy she said it and nearly stumbled backwards. Plus, even though he never realized it before, the back of his head wondered what sex really felt like. He knew he was going to feel guilty for saying this, but something forced him to speak.

"I... I think... I...," He choked. He looked down for a second, but then looked back up at Kagome's face.

"I'm sorry, Edward. I don't know what came over me," she said. "I'm sounding a lot like Miroku, arn't I?" Ed shook his head.

"I really don't know of Miroku, but if you really want to..."

"I don't know. This isn't like me at all, but something about you really... Well... seems attractive," she studdered. "I... Umm... I..." She inched closer to Ed, who was now completely frozen from sudden shock. Her face was now a half an inch away from his, feeling his warm breath make contact with her face. Suddenly, Ed pulled her face towards his and made lip contact. They made out for a while before they finally stripped themselves, Ed even taking down his braide. Kagome realized how good of a kisser he was and smiled, happy but yet almost guilty to do such a nasty thing. Ed felt the same way she did, but almost worse. He promised his little brother that he would make love when he was 19 or older. Unfortunatley that promise didn't happen.
Kagome layed down first, Ed slowly getting on top of her.

"Before we continue, are you sure you want to do this now?" Ed asked, sweat forming from his head. Kagome hesitated, staring into Ed's golden eyes.

"I... Y-Yes, Edward," she said in a whisper, which again sounded sexy to Ed. Ed nodded and slowly went it. Since Ed was average-sized for his height Kagome noticed it didn't hurt as much as she thought. Still, she winced in slight pain as Ed moved in an easy pattern.
They began to pant a little as time went buy. Kagome, every now and then, had a slight orgasm, which made her feel a little embarrassed. She couldn't help it though. Most girls have orgasms on there first time. Their panting increased a little as Ed went slightly faster, Kagome flinching a little but still allowed continuation.
Ed went kind of easy on her the whole time through, knowing that she was only 15 and would expirience worse pain if he want hard. Again, she had another orgasm, but it mixed in with a gasp of pain.

"Sorry. Are you ok?" Ed apologized.

"I'm fine. Just a little pain, no biggy," Kagome replied, moving Ed's sweaty hair out of his eyes. She noticed a lot of sweat dripping down his face.

"If you're tired then we can stop," she said, releasing his hair.

"Actually, I am kind of tired," he said, getting off her and kneeling by her side. "Kagome, do you think I am perverted?"

"No, not at all," she replied, waving a hand. "After all, I am the one who asked you for the nasty favor." Ed gave an uneasy smile and a fake giggle.

"We can't tell anyone what happened."

"I'm not that stupid," she laughed. "We better get dressed quickly incase InuYasha and the rest realizes we were gone." Ed nodded and grabbed his clothes that were hanging from a tree branch. Kagome's clothes were right below his. As she knelt down to pick them up she saw Ed's exposed 'pickle' inches in front of her. She squealed a little and quickly straightened her body, clothing in bunched in her left arm. Ed gave a 'what the hell' look and cocked an eyebrow.

"Err... There's was a beetle on my skirt," she lied nervously. She began to get dressed quickly, her back turned from Edward so she wouldn't have to see what she saw again. Her face blushed madly as the image swung back in her head. But then she thought of InuYasha and how mad he would be if he ever figured out what happened.

'Yikes. I'm so glad we are all the way out here,' she thought. She was so lost in her mind that she didn't realize that she heard InuYasha's voice about 200 feet away. She started to panic, for she was only in her skirt. Ed was already dressed and clearing his face from sweat.
As Kagome slipped on her school uniform she heard InuYasha's voice only 100 feet away. His voice became louder and more irritated and worried.

"Wipe the sweat of your face," Ed whispered to Kagome. "He might suspect something." Kagome nodded and began rubbing her hands against her face, sweat slowly evaporating from her hands. Suddenly, InuYasha appeared into the clearing, Tetsuiga in one hand and his other on the sword case. (I forget the word for 'sword case'... Sheeth?)

"Alright! Where were you two?!" He demanded, pointing the Tetsuiga at Edward. "Did you do anything to Kagome?! She looks exhausted! And you look suspcious!... Were you two doing what I think you were doing?!" Kagome's eyes widened in horror.

'How did he see right through us?' She thought, feeling her heart beat fast. 'I have to think of something fast before he says anything else.'

"InuYasha!!! How could you say such a thing?!" She said, actually sounding convincing. "You are starting to turn into Miroku, it seems like." InuYasha sweat dropped and began to sheeth his large, fanged sword. (I think I used sheeth right!!)

"Errr... Sorry, Kagome," InuYasha apologized, for once on the journey. "That was a pretty stupid thing to say. But what were you guys doing out here? You know it's dangerous."

"We were training incase of a demon or chimera attack," Ed falsely explained. "My automail has been pretty dull and stuff, so I wanted to see if I can make it a little better. As for Kagome, she was practicing archery with a bow and some arrows I recently transmuted, but she accidently destroyed it. We were just about to go back to the camp, but it seems you came along to escort us." Kagome stared at Ed in awe, for his explanation was really believeable. InuYasha nodded and gestured for the two of them to hop on.
On the way back to the camp they all heard rustling in a nearby bush.

"InuYasha, I sense a Jewel Shard," Kagome said, waiting for InuYasha to stop sprinting.

"And I sense something somewhat human, but metal," InuYasha replied, sniffing the air before landing.

"A guy in a suit of armor, perhaps?" Kagome guessed, climbing down from his back. Ed did as well and transmuted his metal arm into a blade.

"Suit of armor, eh?" He said. Suddenly his eyes widened and thought of his younger brother.

"As soon as it pops out of the bush, attack the bastard," InuYasha instructed, pulling out his sword. He got in his fighting stance while Kagome took out her bow and arrows. Ed, on the other hand, just stood there, waiting to know who or what was really going to show up.


Bleh. I'm such a bad little girl, arn't I? I'm too lazy to refise it, but I know there are a shit load of errors. I'll update later or something. (later means a week or so)