Hi thank you for the reviews and sorry for taking so long in updating, I've just had a busy week. For the wait I've added a few twists and turns so hopefully that will make up for things. I would also like to comment on the comments about Michelle Dessler not believable as a traitor but everyone thought Nina Meyers wasnt a traitor and then bamm, there she was, betraying the country. However i do appreciate bad comments as they help me as well so thank you. Please keep reviewing and thank you again for the reviews.

12:40

"Michelle"

Tony ran up, sweat on his brow and his heart racing. "Where the hell did you go?" He rasped.

"I went after I guy I saw running but never caught him"

Tony looked at her and saw that she wasn't out of breath however blocked that out of his mind.

"I heard you calling but I didn't want to give my position away."

Tony nodded. "Ok well we need to take this to Chapelle"

He paused to try and catch his breath.

"I don't think we need to. It was probably just some car jacker"

"Michelle car jackers don't carry around guns and wouldn't shoot the cars they were about to steal"

Michelle was slightly nervous and didn't reply to Tony's comment until she had gotten into the car.

"I just want to go home. We can see Chapelle tomorrow."

Tony got in the car as well and looked at Michelle. "Ok" He bluntly replied.

He turned back to the wheel and started up the car. Normally Michelle would agree with him and she was acting so strange.

He didn't know what to think. He was sure he and Michelle were made for each other but she seemed so distant the past few weeks.

He didn't want to confront her, but he knew he would have to.

Sooner than he thought.

12:45

Kate's senses stirred and she woke to the smell of vomit and urine. She sat up and looked around at her surroundings. She found herself in a cold and damp room which by the looks of things was occupied by tramps. She tried to get up but found her ankles were bound by chains to the wall.

"Your probably wondering what you're doing here am I correct."

Kate looked over at the woman who had just entered the room.

"Who are you? What am I doing here?"

Nina smiled and walked over, a pistol held tightly in her hand.

"You know where Jack Bauer is and I need that information."

Kate knew it must have been one of her kidnappers however she also knew she would die as she had seen her face.

"I don't know I've already told you"

"There's no point protecting him Kate. Do you know what happened to his wife? She ended up killed because of him. Do you want to end up the same?"

Kate stared into Nina's eyes with hatred and tried to think of a way out of this situation.

"You're going to kill me anyway; I've seen your face."

"That's where you're wrong. Everyone in the country will be looking for me so they already know what I look like. I can guarantee you a good, happy life if you tell me where Jack Bauer is."

Kate raised her voice to a near scream. "I don't know"

Nina paused and then turned her back on Kate.

"Bring Mr Warner in"

Kate's eyes widened at her father's name.

The doors opened and Bob Warner was pushed in by a blonde woman.

"Watch your step dad."

Kate looked on in horror as her sister stood behind her father holding a gun.

"Long time no see sis"

12:50

Kim looked through her photo album and cried slightly as pictures of her and her mum turned up. "I miss you so much mum." She whispered to herself.

The phone rang, shaking her out of her dreams and she went and picked it up.

"Hello"

"Kim?"

"Dad? Where are you?"

"Kim I've just arrived in Mexico and getting prepped up to enter the Salazar's club. How you doing? Is everything alright?"

"Yeh, I'm fine. Just heading off to bed."

Chase entered the bedroom and was about to speak when Kim signalled for him to stop. He knew she was on the phone to her dad.

"Good, well just checking that you're alright. How's things in C.T.U? Everyone being nice?"

Kim laughed.

"Yes, everything is treating me very nicely. Except there's this woman who is really moany to me, I think her name is..."

Jack smiled " Chloe. Don't worry she's like that with everyone."

Kim laughed. "Well I sorted her out today."

Jack laughed as well and started to realise how much he missed her. "I'll be back soon anyway. Take care and remember Aunt Carol is only a few hours drive away if you need company."

"Dad I have friends you know. Just look after youself OK?"

Jack nodded to himself. "Ok, you to. I better go now. See you soon."

"Bye dad."

Kim hung up with Jack saying "I love you" to himself

"That your dad?"

"What do you think? Who you did you think I was calling dad?"

Chase frowned. "I wasn't listening in on your convo and when are you going to tell him about us?"

"Don't worry I'll tell him. He just needs a bit of time and well with the recent events with the president and everything he's just well"

"I know your dad Kim. Whenever you tell him he isn't going to be happy."

Kim smiled and stood up. She was wearing a black nightgown with red underwear.

"Well he doesn't rule my life. I do what I want…" She paused and kissed Chase and then pulled away again. "When I want"

Chase smiled and they kissed again, being rudely interrupted by the phone ringing again.

"Dammit" Chase said.

Kim laughed. "Don't! You're turning into my dad."

Chase grinned and threw a pillow at her while picking up the phone.

"Edmunds"

"Chase get down here now. The hospital the president is in is under attack and we need you there straight away."

"I'll be right there"

He hung up on Chapelle and quickly jumped into a pair of jeans and a shirt.

"Chapelle needs us at C.T.U now; the hospital that the president is staying in is under attack."

"Oh my…"

"We gotta move now"

He grabbed a t shirt and jeans for Kim and threw them at her.

"Quickly"

He went and got his socks and shoes while Kim jumped into her clothes.

As she was getting changed she heard gunshots from downstairs.

"Chase" She shouted.

She ran to her drawer and grabbed a pistol which Chase kept in there. She made sure there were bullets in it and went to investigate.

"Chase" She whispered.

She crept down the stairs, looking behind and in front.

"Cha…" She stopped as she saw Chase's body lying on the ground, blood pouring from his shirt.

"Kim" He whispered.

"Chase" She shouted and ran down.

"No don't" He managed to say but it was too late.

2 gunshots flew through the air and caught Kim in the side. She fell to the ground and grabbed her side screaming. Blood poured from her wound and her eyes became fuzzy.

Her shooter walked up to her limp body and reloaded their gun.

Kim tried to see them but her eyes were bloodshot and watering.

"Please…" Was Kim Bauer's last word as 4 bullets were pumped into her head.

Silent Clock

1:00AM

May I just add that from now on I'll be writing the chapters as the full hours instead of the breaks because it's much easier to keep record and things so the next chapter will be 1:00AM until 2:00AM.