Hi would just like to say thanks for the reviews and I am going to continue writing the story with Michelle being a traitor because it's a "What if" story. Nothing in this story would happen in the series of 24 but I'm writing this as what I think would happen if Michelle was a traitor although I know she never would be. Thank you for the reviews everyone and please continue. Reviews telling me to stop the story will be ignored by me as I have enjoyed writing this and will not stop. Thank you.

This hour stars-

Keifer Sutherland, Carlos Bernard, Reiko Aylesworth, Sarah Wynter and Dennis Haysbert.

Also starring Mary Lynn Rajskub, Paul Schulze, James Badge Dale, Daniel Dae Kim, Glenn Morshower, Laura Harris and Sarah Clarke as Nina Myers.

2:00AM

Jack Bauer walked aboard the plane that was set for L.A, the image of his dead daughter still fresh in his mind.

Agent Tom Baker and around 7 other agents followed him. He sat down and put his head into his hands. The team decided to leave him be and most of them kept their distance.

Baker came and sat next to him.

"Have you got anything yet? Who did it? Why?"

Baker shook his head. "No, nothing. C.T.U only received the call around 50 minutes ago. They've sent someone over but that isn't there main priority just now."

Jack sniggered. "Of course it isn't. The president of the untied states is. It's all about him. Everyone risks their lives to save his."

Baker felt he should have stuck up for Palmer, but knew Jack would have snapped.

"Mr Bauer I know how hard…"

"Don't Tom. Just leave me alone."

Baker obeyed and got up, leaving Jack with his thoughts; his dark thoughts.

2:04

"Mr Edmunds. Agent Chase Edmunds"

Chase stirred hearing his voice called and called back. "I'm in here."

The agent heard his cry and entered the hallway.

"I'm agent Clara Hopkins from F.B.I. Your boss Ryan Chapelle called and told us the situation. I'm here to take you to the hospital."

Chase never said anything but nodded in agreement. Clara lifted him up over her shoulders and started to drag him. She was about 5,7ft; brown hair pinned up and lightly tanned. She was strong and was suited out well with a pitch black suit and white shirt.

"Can I ask you a question Miss Hopkins?"

"Yes" She wheezed.

"Why haven't you got any backup?"

"Things are busy and the agency could only spare me"

Chase never answered as he drifted in and out of consciousness.

Clara managed to haul him into her car and then got in the other side. She picked up her mobile and dialled in a number. 7 rings later it was picked up.

"Hey I got him"

"Great bring him straight in to the medical room"

"Ok I'll be there within the hour."

She hung up and was about to drive off when a man tapped on the side window where Chase lay.

She rolled down the window.

"Is that man alright?" He asked.

"Yes sir he's fine. I'm with the F.B.I and I'm taking him back to the hospital."

"No need for that darling." He brought out his gun and shot her in between the eyes. "I'll take him from here"

2:08

"Tony, I…"

"Don't say anything. We'll be there in a few minutes."

Michelle went quiet and thought about telling Tony the truth. She did love him however she didn't know how this would affect there relationship. She also didn't know if he could be trusted.

"Tony I'm going to tell you something which is complicated and may change things…"

Tony interrupted her. "I aint believing a word that comes out of your mouth. You lied Michelle. You betrayed the country while doing so"

"Tony let me finish. You don't know the reasons for my actions. I don't know if you ever will but I was protecting this country, not hurting it. I was doing what I thought was correct and what I believe in. Me and my group have documents saying that the president of the United States signed a document to kill hundreds of Americans. It was a document stating that these Americans were keeping weapons and drugs in their homes. It's a huge organisation and David Palmer signed to have these people killed. Innocent people killed."

Tony was silent as he kept his eyes on the road. He hadn't turned to face her once since they had entered the car.

"How do you know these people are innocent and how did you even get that document?"

"I know because I'm one of them. We're a large organisation that is currently trying to stop the wars between the Middle Eastern countries and well weapons are needed. One of Palmer's men infiltrated our base and then got back to the president who then signed the document stating that we should all be assassinated. We got the document from a man on the inside."

Tony didn't talk and was quite shocked at what he had just been told. Nothing made sense.

"What was all that back at the apartment then?"

Michelle sighed and bowed her head. "He was one of my partners. I was the one that was forced into C.T.U to help cause the death of President Palmer. I didn't want to do it but they forced me by using my brother. They tried to use you to get me to do something else for them but I couldn't. I thought the group was about bringing peace back to this country but I found out that all they brought was destruction."

She brought her head back up and looked at Tony. "I know what I've done and I'm prepared to take the consequences however please let me help you find the other members first. Craven, the head will stop at nothing until he thinks he has done right which means killing the President."

"Why didn't you tell us earlier? Why couldn't you tell me he had your brother captive? Is that what you were speaking to him about when he came in?"

"No, he didn't know he was a captive at that point. They were just threatening him at that point. I thought I was doing right. I still do. Palmer still signed that document and he should be locked up, not killed."

Tony spun the car around and stopped, facing Michelle.

"Where's the base?"

"Tony, these people are dangerous and will stop at nothing until there job is done. The president is under attack as we speak and…"

"Me being there wont help things. Where is the base?"

Michelle was quiet and tried to think things through.

She didn't want to put Tony in danger however knew he already was.

"Craven lives in a house about an hours drive from here. The meetings normally take place there and that's where the drugs and weapons are kept."

"Take me there."

Michelle was hesitant but eventually nodded. Tony started up the engine again.

"What way?"

"Straight ahead" Michelle whispered, dreading the consequences as Tony sped off down the road.

2:15

Pierce crumbled the rock under his leg and dragged himself to find the President's body. He saw his outline and tried to get to him.

"Mr President" He kept on repeating himself.

He got to Palmer's body and looked him over. "Mr President"

He turned him around and felt for a pulse. None.

"Please Mr President" He whacked his palms into Palmer's chest twice, hoping to awake him.

"Arran?"

Pierce was startled by the voice.

"Dennis, where the hell have you been?" Pierce addressed his partner.

"We've been waiting on the level below. Is he alive?"

Pierce shook his head. "No"

Dennis Carmen grinned. "What a shame."

Pierce looked horrified at his partner. "What are you saying? Our President is dead and…"

Palmer shook, blood dripping out of his mouth. He coughed and dust burst out.

"Arran" He gasped.

"Mr President" Pierce shouted with hope.

Pierce looked up and saw Dennis holding a gun at them.

"This was not the plan. He is meant to be dead."

He was about to fire when 2 shots cut through him. He fell to the ground and a S.W.A.T member moved in.

"Is everything alright?"

Pierce shoved his feelings aside and hauled Palmer up.

"He needs medical help immediately."

The S.W.A.T member nodded and took Palmer from him.

Pierce looked at the cold body of his partner. He didn't think for a second he could have been involved in the attack, but then it did make more sense at how the attackers knew the location of the president.

But it was also scarier as there could be more than one traitor in the administration.

Arran Pierce knew from this point no one could be trusted.

2:25

"They've found the president"

Chapelle called the C.T.U staff around and announced.

Everyone sighed with relief. "Now we got to clear this thing up and find out who was behind it. Let's get to work people."

Chapelle went up the stairs to his office, closely followed by Chloe.

"Any word on Chase yet?" She asked, chasing him.

He turned and faced her. "No not yet. F.B.I is handling him anyway so just try and concentrate on your job Chloe."

She frowned and turned. "Yes sir"

2:30

Kate's wrists were red with her pulling on her chain. She pulled one last time and then gave up. She hated this. T

he door opened and Marie walked in. "Hello sis. How you doing?"

"Screw you Marie. You're not my sister. First the terrorist thing and now this, why?"

Marie smiled and tilted her head. "Money sis. It really does make the world go around."

"You make me sick. I'm not doing anything for you or your little group."

Marie laughed. "I don't really care. It's Nina that wants the whole immunity thing. I personally can live with the police on my tail. Bit of danger never done me any harm. No I'm working with Nina's employer Craven, head of this big organisation that is taking out the president. Good cause as well. The president signed a contract to kill this group off, even though all they were doing was helping the world."

"Helping the world? Last time you thought you were helping the world; you shot your fiancé and planned to kill millions of other Americans with a nuclear bomb. That's not helping the world"

"Oh but it is. Sometimes people have to die, for other people to live." T

he door opened and Bob Warner was pushed in by a guard.

"Dad" Kate shouted.

Bob tried to go to her but was held back by the guard. "Let me go you son of a bitch"

The guard hit him, making him fall to the floor.

Kate started crying.

"How can you watch them do this to your own father?"

Marie smiled and walked over to Bob. She pulled out a gun and aimed it at his head.

"He's not my father. Tell me where Jack Bauer is or I kill him in one shot"

Kate was wide eyed and her heart stopped as she watched her sister aim a gun at their father. "You wouldn't shoot him"

Marie proved her wrong as she fired a shot into his leg.

He yelped in pain, as Kate yelped in fear.

"NO, Ok, ok. He's in Mexico somewhere getting someone that's all I know just please don't hurt him."

Marie smiled. "That's fine. That's all we need to know."

Marie fired 3 shots into her father's back and then the killer one into his head.

Kate was shocked and screamed. Her throat became rusty and everything became a blur. She fainted.

Nina entered the room behind the guard. "Good job. I knew she would give into you. Everyone gives into family"

Marie was still smiling, however felt different as she stared at her father's cold, dead body.

"Let's move, We don't want to be late in meeting Jack at the airport." Nina joked.

Marie followed Nina out of the room, leaving the guard to clear up the biggest mistake she had ever made.

2:40

Jack looked out at the pink and red sky. She wondered if Kim was reunited with her mother. He had never forgiven himself of that mistake. Trusting Nina Myers.

"Mr Bauer we will be arriving in L.A in about half an hour."

Jack half listened to the man who had spoken to him and nodded.

He wanted to be alone.

He asked himself who had done this and why. He had many enemies but not many who knew the whereabouts of his daughter.

Could Chase be involved? He asked himself.

The possibilities of candidates were endless, but deep down he knew who was behind it. In his heart he knew his worst enemy had caused him this knew grief.

Nina Myers would pay.

2:45

"So this is Chase Edmunds, partner of the famous Jack Bauer?"

Craven walked towards the unconscious Chase.

"Yes sir, I believe so" The man who had retrieved Chase answered.

"Good job. Go relax"

The man left the fire coated room leaving Craven alone with Chase.

His black eyes wandered across Chase's body and his thoughts were dark like his hair. He bent down and touched Chase's lips.

"Wake up Mr Edmunds; I have a very special job for you."

2:50

"Tony, I don't think this is a good idea. You don't know how dangerous he is and…"

"Be quiet" Tony shouted and he brought out his cell. He dialled in a number and waited.

"O Brian"

"Chloe, it's Tony, get Chapelle."

"Where are you Tony, things are crazy over here, you need to be here"

"I know and I will but I need to talk to Chapelle first."

Chloe rolled her eyes. "Ok, I'll go get him"

Tony took the phone away from his ear and looked at Michelle.

"I need a rough plan of where people may be and where the weapons are."

Michelle opened the closet at the front of the car and took out some paper and a pen. She drew a plan of the house and where the weapons were the last time she was at the house.

"Tony what's happening?"

"Ryan, I've found out about this organisation that was kept hidden from agencies by the president. They have weapons and drugs and Michelle is part of them"

Chapelle was shocked at what he had just heard. "Ok, where about are you? I'll send a team over."

"Ok the address is…"

Tony cut out.

"Tony. Tony you there?"

Chapelle turned to Chloe. "I've just been cut off from Tony. Get me his location"

"Well that may take some time as…"

"Just do it Chloe"

Chloe narrowed her eyes. "Yes sir"

Tony got out of the car and dropped to his knees.

"Well done Michelle. Craven will be pleased."

Michelle smiled at her newest partner Danny. T

ony turned his head slightly and stared hard at the woman who he had proposed to only a couple of hours earlier.

Then he knew why he had as Danny's head blow blood out. He saw Michelle holding the gun that had just killed her new partner.

"Tony get up"

Tony grabbed Danny's gun and followed Michelle behind a car as another 5 guards came out of the house.

Tony looked at his girlfriend as she reloaded and then they both stood up, firing at there attackers.

3:00AM