Author: nothing new...

Bootheghost: ...first off, I AM AN ORIGINAL MAN, BELIEVE IT! Second, your pretty much wrong about Hinata...let me explain.

Hinata's personality itself is not plain, no, her personality in stories is controlled (determined) by the author. Since most authors prefer her original personality...or think she's doesn't need a change in personality to continue the story, they don't bother with it..

Let's see what I have given her.

Pervert

Out going

Temperamental

Sweet

Kind

Intelligent

Rarely stutters...like once after the time skip, and even then she was asking Naruto if she could sleep with him...

Powerful.

Loyal...

I think I've done a good job so far...

Another thing, just because a OC is a 'original character' doesn't mean they're mean they're original . You have heard of mary sues haven't you? If I were to create a girl for Naruto to fall in love with right now, she would be nothing but a mary sue...that, and it's unfair to the Naruto fan's.

there you go...

Loaned: YEP! And weasels kick so much ass...there is a reason why Irvine has weasels as a summon, but that won't be told till later on...

Anime-Boy07: Damn straight.

Hope master: read above comment.

Lover143: ...hell yeah, expect to see more KinxChoji scene's

midnight-angle-of-darkness: ...un, hell yeah?

Hybrid thing: well, I want it to be taken slowly. Other fic's would have them banging by now, but I want to show that they are forming a connection...I want people to see the connection between them, to have them watch it grow between the two...

I've read only one other fic that has done that...and sadly, it seem's to have been abandoned...

Zexion72: your mental world is ALMOST as twisted as mine...almost, prepare for a kickass battle scene this chapter...

00asianwriter00: glad you liked it.

Shenobikagekitsune: yeah, I know...I always hate being reminded of that chapter...

Dragonize: haven't seen you in awhile, wuz up? The itachi thing was genius...I know, along with a lot of crap I put in here...

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto

Enjoy the fic.

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Silent tear, Nami!

They had found their target...

"Wait." Naruto said, as he stopped, the others looked at him confusedly. They had been 'forced' to walk on the ground ever since the beginning, which pissed both Sakura and Sasuke off since they were such easy targets. The anger would raise to new heights if he tried to pull anything else. Aisuka didn't really mind, she was just as laid back as Naruto.

" What is it Naruto?" Sakura said, as she sighed. Naruto looked around the tree's, careful to scan each one closely. He checked every leaf and branch, every movement he noticed and mentally recorded. He could not afford to make a mistake.

" My spider sense's are tingling."

Whack!

Okay, so maybe he could...

As Naruto rubbed the back side of his head, he couldn't help but laugh. Sakura was powerful, but damn, that hit had knocked him to the ground. Before looking back at Sakura and Sasuke, who where glaring at him. Aisuka just sighed, as she walked over to him. She offered her hand, as Naruto toke it. Aisuka pulled him up. Naruto face then took a one sixty, as he looked at the tree behind them.

" You can come out." Naruto said, as Sakura looked at him like he was crazy. That was before she hit him...again.

" Naruto, this is no time to be playing."

" Who says he's playing?" came a voice, as all four of them turned to see who it was. Up in the tree's where three people, all of them wearing grey robe's ( like Tayuya's, only they were wearing pant's.) and straw hat's. The first one had a type of mask on, which looked like a bunch of piece's of rock put together. The second one had most of their face covered in bandage's, only his right eye visible. The finally one, had white skin and snake like eye's, he also had long black hair as well. Sasuke's eye's widened when he saw the finally one.

" YOU!" Sasuke shouted, as his eye's shifted to a bright red color. Three black pupils appeared in his eye's, his face clearly showing his rage. "You're the one..." His body started to glow, as black symbols appeared around his body, covering over half of him. " That made me kill Zack."

" You mean the Michael Jackson wannabe?" Naruto said, as everyone face faulted. The man in question quickly stood up, as he glared at Naruto with a burning passion.

" I am not like him." stated the man, as Naruto raised his hand to his face and began to count off his fingers.

" Oh really, I can give you three good reason's why you are.(1 you want to stay youthful forever. (2 you like to play with little boy's. ( 3 your face has had just as much surgery done on it. Now if that isn't like him I don't know what is. Oh and Sasuke, even if that technique is powerful, it still won't work on him." Naruto said, as he turned around to see that Sasuke had brought his hands together, a blue energy sphere forming in his hands.

Sasuke ignored him, as he began to charge at the man. Just when he was close to the tree that the man was on, he felt some one grab his wrist, as he was thrown into another tree. Surprisingly with enough force to knock him out.

Naruto stared at Sasuke for a moment, before sighing a looking over Aisuka and Sakura. " Do you mind taking care of him?" Naruto asked, or more like ordered. Both Sakura and Aisuka had paled a bit when they saw what he did and quickly picked up Sasuke, running as fast as they could in the opposite direction.

Naruto then turned back towards the three nin that had been watching the whole thing. Naruto smirked, as he stared at the one he had insulted earlier. " Now, where were we Orchomaru?" Naruto asked, as Orchomaru just glared at him.

" I don't have time for this Naruto, either get out of the way or I'll kill you." Orchomaru said, as Naruto just stared at him lazily.

" You can try...and fail, but I seriously doubt that you can kill me. " Naruto stated, as he drew his katana. Orchomaru glared at him, as he looked at his 'team mates.'

" I don't suppose your willing to fight him?" Orchomaru asked, as they shook their heads.

" He'ssss Anko'sss child, were not fighting Anko'sss child." The one with the bandage's said, as they both disappeared in a puff of smoke, their clothes falling to the ground. Orchomaru mumbled something, as he looked at Naruto.

" I hate that bitch."

" You know you shouldn't hate so much, It could give you a lot of wrinkles. Beside's, she was your daughter after all." Naruto said, as Orchomaru started to form some seal's

" Katon Ryuuka no jutsu." Orchomaru said, as he breathed a huge stream of fire at Naruto. It engulfed the entire area, as the fire spread rapidly. Orchomaru waited for a few seconds, before he heard someone call out something.

"Hakke shou kaiten." was heard, as the flames moved outwards, reveling a blue spinning sphere. Small flames where still burning around it, as it continued to spin for another minute. When it stopped, Naruto was pierced from behind by a sword. He looked back to see Orchomaru grinning and smirked when he saw his confused expression.

An explosion ripped through the forest, as Naruto's kage bunshin exploded. Naruto watched all of this from the safety of a tree branch that was near by. A few seconds later, he quickly turned around and jumped towards another tree, dodging the kill that was aimed to decapitate him. Orchomaru landed on the ground, as Naruto formed some seals and jumped to another tree.

"Katon Housenka no jutsu." He said, as he rapidly shot multiple fire balls from his mouth at Orchomaru. Orchomaru ran to the left, dodging the firs balls as he went. He started formed seals of his own.

"Katon Ryuuka no jutsu." Orhomaru once again shot a huge stream of firs at Naruto, who landed on a tree and jumped to another one, dodging the fire blast. Naruto put his hand into a single seal.

" Kage bunshin no jutsu." Naruto said, as single clone was formed. The clone then formed a seal as well. " Henge." the clone said, as he turned into a giant shuriken. The real Naruto grabbed the shuriken and threw it at Orchomaru. Ochomaru just side stepped the shuriken, as it flew by him. The shuriken continued to fly through the air, now just hovering about the ground. The clone transformed back into it's original form and threw a wave of needle's at Orchomaru.

Orchomaru just knocked the needle's away with his sword, making sure to knock one back at the clone, causing it to puff out fo existence. A few seconds later, Orchomaru jumped into the air, as Naruto bursted out of the ground and tried to slash him. Orchomaru back flipped and stabbed his sword into Naruto's head. " Stopping stalling and attack me!" Orchomaru yelled, as the kage bunshin Naruto disappeared in a puff of smoke.

"I'm not stalling, I'm multitasking!" Orchomaru's eye's widened, as he turned around to see Naruto some distance away, his hands formed into a seal. Right next to him was a dragon's head made out of stone. It's eye's glowed, as Orchomaru paled...

" oh shit.."

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A few miles away, both Sakura and Aisuka were watching the battle between the two. How you ask, well with some chakra focused in the ears and eye's, anything's possible. Right next to them was Sasuke, who was still out cold. Aisuka looked over at Sakura.

" He multitask's?" Aisuka asked, as Sakura nodded.

" Yep he dose."

" Really!"

"Yah, he can talk to you and piss you off at the same time." Sakura added, as Aisuka sweat dropped.

"That's multitasking?"

" You'd be amazed with the result's."

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" Fukyuu doragon furea no jutsu." Naruto said, as the stone dragons eye's glowed red. A few seconds later, a thick, fiery liquid shot out of it's mouth and straight at Orchomaru. He jumped up into the tree's, as the liquid hit the ground. The ground actually began to dissolve a bit, as fire's burned brightly from on top of the liquid.

The dragon readjusted it's head to face Orchomaru, as it shot another blast of liquid at him. Orchomaru dodged it, as the liquid hit the tree. The tree itself almost instantly dissolved to nothing, as the remain's of the tree fell to the ground. Naruto then jumped into the air and drew his katana, the stone dragon crumbling into a pile of rock's.

Naruto hit Orchomaru in mid air, sending him into a tree. Naruto followed him, and before Orchomaru could move from his spot on the tree, Naruto pressed his sword against his throat. Naruto sighed, as Orchomaru turned into a pile of mud. He then turned around to see Orchomaru standing on a tree branch, watching him with amusement.

" Maybe we should stop fooling around now?" Orchomaru asked, as Naruto just glared at him.

" Maybe your right, but I still don't need to go full power to beat you." Naruto said, as he slowly formed his hands into a unique seal. He then started to gather his chakra, as blue electricity began to form around him. Naruto closed his eye's, as his body started to glow blue. The electricity started to flare around more rapidly, as his clothes flowed/ waved at a high speed. A second later, Naruto's eye's shot open.

" Forty percent!" Naruto shouted, as he gave a loud roar. His body was surging with energy, every fiber of his being was being rearranged. Every molecule changing to hold his new power. A blue light shined from Naruto, as the energy caused shock waves. Orchomaru shield his eye's, as the light from Naruto intensified. A minute later, it dimmed, as Orchumaru looked to see what had happened.

Naruto's clothes had changed, he was now wearing a aqua blue jacket and grey water proof pant's. The pant's were tucked away into to large black combat boot's, while the jacket's large hoodie covered all of the upper face of Naruto, leaving only his checks and whisker marks visible. The jacket was buttoned up, while two chain's criss crossed around his chest, forming an X. The jacket's sleeve's were long and hiding his hands quite well. The most noticeable feature's about him were the fox ears on his head and the two tail's swinging behind him.

The two just stood there for a moment. Before Naruto reached behind him while one of the tails began to take the shape of a ball. A second later Naruto threw the ball into the air. " Sabi arashi." Naruto said, as the sky flashed for a moment, before it began to rain heavily. Naruto reached behind him again, as the second tail also formed into a ball. He then extend his arm out, while it began to take shape. " Sabi non." Naruto said, as the watery sphere extended out wards, taking the shape of a sword. Naruto just stood there for a moment, before jumping towards the left.

Orchomaru wondered what he was doing, only to be shocked when Naruto 'landed' side way's in mid air and jumped to the right, heading towards him in a zigzag pattern. Orchomaru jumped back to avoid Naruto's sword. When he landed, Orchomaru back flipped to avoid a slash that was aimed low and spun in the air to dodge another slash. Landing on his feet again, Orchumaru dodged another slash by jumping backwards, forming seals as he went.

"Tossa hazacki no jutsu." Orchomaru said, as he brought his hands together and shot a blue blot of lightning at Naruto. Naruto's eye's widened, as the lightning struck, a second later he bursted into a couple hundred drops of water. Orchumaru quickly sunk into the ground, barely missing the slash from Naruto's sword. Naruto closed his eye's for a minute, opening them again to see several dozen clones surrounding him. He began to form some seals.

" Saheme." Naruto said, as water began to gather above him in a giant sphere like shape. The clones charged at him with their swords drawn. Just as they were about to reach him, the water sphere finished and fell to the ground. When the 'drop' hit the ground, a huge burst of water shot up into the sky, as several smaller versions of the 'drop' rained down. When they hit the clone's, Naruto heard the sound some one makes when their being crushed.

Naruto turned around to face Orchumaru, who was standing a couple feet away from him. A beeping sound was heard, as Orchomaru checked his wristband. With a tired sigh, he lowered his hand and looked at Naruto.

" It seem's my time is up, I'll have to deal with you another time." Orchumaru snapped his finger's, as four clone's bursted out of the ground, their hands forming seals.

" Kitei asshuku no jutsu." they said at once, as a HUGE ass boulder shot out of the ground and directly at Naruto. Naruto simply moved out of the way, wounding why he used something she could dodge so easily. His eye's widened, as he looked back to see that Sakura and Aisuka were directly behind him.

" shit." Naruto thought, as the boulder surprisingly blazed through the tree's at high speeds. Sakura was in front of Aisuka, who was right next to Sasuke. Naruto watched, as the boulder was about to hit them when something happened. The boulder...had split in half, as the piece's rolled in different direction's.

" Man, this is troublesome. Are you alright." the man asked, as he turned to face Sakura. Of course she didn't hear him, considering that she was to busy staring at him, hearts in her eye's. standing before her was a man around the height of 5'9 and he was around the age of sixteen, he also had long black hair. He wore baggy grey pant's and a large green jacket, a net shirt underneath. It was showing his muscles all to well. He had a sheath strapped to his belt and was wearing sandle's. Sakura was practically drooling.

Naruto sighed in relief at the sight of the new arrival, as he turned back to where Orchomaru was. Naruto cursed to himself, as he looked at the now empty spot. He would have to deal with that guy again sooner or later...wether he liked it or not.

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author: I've got a nice offer for you guys. How would you like me to, instead of waiting till Saturday, post the stories when I finish them...I have like eight or nine chapters held back. Tell me in your reviews since I don't read my mail much...