author: as you can see, I've updated twice. The reason being is because this chapter is CRAP, so I'm giving another chapter after it to make up for it...
No to the reviews.
johnlennon: ...right, you probably haven't gotten the memo yet...XD, but seriously, the Naruto Garra is a genius idea. I would love to wright it at some point, but it's not going to be in this story.
Garthiax: well that's good, this is Naruto/ Hinata fic after all. So far, the only original pairings I have so far are.
Naruto/ Hinata
Kakashi/ Rin
Tsunade/ Jirayia
after that, the other pairings are going to be changed, that's right you sakura/ sasuke fans...that's not going to happen in this fic, I have a 'special' girl in the wings waiting for him...sakura's pairing has also been decided.
Zexion72: thanks for your review...sorry for not being able to review yours, but ever since I joined that board, I have been spending almost all my time on it...but since the board is pretty much dead now, I can focus on this somewhat...
hope master: hell yeah, what do you expect when reading this fic?
Rire the Scorching Shadow: once again, I have yet another person with a kickass name reviewing...and soon, I shall take over the world. MUAHAHAHAHAHA...
Or not...
To the guy with no name: the reason why I typed that is because...you have no name in your review...but yeah, keep reading and find out...
dragonize: no comment...I would seriously give away a spoiler if I did...so for now, lets just say they 'do' know each other...
TomokiG: um...no? Look, this wasn't meant to have the best grammar, cause personally, I've always had trouble with it since I was a child...and yes, I AM using the word-editor to help me with this...even with it, the story still has this much mistakes...
In all reality...it's not really my fault...
Midnight-angel-of-darkness: I really don't see how I can forget you, since I pretty much talk to you every day now...XD
Jeikobu Kyoudai-teiru: no offence, but I hate typing your name...can never remember it...
To UPDATE SOON: I say, here you go...
Lover143: because I'm evil...MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
And I like to keep people in suspense...
Felix zarraga: yet again, I have some one with a funky name review...nice. Same answer as above, here you go...
disclaimer: I do not own naruto
Enjoy the fic.
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An average day for him, as he continues to movce forward.
Uzumaki Naruto vs Uzumaki Hinata.
Naruto's face was showing pure rage.
" Alright, who the HELL SCREWED UP THE BOARD!"
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A white haired man could be scene in konoha laughing his head off at his own witty genius. What, you didn't honestly have expected Naruto to have gotten his smartass attitude from his wife's side of the family...she only has pure rage...
And a nice rack..
Hinata's face was blood red, as she stared up at the board with wide eyes. Everyone else were just starring up at the board with a shocked expression, even the Raikage. Naruto continued to fume, he pretty much made a crater with every step that he took towards the Raikage and the man with the score board.
" I DEMAND that this is changed, NOW! " Naruto yelled, as the raikage and guy with the score board were taken back.. ( side note: the guy with the score bored shall be known as JouninSB from now on, because it's easier for me and I'm in a megeman.EXE mood today.) The Raikage looked at JouninSB, who only shook his head.
" I'm sorry, but once the names are entered into the computer, you CAN'T change them. It's to prevent hacking, you understand don't you?" He asked, cowering in fear a second later at the sight of Naruto's glare.
" NO I don't understand. Meaning for you to fix the DAMN BOARD!" Nareuto yelled, as JouninSB was now cowering behind the Raikage. Hinata had finally broken out of her stunned form and was now had a HUGE smile across her face. She looked over at Naruto to see that he was yelling at the Raikage to change the Board, she frowned at this...
" Oh hell no..." Hinata thought, she worked to damn long to get this far... Hinata tried to get Naruto's attention. " Hey, Naruto-kun.." She was cut off when Naruto pointed at her.
" How the hell do you think it makes her feel you assholes, maybe she doesn't WANT to have the same name as I do." Naruto stated, as the Raikage thought of something, before snickering to himself. " What the hell are you laughing at!"
" Um...Naruto-kun."
" I just thought about how much of a nice couple you two make." The Raikage stated, holding in his laughter. Naruto's glare was burning holes into the Raikage, who had decided to say screw it and was now holding his sides, as he continued to laugh as hard as he could.
" Naruto-kun."
"You asshole. Give me one good reason why I shouldn't beat the living hell out of you?" Naruto yelled, as the Raikage just continued to laugh at him, smirking in an evil kind of way. Naruto was about to say something when he was cut off.
" NARUTO-KUN!" He heard Hinata yell, as he looked over to see her.
" Yes, Hinata-chan?" Naruto asked.
" Naruto-kun, I REALLY don't mind having the same name as you." Hinata stated, as Naruto raised an eyebrow.
" Really?"
" Really, Really." Hinata said, as the Raikage started to hum something, Naruto looked back the Raikage with a glare.
" Finish that...and I'll fucking kill you." Naruto stated, as the Raikage just grinned.
" -I-N-G." the Raikage said, as Naruto pulled his fist back.
" Remember, this was YOUR fault." as soon as Naruto was about to hit the kage he felt someone grab his arm. " Who the hel-...err... hi Obaa-chan, what brings you here?" Naruto asked, as he looked at Tsunade with a nervous expression.
" I was called here by the Raikage to make sure..." He looked at what Naruto was about to do to said person. "- nothing happens.." Tsunade stated, as Naruto just let go of the Raikage.
" You are sooooo lucky my grandmother's here, or I would have kicked your ass." Naruto stated, as the Raikage silently thanked Tsunade. Tsunade herself looked over at Hinata, who was starring at her in confusion.
" You can thank Jiariya later." Tsunade mouthed, as Hintat looked at her in confusion. She tilted her head to the score board, Hinata silently mouthing an "oh" and grinned like a madman.She then looked over at Naruto. " I think it's finally time to start the match Naruto." Tsunade said, as Naruto just waved her off.
" Don't worry about it, I forfeit." Naruto stated, as Hinata starred at him with wide eye's.
" Why?"
" Because I could never hurt my precious people..." Naruto said, as Hinata's face turned bright red again. " Beside's..."
" I'm to lazy to fight." Naruto stated, everyone face faulting. Naruto looked over at JouninSB. " So, who's going to fight next?" Naruto asked, as JouninSB cleared his throat.
" Right, let's get to the next match." He stated, as everyone stared up at the scoreboard...
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" Kuchiyose no jutsu!" Choji yelled, as he hit the ground HARD. A large cloud of smoke engulfed the arena, a few seconds later settling down to show what Choji had summoned. It was a...lobster, one big enough for even Choji to stand on. It was a dark shade of red, it's eye's being blood red. It four whisker like objects on it's face, them stretching down to it's tail. The creature let out a roar, showing it's to set's of teeth. Choji's opponent just starred at the creature, his eyebrow twitching.
" It figure's, after all those trips to red lobster after all." Neji thought, as he watched Choji jump off of it.
" Let's go Kurabu!' he yelled, as he rolled up into a ball. Surprisingly, the creature followed suit, as they both began to make their assault on Neji. Neji yelled something, as he began to spin violently. Both Choji and Kurabu were pushed back, them sliding across the floor. Naruto watched the fight with mild interest.
It had been a few hours since the tournament had begun and man did it take forever. Oh well, they had gone through quite a few matches since then. In fact, this was the last one to tell the truth. The second match wasn't all that much, a Lee vs. Hanabi match. Surprisingly, Hanabi gave up, actually shuddering in the process. Lee asked what was wrong, but Hanabi said that she wasn't feeling well. So, being Lee, he ran up to her and gave her the hug. He was confused when Hanabi fainted, but Naruto reassured him that it wasn't his fault...
Okay so maybe it was...but he didn't need to know that.
The third match was between Ino and Kin. The match Itself went from a simple battle to an all out bitch fight when Ino made a comment about Choji's weight, which lead Kin to making her own comment Ino. One thing lead to another, and Naruto in the end walked over to Choji and placing a hand on his shoulder.
" Choji, you are now experiencing one of the greatest things in a man's life." Naruto stated, as He looked over at the two girls. " Two women beating the hell out of each other for you." Choji looked at him with confusion.
" That's a good thing?"
" Only if you don't have a fan club."
Surprisingly, or not surprisingly, Kin won and with a few new 'war' scares on her. It was interesting to watch them go at it for all but Naruto. There had been times when he had to break up a fight like that, and end up more scratched then both of the girls combined. He still shuddered when he remembered the street fight that two of his fan clubs had. He had to break that one up too...
Back to the matches.
Next up was Shikamaru and Shino, which would prove to be an interesting match. Shadows verus's bugs, both abilities scare the hell out of people one way or another. But what really amazed Naruto was the verity of bugs Shino had under his control. From termites, to centipedes, to hell even bees, which was odd. The only family that knew how to command bees was Rock country's version of the bug users.
They weren't all that famous anymore, ever since the second...no..maybe the third secret world war when they meet on the battle field with shino's family. They were originally suppose to be on the front lines, using their bugs to confuse the leaf nin, while the other forces killed the leaf nin off. Both families fought it out, with Shino's being the victor. Shino's family earned their reputation that way.
But that apparently was helping much.
" Ouch." Naruto thought, as he watched Shikamaru tag team with his shadow's to bring Shino down. It was interesting how he fought with his katana and a mixture of shadow techniques. It just proves that man such as him can be a lazy bastard and do it in style. Ten to one though, he probably only came up with those techniques to beat off his fan girls, or else he would have to resort to primitive means...like a stick..
The next round was between Okami and Aisuka. Okami pretty much owned her, even with Aisuka's mix style of using boomerangs and genjutsu's, along with a few ninjutsu here and there. Aisuka could be better, oh hell yes she could be better. Maybe Naruto could take her in as another one of his students, as if he doesn't have enough already as it is..
After that was a fight between Kiba and Chabu, which didn't last long since all Chabu had to do was put Kiba under a rather simple jutsu to beat him. I mean really, all he did was rely on brute force to win the battle, he was by no means as strong as Hana. Sure you need to have power or else any planned moves you would make would be limited, but come on...he was at least a good thirty feet away from Chuba during most of the battle.
Next up was Subura and Tenten, with Tenten being OWNED by him. I mean damn, that was defiantly a blow to the ego. She was pretty much taken out it five swipes of Subura's sword. It had a weird sandstorm effect to it when ever he swung it...hmmm, this is interesting. Tenten was beaten extremely badly too. Just how powerful was that damned sword anyway? IF Naruto didn't know any better, he'd say that it was apart of that class, but there still wasn't proof. It could just be a jutsu that he was using...Naruto would find out eventually.
Next up was Temari and Duse fight, in which Temari didn't waste any time breaking out her fan and pretty much destroying Duse with her techniques. Poor Duse had to go through all that crap, I mean, every single attack he used was ineffective against her. Do you know how frustrating that gets after even a short period of time. Maybe it would be better if he learned some non sound oriented techniques, but it was still his choice.
After that was a match between Garra and one of Kurabu team mates. It goes without a doubt, that Kurabu's teammate total owned Garra, I mean with how easily Garra's defense lost to his great use of his...
Had you going there for a moment didn't I?
In reality, Garra beat the living hell out of that guy. And to be honest, that asshole deserved it. Naruto thought that people who abandoned their teammates are not only jackass's, but who would abandon someone special to them to save themselves, well lets just say that Naruto wouldn't hesitate to kill them.
It wouldn't be the first time...
Next was the match between the other member of Aisuka's team against Irvine. It was...well, not much off a fight. After seeing his team mates get the tar beat out of them, he seemed to lose all interest in the test itself. He was a coward, a very big coward, but at the time he was doing a smart thing. If you challenge an person who is much better then you, then your likely to come out missing a limb...or three.
The finally match was between Neji and Choji, with surprisingly Choji beating the living hell out of his opponent ( iI had him say hell in this chapter how many times( count's fingers.) Oh well, let's move on). Choji pulled this summon out of now where and was now beating the shit out of Neji. All of the people there were taken back that Hyuuga Neji had lost to Choji. Naruto just snorted at the thought of how people naturally assume that a person has to be all powerful to beat a Hyuuga, all a person needs is to know how their fighting style move, not enough on how to USE it, but enough to get a feeling on the Hyuuga's movement.
After that, most Hyuuga's were wuss's.
The winners were told that they had a month to prepare for the final part of the test, the true test. Whatever may happen at this point, it was better that Naruto gave up his fight, he would need all of that month to prepare. It was so close to 'their' arrival that he didn't have time to participate in such a small little thing as a test for a rank. Only time will tell wether or not he could get everything ready before they arrive...
...only time will tell.
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