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ON WITH THE STORY!
It was currently 6 o'clock, and Luke was in Lorelai's apartment, cooking spaghetti, green beans, and garlic bread. He thought, simple yet elegant, most people like spaghetti, he figured it would be a safe meal. He had also bought wine, and candles, he wanted it to be some-what romantic.
Mean while, Lorelaihad promised to stay downstairs until he came and told her dinner was ready. She was serving Miss Patty her usual.
"So Lorelai where is that hunk of a man you were walking with last night?" He was built, and handsome, boy wouldI like to get my hands on him.
"He is upstairs Patty." As I wish I was.
"Oh how sweet, waiting for your return." So sweet, I so need another husband.
Lorelai blushed, "No Miss Patty, he is cooking me dinner." Is it 7 yet?
"What's he cooking sweetheart?" Nothing like a romantic dinner.
"I don't know." What is he cooking? It will probably be good. Lorelai took a plate over to a table. To leave Patty wondering, but as she passed her table, she strikes the conversation up again.
"Surprises are always nice. Hey, didn't you guys have a baby with you last night?" Nothing even more cute, than a handsome man, holding a baby.
"Yes Patty." OMG, does she ever tire of asking questions.
"Was it his little sister?"
"No Patty." I guess not.
"It wasn't, who was it?"
"Sorry Patty, but I'm working here, I'll get back to you later." Come on time, hurry to seven o'clock.
6:45. Back upstairs Luke was putting the finishing touches on the table, lighting the candles, fixing the plates, he was about ready to go get Lorelai. All he needed to do, is change his cloths. He was going to pour the wine, but still angry, because the store only had white. Stupid store, who runs out of red wine, damn it, red goes so much better. Well, we will have to deal, or not drink it. Damn it!
He walked over to his bag that he packed, that was in Lorelai's room. He looked over to the bed, where his daughter lay asleep. We might need to move her if the night goes well. NO Danes, don't think like that, it is too early ...but if she incinuates, who am I to turn down a lady.
Luke puts on a dark blue dressy shirt, his jeans are fine, thank God for aprons, though he would never let her see him in one, merciless mocking would be in the furture. They may have only known each other for a day, it felt like years. He couldn't pinpoint what exactly, but they had a different connection. A connection it would take quite a while for normal people to reach, yet they have reached it in less than 36 hours.
Luke walked down the stairs, to bump into none other that Miss Patty comming out of the restroom.
"Oh sorry, ma'am, I should have been paying more attention."
"Oh no, it is okay honey, where are you taking that nice body of yours?"
"Um...I...uh" I don't know if I like this lady, she is awefully loud, and oppinionated.
"I know, you are that young man, that was with Lorelai last night."
"Yeah."
Mean while, it was 7:10, and Lorelai was getting a little impatient. Where is he? I will just go and take a peek.
"Well, it is nice to have two new additions to Stars Hollow, but I do have to ask, why did you have your little sister with you on a date?"
"Well, uh...she's not my little sister...um, she is my daughter." OKAY! Enough with the questions already! Damn lady.
"Your daughter, how old are you."
"Um..."
"There you are Luke, I have been looking for you, oh hi Patty. Luke Why don't you go on back up, and I will be up in a minute." Poor man, attacked by Miss Patty.
Luke just nodded, and walked back upstairs. Thank you Lorelai, I will so do something to pay her back.
About 5 minutes later Lorelai walked into the apartment.
"Man that Miss Patty is something, I'll tell you, something else."
She didn't hear anything from Luke.
"Luke...Luke, where are you?"
She walked in to her room, to see Luke sitting on the bed, holding Rory, who was grinning at her dad.
"Hey Luke."
"Hi Lorelai." He said quietly.
"Hey what's wrong?"
"Nothing."
"Luke, tell me, what's wrong."
"Tonight."
"What do you mean?" Does he not want to be with me.
"This whole night is wrong." I can't believe it went so wrong, and it hadn't even started.
"Why is tonight wrong?" I still don't get it.
"It's just it was suposed to be perfect, but the food is cold, Rory woke up early, I timed it right, her nap, the food, I don't think I got the right wine." Why, why did ithave to happen to me?
"You bought wine." He bought me wine.
"Yes, but it's white, and red goes better with spaghetti." I can't believe I grabbed the wrong kind.
"You cooked spaghetti?" And cooked me spaghetti?
"Yes, but it is cold, by now." Stupid lady, had to ask me questions for forever.
"Okay, let me get this straight, you cooked spaghetti, and bought wine." I can't believe it, he is perfect.
"Yes, but not the correct kind, and the spaghetti is cold."
"Sooooo what."
"Huh?"
"Listen Luke, you cooked me spaghetti, and bought me wine. Nobody has ever cooked me a nice meal, with the exception of my parents, and nobody has ever bought me wine, any wine."
"Really?"
"Yeah, this is real nice."
"But it is cold now."
"I have a microwave."
"It's not the same."
"So what. It will still be great."
"Are you sure?"
"Yes, let's go eat, and Rory can sit in her car seat next to the table."
"O..kay." This still might work.
45 minutes later, they had finished dinner, and wine, Lorelai claiming it all to be great. Luke was still skeptical.
"Alright Lorelai it's up to you, we can go out to a movie, or we can rent one."
"How 'bout we rent one."
"That sounds good."
They as they were walking to the movie rental, Luke reached down, and took ahold of Lorelai's hand. She looked up at him, then intertwined their fingers.He leaned down and kissed her gently on the lips, then they continued walking.
Luke, Lorelai, and Rory, being held by Luke, entered the video store, and looked, and looked, and looked.
"Come on Lorelai, pick one already. We have been here for 30 minutes, and Rory has fallen asleep, you are boring her so badly, she has fallen asleep waiting for you. So come on!"
"Fine, I guess we wil have to watch Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory."
"Isn't that a kids movie?"
"Nooooo...yes, but so what?"
"Fine, it's fine, let's get out of here."
Finally they arrive back at the apartment, lay Rory in her carseat, and cover her.
Lorelai gets all of the snack food, even an apple and beer for Luke, junk foodand wine for herself.
They get themselves comfortable, Lorelai, once again in short shorts and a tight tank top. Luke, still a little weiry about being in his underwear, but puts up with it. This time, a white tank top, and navy blue boxer briefs. They are sitting on the couch, Lorelai leaning against Luke, Luke with his arm around her.
Around the time of the flying-burping drink, Lorelai stops the movie.
"What?"
"Well, I was just thinking, I really don't know much about you, like your age, middle name, just a few details like that, and you don't know them about me."
"Okay, I'm 18, just turned November 21, middle name Elliott, I went to Chilton, hated it, played baseball, found out I was going to be a father at 17, but Rory was born when I was 18."
"Okay, I'm 20, middle name's Victoria, I graduated Stars Hollow High School, can't play sports, can't cook, clean, and absolutly love your daughter."
"I like your name, Lorelai Victoria Gilmore, it's formal."
"Well, my parents like nicer names, my sister name was Elizabeth, it is a long, nice name."
"Yes it is. My parents always told me that Elliott was a gentleman's name, but Lucas, sounded better. I always thought it was kinda funny."
"Yeah, it sorta is. Wait, if your 18, how did you get wine?"
Luke just smirked and raised is eyebrows.
"Noooo, you don't."
"Don't what?"
"You don't have a fake ID, do you?"
"Maybe."
"I would not have expected that with you, you seemed like a good boy."
"Well, what can I say, I have a bad side."
"I would like to see that."
"Oh yeah."
"Yeah."
Luke just leaned forward, and caught her lips with his. Soft, but still meaningful. After a few seconds, Luke deepened it. Pushing Lorelai on her back, holding himself up on his arms, kissing her long, deep, and passionately.
A couple minutes later Luke thought it was it was time to more his exploring to her neck. Biting on it with a purpose. Lorelai tilted her head to the side with a moan to allow Luke to continue his administrations.
The mouth is not the only exploring tool, Lorelai's hands decided to have their own little hunt. One landing in Luke's hair, fiddling with the curls, and the other going up and down his back underneath his shirt.
Luke's hand liked to roam also. One, keeping him above her, so he doesn't crush her, the other, sliding her shirt up, carassing her stomach. While all this roaming was happening, their lips had connected again.
Finally, nice and quiet, me and her, together, kissing, and maybe more. Finally.
Damn, he does that so well, but I guess, you are not a bad kisser and a father at 18.
Lorelai thought it was time for his shirt to be gone, and so she removed it, and threw it somewhere. She forced him on his back, she crawled on top of him, feeling his chest with her hands, then, moving her kisses down to it.
He has a nice chest, firm, broad, tan, and a little bit of brown hair sprinkle around.
Luke moved his hands to her breast, groaning at the new territory, loving the feel of her satin skin in his hands. He is sliding her shirt up inch by inch, then tossing it off in the distance.
They mutually broke, she stood, pulling him with her, going into her room, she leans on the bed. Just the look of her waiting on the bed for him, only in her very, very short shorts, was enough to remove any doubt of his arousal, Lorelai could see it too, he was about to burst through his boxer briefs.
As he walks over to her, his foot kicks one of Rory's stuffed animals. He carefully bends over to pick it up, then looks over to the corner of the room to see his daughter sleeping peacefully in her seat. He looks up to the ceiling, cursing silently.
Damn it, I can't do it! Fuck, not with her in the room, but if I put her out, I feel like a bad father, kicking her out, so I can have sex, yeah father of the year material. FUCK!
He walks over, and sits on the bed, sadly looks at Lorelai, and lowers his head. She gets the message. Lorelai goes over to her dresser, and gets another shirt to wear to bed. Then goes andsits backdown.
"I'm so sorry Lorelai, I just can't right now, I really want to, but I just...I..."
Shekisses him softly on the cheek. "I understand, and that makes you a great father. I respect that. I wanted it to happen, but I understand. Now go take a cold shower, and come to bed, I want to sleep with you even if I sleep with you. Okay."
"Okay. I'll be back, freezing."
"I warm you up."
"I konw you will, that's the problem. Go to bed, and I be a few minutes."
"Hurry."
That's All Folks for right now. I still think it's a little to early for them to have sex, but I have to tease you all for a while.
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