3rd update today! YAY lol as always there's fluff... I'm listenin' to MJ music right now.. Keep the Faith. lol the chapter is a bit short though, and like.. I hate writing down what happens in the game at times, so I've fast forwarded to the end of the game. o.O;; Yeah. You can hurt me now. : flinches: .

In a matter of days, the war was over, and the day star was gone for good. In the end, Jak realized that Damas was his father just seconds after he died. He found out he's the legendary Mar! Erol finally got blasted to bits, and we found out that the precursors were actually ottsils.

Daxter couldn't get over himself after he found out that he was a precursor! They offered Jak erm.. Mar to explore the universe with them, but he decided to stay with us... Where he belongs. Now we can rest in peace for once. Daxter set up a party in the Naughty Ottsil. More like a dance party, to be exact! Drinks all around, and the whole place was a dance floor. It was dark, with loud music playing, with light effects. Most there were Freedom League soldiers.

Torn was there, along with me, Jak, and Ashlin. Daxter was the one hosting the party, and he was being the DJ. We were all there, just sitting down at a table. I was closest to the wall, sitting next to Jak. Opposite of me, was Ashlin with Torn sitting next to her. I didn't say much of anything, unless I was referring to Jak.

"Drinks all around, girls and boys!" Jinx said, popping out of knowhere with 4 jugs of beer.

He passed them all around. We all looked at him. "Thanks?" Jak spoke up. "No problem, Jakie boy. I can't stay. Got some personal business to attend to." He looked at me, and smirked, taking a whiff of his cigar. He blew out the smoke right infront of Torn causing him to glare at him, coughing away the smoke, and whispered in Jak's ear, "You better start makin' a move on your girl. Who knows, maybe I'll take her if you don't want 'er."

He walked off, and Jak made a dumbfounded expression. Jinx slithered his way through the crowd, and reached Daxter, who was being DJ. He whispered something in his ear, and Daxter grinned, nodding. Jinx smirked, and walked out.

Daxter put his mouth near his microphone, "This is for all the ladies and gents, who need to loosen up and just rewind a little bit. You know who you are."

He started putting on a slow song. Nobody budged, too embarrassed to go out. We wanted to, but just couldn't. Ashlin built up enough courage, and started nudging Torn.

He glanced over at her, and sighed, "I don't dance."

"Yes you do. I've seen you."

Ashlin cooed. He blushed heavily.

"Shush"

She then pushed him out of his seat, forcing him to stand up. Ashlin grabbed his wrist, and started cat walking into the crowd. They blended in with everyone else. My heart pounding, I cleared my throat, and looked down. Jak sighed, and looked at me.
He wrapped his arm around my shoulders, getting closer. I faced him, as our eyes locked. "Do you wanna go or not." He said quietly. He was so close, I could feel the warmth of his breath. My crystal turned dark purple.

"Lets go." I said.

We went out on the dance floor, and Jak, not being professional, didn't exactly know what to do. But he did wing it, by putting his hands on my waist. I put my hands on his shoulders, as we started swaying. We kept eye contact the whole entire time.

"Did I ever tell you, that your eyes are the most beautiful shade of blue I've seen in a long time?" I smiled weakly, "Did I ever tell you that you're quite the lady charmer?" He grinned. I started listening to the music that was playing. It was a very fast paced, but romantic song.

Tell the angels no

I don't wanna leave my baby alone
I don't want no body else to hold you

That's the chance I'll take
Maybe I'll stay
Heaven can wait

No
If the angels took me from this earth
I would tell them bring me back to her

It's a chance I'll take
Maybe I'll stay
Heaven can wait

You're beautiful
You're wonderful
Incredible
I love you so

You're beautiful
Each moment spent with you is simply wonderful
This love I have for you girl it's incredible

I don't know what I'd do
If I can't be with you
The world could not go on and every night I pray

If the lord should come for be before I wake
I wouldn't wanna go if I couldn't see your face
Can't hold you close

What good would heaven be
If the angels came for me I'd tell them no

Jak started pulling me closer, as we felt each others warmth looking into eachothers eyes. Mean while, Ashlin and Torn were dancing not too far away from us. Ashlin glanced over at us, seeing how relaxed and comfortable we were with each other. She smiled, which led Torn looking at us blankly.

"Yeah. I'm positive. They were meant to be together. Look how happy they look." She said softly. Torn couldn't help but stare blankly at me without even knowing it. His stomach twisting in knots. Ashlin raised an eyebrow, "Torn?" He snapped back to normal, and looked back at her. "What." He asked quickly. "Nevermind." She grinned.

Daxter changed it to another song.

Don't walk away
See I just can't find the right thing to say
I try but all my pain gets in the way

Tell me what I have to do so you'll stay
Should I get down on my knees and pray?

How can I stop losing you How can I begin to say
When there's nothing left to do but walk away

I close my eyes
Just to try and see your smile one more time
But it's been so long all I do is cry

Can we find some love to take this away
Cause the pain gets stronger every day

An hour later, the party ended. Most of the freedom league soldiers had left, sparing a few that were talking to another around the place. The lights were on, and I was helping Daxter clean the place. Jak and Torn just sat at the bar, kind of dumbly looking at me and Daxter actually working together. A lot of the time, I hated working with him. Oh well!

When it was time to clean the bar, I had an evil plan. Jak and Torn weren't looking, and I put some ice down their shirts, and once it hit them, they jumped out of their seats at the same time. I laughed so hard, I fell to the ground and you couldn't hear my laughing behind their howling.

It looked like they were doing some kind of weird panic dance, waiting for rain to fall out of the sky. Daxter rolled his eyes, and cleaned the bar table. Jak stopped first, and stomped behind the bar table, seeing me giggle, hiding under the table.

He slouched down giving me a discussed look. I blinked, grinning, "Come on! Have a sense of humor!" He reared closer, and closer, until he grabbed me gently, stuffing ice in MY shirt.

I squealed, and tackled Jak as Torn stopped jumping around like a monkey. I was on top of him, and he was holding my waist. We stared at each other, and laughed.

"WHAT THE F-K!" Torn cried.

Now both me AND Jak were laughing our butts off! I tried to sit up, but he held me down, holding me tighter. I felt the chill of the ice rolling down my back. It eventually came out, since my abdomen and half my back was bare. Daxter noticed us, and frowned, "Geta room! You two are embarrassing me."

We stopped laughing, and glared at him. "Shut up, Dax." Jak said lowly. I sat myself up, and got off Jak. He got up, and scratched his head. Torn growled lowly, walking up to us. I frowned, seeing that he looked mad.

"I didn't know it would upset you that much, commander." I said lowly.

Once we were face to face, his angry expression disappeared, and he wrapped his arm around my neck, pulling me closer the side of his chest as if he was giving me a noogie. I laughed as he said, "Call me Torn." He let go, and I rubbed my neck grinning. I looked at Jak, seeing what kind of reaction he got. Jak crossed his arms and smirked, shaking his head.

He looked at me and asked, "Want me to walk you home?" I glanced over at Daxter.

"Anything else you want me to do?"

He shook his head, and I nodded, going back to facing Jak. He started walking towards the exit, and I followed. I waved bye, and Torn waved slowly back, watching us leave. Once we left, Torn took a deep breath, and exhaled slowly as if he was trying to relax. He sat down, and got a beer. Daxter had to clean the rest of the place up by himself.

As Jak and I were walking to my place, I looked up at the stars. I wondered to myself silently how many planets are out there in this universe. About the precursors, and the fact that the man walking right next to me is Mar. A hero. A full fledged no doubt hero. How lucky I was to know him, be his friend. Jak nudged me, pulling me back to awareness.

"Hey." He said softly. Quickly, I looked at him dumbly. "Hey." I replied quietly.

"We're almost there." He said, looking up at the stars, then back to me. I nodded," Cool." and sighed. I didn't want that night to end.
Once we reached my doorstep, he cleared his throat, "I had a great time, with you tonight." I smiled weakly, and looked down, "It was fun. You're a good dancer."

"I better go. I don't wanna abandon poor Daxter." He said softly.

I looked up into his eyes, as I found that he was looking into mine. Slowly, I put my hand under the side of his chin and pulled him closer. I closed my eyes, and gave him a light kiss. To my suprized, he wanted more then just a little light one, and kissed me deeper, inside and out. I was in a trance, as he pulled me closer.

A few moments later, he ended the moment and started walk off. I grabbed his wrist and looked at him questionably. "I godda go help Dax." He said slowly.

"Ok." I said softly. He came back for a few brief kisses, and left. I watched him leave, and sighed. The apartment I lived in was the same one I lived in when Erol was still around. When I was still in innocence. That night I didn't sleep very much, so I just watched TV in bed. I started to doze off, until I suddenly felt something wrap around me. Almost instantly, I knew who it was. It was Jak. He'd come back. We cuddled as I finally went to sleep in his arms.

The lyrics in the chapter are from "Heaven Can Wait" and "Don't walk Away" by Michael Jackson. If you wanna hear what it actually sounds like, buy his album "Invincible" lol it's awesome, believe me. I'm a BIG MJ fan, ok? lol ok I'm gonna shut up now. 2 more chapters and I'm caught up with what I've written so far.

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