Here is the first ending that I wrote, I was very pleased with it, but as a writer I had to let the story go where it wanted to and it ended up making me very angry at my right hand. Anyway, here it is.
Erised
(First ending)
"What do you see?" He sounded almost as if he really cared. For a second, I weighed in my mind the option of confessing to him. I turned to see him wearing his signature smirk, and decided firmly against it, feeling shameful and hurt.
"I wouldn't tell you!"
I flounced huffily out of the room. If only he knew...how would he treat me? And what was his deepest desire? It was not, could not, be what I longed so much for it to be. As I spotten my path back towards Gryffindor tower, I pictured it once again in my mind. His pale hands in my hair. Those eyes, like ice, looking into my own. The taste of his kiss, that I would never know, and the all too familiar taste of irony, the taste of having Draco Malfoy as my deepest desire.
Draco Malfoy once again sat himself cross-legged on the cold marble floor. He gazed longingly at the reflection. "Oh, Hermione," he whispered, watching himself hold her tight, "If only you knew."
FIN
Well, that is the first ending to Erised. I know it's short, but original the first and second parts were together because there was no second part. Anyway, second ending coming very quickly!!!!!!!!!1 Please R&R, especially my friends who know who they are (I know that one of you doesn't read Potter, but you could at least oblige me!)