Review Thanks: Thank you trixy14 for reviewing and just being enthusiastic about my story... your exuberant expressions are noted. Thank you Princess of the High Lands for commenting on title, and yes, I will update one way or another. acosta perez jose ramiro, thank you for complimenting how well the characters are... and thank you for correcting me on my spanish, I had a feeling you'd do so if I was wrong (that stupid spanish/english dictionary is confusing!).

Ch: 8
Sheen POV

Now you must see what Sheen is doing and his point of view. And you'll see why he wasn't with the two at the end of the last chapter. We'll go to the part after Sheen calmed down at the park.

Sigh. They just don't understand. They don't understand with their puny minds that, not only is the awesome and super neat Ultra Lord always right! But, also that my very smarter idea is... the most smartest idea! Yea. I feel sorry that they don't understand. Hey, is that peanut! Cool! I wonder what it tastes like... Hey there's another! And another! Sweet, all the peanuts I could eat! This rocks!

"Sheen, where are you going?" Jimmy calls at me, and he sounds angry... I can't tell.

I yell to him, "There's a peanut trail! I think a elephant came through here! No, no wait! The slimy creature from the other dimension dressed in a tutu is disguised as a elephant and put this peanut trail for us to follow! Bad peanuts!" I drop the peanuts. Bad, evil peanuts that lead to our doom!

For some bizarre reason, Jimmy lowers his head and shakes it and sighs and stuff. He's weird. Well, thinking he's the boss and all he told me to come back! He's just so bossy imagining he's the boss of all bosses and all that! But, I had nothing better to do, so, I listened. Admittedly, he's normally right, but I like putting up a fight.

Oh yea! I forgot we were going to search for people, even though they heard me state that the other dimensional creature girl thing came and abducted everyone because he felt like it. Anyway, I keep following them. Why? 'Cause I feel like it! That's why! Well, and 'cause I want to see if they're gonna get abducted by the creature. But, only 'cause I believe he's real will I not be abducted. Yup. Oh no! There's the peanut trail again! We ran into it! Jimmy, Carl! Turn around! Oh, right. He he. I was just thinking that, I actually have to yell for them to hear me. Ahem. "Jimmy! Carl! The peanut trail! We can't go this way! He'll be waiting for us!"

"Sheen," Jimmy sighs again. Carl just stands there all dopy and stuff. Jimmy continues, "We're following the trail because a human left the trail. No creature from another dimension." HE'S WRONG! SO WRONG! Although... Those peanuts sure were tasty... and salty... now I'm thirsty! Evil peanuts! Making me thirsty and stuff! I think I'll have another! I keep chowing on the peanuts which make my throat dry and itchy. I stop when Jimmy looks behind to me and glares at me and then yells at me. I couldn't hear him because I was chewing so loudly, thank goodness. He's really annoying when he shouts. Kinda funny too, 'cause his voice sounds all weird.

Anyway, the delicious and wicked peanut trail led to a huge castle like building. Well, actually it went around the castle like building and behind it... where we find... THE OTHER DIMENSIONAL CREATURE DRESSED AS NICK! Stay back evil thing! I have a, a... peanut! And I know how to use it! Uh, okay, yea, that was lame. Nick just stares at me while I'm in attack position, pointing a peanut at his nose. "Dude," he says in his 'I'm way cooler than you' tone, "What're you doing?"

"It was, uh, Carl!" I blame that dopy kid and hide behind him, afraid of the creature that looks like Nick. That theory, actually, sounds kinda stupid! No! Wait! Bad Sheen! Calling this fact is calling Ultra Lord stupid! Which it's not! No matter what everyone in Retroville says! Sniff. Even my dad is getting out of being a fan of Ultra Lord. Getting too caught up in his job. Pf. He'll get back into the wonders of fandom. Did that make sense. Hey look! It's Nick!

"...It's really weird how Brooke just came and claimed everything hers. She gave everyone in the city little jobs and tasks. Last I knew, she was heading for the jail cell," Nick says. I just laugh, and he looks at me with a weird and amusing face. "What?" He asks.

I say, "You call her Brooke! It's Nissa, dude! Nissa! Calling her Brooke is so weird. You might as well call her Frank!" Everyone looks at me weird again. I am now taking it as a compliment, 'cause everyone gives me a weird look almost daily. The next thing I knew, I'm following Jimmy... again. Where, I forget, I wasn't listening. It couldn't be that important. So, I play with two peanuts. One is Ultra Peanut! And the other is Peanut Fiend! It's kinda lame 'cause they're just bopping their heads together as fighting. But, I keep doing it 'cause Carl seems to enjoy watching. I think he thinks that they're dancing llamas. Sheesh! Doesn't he realize that the world does not revolve around LLAMAS! He's way too obsessed.

Oh no. He's falling on the ground to sleep again! Gah! Kick him! Kick him! Which I do. Not that Carl gets up or anything. Jimmy, we must leave Carl and... "Jimmy, we must leave Carl and go to wherever we were going!" I wave my hand in front of Jimmy, not getting the response I expected.

"We'll just get him up!" He said quickly, as if in a rush. I was expecting a 'We must leave Carl and go wherever we were going!' Yup. I saw it on this cool movie once! It had six movies to the story line! It's, like, the only thing I kinda like. Ultra Lord is so on top!

Jimmy starts to drag Carl as I watch. Jimmy tilts his head to the side. Dunno what that means. He tilted his head directly in front of me to a big oak tree. So, I run towards it, jumping over Carl and I stop when I get there. When I look up, Jimmy yells to me as he walks towards me, "I tilted my head so you would come and help me drag Carl!"

"We don't need to drag Carl!" I explain. "Hey, is that llama?" Carl jumps up and runs all over the place screaming "Where? Where?" So preditabol (predictable). So, after all of us three dudes walk over to the jail when Carl scares the life outta both Jimmy and me, saying, "Hey, look! People!"

I look over to where Carl points and I see people, too. "The slimy creature of the other dimension has disguised himself as Nissa and he brought his four friends along to look like Betty, Beautiful Gorgeous, and two guys holding 'em! It's a set up I tell ya! A set up!" I warn them. I feel something on my foot and look down. Cool! A rat! So, I announce, "Hey look! A rat!" Jimmy quickly ran through what's going on and what we need to do. It was boring, and, hey, where'd the rat go? Oh, it went down into the drain!

Jimmy then asks us, "Okay, so you know what we're going to do?" Carl nods, and I do too, so I don't get yelled at and hafta hear it all over again. I just missed the end. That's all. And, I must think, that is a stupid idea. Getting caught on purpose! Yeesh! As they run away, I lift the drain thing that goes down to the sewage system, yuck. I see a little ledge on the end and I go down to it and start walking. It's really dark and smelly, and ooh! More rats! Hey, there's a baby one! I could use that when playing with my Ultra Lord action figures! But, I amazingly...ly ignore the cool rats and keep walking. I've been down here dozens of times after dropping a coin down here on accident.

Finally, I leave the disgusting, gross, and disgusting sewer and end up outside Nissa's castle, just as I planned. No, seriously, I wanted to end out here. SERIOUSLY! Stop denying it! I've used this way many times to get to school if I miss the bus! Anyway! The sewer thing is right outside the left, or right, side of the castle, I forget which. But, anyway, on this side, there's a big hole in the castle which is a air dut or whatever. I climb through it. I stop. I look left and right and forward and stuff. I don't know where to go, it's different then the school air dut. I sniff, and there's a tingling in my nose. Uh oh. Ah, ah, ah-CHOO! Ugh. That is so gross. But, the echo is totally sweet! Five seconds later, the echo stops. Bummer.

"Hello?" A voice! A unfamiliar voice! It's coming from the left! Go towards the voice! No, wait! Other dimensional creature! Go the other way! No, wait a sec. What if it's not the other dimensional creature thing? Hmm. There's only one way to find out and it's not by running away! Deep breath, Sheen. I crawl to the left towards the voice... gosh, I hope I don't have to go to another dimension to dance the polka. That'd be just... actually, I don't know what that'd be. Anyway. Finally, I see a light, like, the light you find inside houses, not the sun kinda light. And when I reach the barred thing that separates me and the room, I shout, which was probably unnecessary, "Hey! Open this thing, will ya?" And I coulda been more politer, huh?

But, that voice comes back, and a huge face suddenly comes up, scaring me to death. The voice of a older lady, 'bout in her thirties, says, "Okay..." Ah! She took out a screwdriver! She's gonna hurt me! I'm sorry lady for not being nice. Don't hurt me! I'm only... let's see... seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven... elven turning twelve! Please, just leave me alone! No way! She has cheesy chips! I don't know what kind, but, hey! They're chips, with powdered cheese on 'em, and I want 'em. The next thing I know I'm running into the room and running for the bag of cheesy chips. Yes! What brand is it? Ah! No! These aren't cheesy chips! They're, GASP! Sour cream and onion. Gross. I drop the chips. Then I remember, after looking over at the lady standing there with the barred thing that she just took off with her handy screwdriver. "Can I help you?" She says.

I almost forget she's there as I examine clothes designs on the wall. Oh yea! She was talking to me! "I'm here to help save everyone from evil Nissa!" I smile a smile that of a hero.

She kinda smiles, but, in that way that means 'you're kidding, right?', y'know? "Save? Evil?"

"Oh, no! She's brainwashed everyone!" I say. I then decide that I'm wasting my time talking to her. So, I go for the door and open it. And you know what I saw? LIBBY! My girl, Libby! "Libby!" I say.

"Sheen? What're you doing here?" She has pretty eyes.

"I'm here to help save everyone frm evil Nissa!" I smile a smile that of a hero... again. "What're you doing here?"

"I'm Brooke's advisor, and I'm here to talk with Sylvia. To help her design some clothes for Brooke." Wow! How does she not have pimples? Smooth skin! No fair!

I step aside to let my Libby in and do what she needs to do. I just realized that I don't know what I'm supposed to do, now that I'm in the castle. Huh.

Me: Hi! Side note: I do like sour cream and onion chips. Okay, so, what did you think? Sorry if ya expected it to be a little more amusing. But, please tell me what you think. Anyone, please! Compliments, critiques, insults, whatever ya got, I can take it! And, if you do review, please no cussing or indication of cussing, thank you!