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Reviewers- Rogue641- I'm glade you like it and thanks for encouraging me to put it back up love ya' always sis!
Whitedino- thanks you're the first person to tell me my grammar isn't that bad. Your right it would be one harsh of a wake up call to find yourself in a whole different forest lol! Writing is my way of expressing my feelings and it's basically apart of me so you can say I'm writing from my heart and soul. Well thanks for you wonderful review it got my spirit back up about posting this; I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Nightmare Alley- believe me when I say I know what a flame is. I'm not talking to people who offered me advice I'm talking to the people who told me they hated my story and just said my grammar was the worst they have ever seen, they said this without telling me were I went wrong or how to improve to me that's not giving advice. By the way love your name and thanks for trying to explain anyway.
Linette- I am not trying to make my character a pity character! Alright now that that out of the way I would like to thank you the minute I read your review I realized I was wrong handicapped people can't run but they can hobble quickly. I said run because I have a handicapped friend who has almost the same disability as Faith and she doesn't say as you put it hobble quickly she always says she runs so that's why I put it like that I wasn't really thinking about how people will get so technical about it. For now on I'll put it like that so I can avoid anymore people being mad at me. Thank you again and as for a beta I have no idea what that is, I know they help with grammar but I don't know how. Could anyone tell me please?
J.R.R. Toliken- Um okay, from what I can figure out about that I guess you don't like the first chapter sorry if you don't, everyone has their on taste so it's fine if you don't.
Chapter 2 What happened
Faith woke up in a very beautiful room; she sat up and thought to herself. / Oh man I've died and gone to Middle Earth. / She was so caught up in her own thoughts, that she didn't notice there were other people in the room watching her. But she did notice however that her crutch was on the other side of the room, and there was a tremendous pain in her left arm.
"Oh man just my luck." She whispered to herself and tried to get out of bed without her crutch, she fell as soon as her she stood up but was caught by someone.
"You should be more careful milady." He said as he set her back on the bed. That's when she saw him; he had long blonde hair, pointy ears, and the most beautiful blue eyes. Just then two other figures came out one has dirty oily brown hair brown eyes and regular ears, the other man had long dark brown hair brown eyes and pointy ears.
"Welcome to Rivendell milady. I am Lord Elrond this is my house." the man with brown hair and pointy ears said.
"Uh… Hi." Was the only response Faith could come up with she was scared. Somehow the name sounder familiar but she couldn't figure out where she had heard it before, a number of question where running though her head. How did she get there? Who were these men? Could she trust them? More questions floated in her mind until she suddenly heard another voice.
"What is your name milady?" ask the man with regular ears.
"Faith… Faith Jensen!" she stuttered
"How old are you Lady Faith?"
"Thir… thirteen!"
"I am Estel foster son of Lord Elrond!" said the man with regular ears, he had a gentle but weary smile on he seemed to be wondering if he could trust her.
"And I am Legolas prince of Mirkwood!" said the man with blonde hair, he had the same look on as Estel the only one in that room who didn't have that look on was Lord Elrond like he knew something the others didn't, like he knew exactly what was going on.
"You have… have point… pointy ears!" She stuttered the same way she has been through out the small conversation that has taken place so far.
"Aye I am an elf, you also have pointed ears!" Legolas inquired with a bit of humor in his voice.
"I've always had those, my mother did to I thought it was some kind of weird family trait." She said finally pulling herself together enough to speak normally
"Wait a second, elves don't exist!" she said realizing what he had just said.
"But yet two stand before you now, and you also being one should know the existents of them." Said Estel very confused of who this girl was. Faith just shook her head trying to figure this all out until yet again someone pulled her out of her thoughts.
"Where do you hail from Lady Faith?" Faith looked Estel as if he asked the strangest question ever.
"Hail?" She questioned "Do you mean where am I from?"
"Aye I do"
"Well I'm from a small town in Michigan."
"I do not think I have heard of any place called Michigan in Middle Earth." Stated Legolas confused this girl was very strange in his eyes.
"Middle Earth!" Faith laughed "Isn't that a place in a book?" That when she realized it she was in the Lord of the Rings world, but how she got there was still a mystery and as much as she loved the book she was still scared, she somehow knew this was no dream.
"No Lady Faith it is a real place and you are in it, we will leave you to rest now you are still recovering from the arrow womb." Faith totally forgot about that as the stabbing pain in her arm came back to her.
"I am very sorry for that." Legolas said as he left with Estel, Elrond lingered behind.
"Do not worry young one all will be explained in time to you and to them" With that the elven lord blew out the candle and left the room. Leaving Faith to contemplate to current situation.
A/N- ok I changed a lot in this chapter I reread the one I put up last time and found it a bit cheesy, I was only 13 myself when I wrote it and it really was my first shot at writing I hope this on captures a more realistic reaction from Faith and the others.
