MP: Thank you Yimi Makuya for your awesome review. AS for writing tips, well all I can offer is come up with a character then insert them into a situation.
Now Kenji take it away.
Kenji: MP does not own Yu-Gi-Oh but owns her OC's
Kenji POV
Big sis showed me to a house on Memorial Street and told me that it was just non-sense that kept people away. Inside the ghosts explained about who they were and what the eye was. It was so cool! It's one of 7 they said and big sis had one of them called the puzzle. They said she solved it at the same speed as the ghost called Sakura. "Kenji, want to see you room?" said Hikari. "Sure." I said sorta shocked. I'd only seen 2 bed rooms. She lead me to the second floor where there were 4 rooms. "There are 2 guest rooms here and a bathroom plus your room. Sakura and Haru will be with you during the night to keep an eye on you." She said.
"What about you?" I asked. "Don't worry, I've still got Yami to keep me company." She said and I could see a faint figure next to her. "Good now you want to see the room?" she asked. I nodded. She opened the door and I saw a room that looked like it had never been touched. "Neat huh? I found all the rooms but the kitchen and living room like that. Air tight and not dust. Sakura popped in and saw it had your favorite colors. She said her best friend Sarai would stay in that room." She said. 'Some one called?' said a voice. A girl with blonde hair and blue eyes suddenly appeared. 'I'm Sarai Ishtar, at your service.'
Hikari POV
'SARAI!' Sakura yelled and tackled the new ghost in a hug. 'Long time no see. Hi Haru, so you found each other again. And who's the Sakura double?' :Who are you calling a double? I'm her great-great grand kid.: 'Grand kid or not you still look an awful lot like her' 'Hikari this is Sarai. Sarai Hikari. This little boy is her surrogate brother Kenji.' 'Hiya.' She said. "SO how long have you been haunting here?" I asked. 'Long enough to know there are 5 mediums in domino with out an items assistance' :Me, Takeshi, Kai, who else: 'The Girl who is destined for the necklace, Haruko. And some wacko lady.'
I bet I knew who that was. "So Kenji you hungry?" I asked. He nodded and we walked down stairs. I saw Takeshi arguing with 3 more ghosts. "What does my house have a sign painted to saying 'Please haunt me'?" I asked. 'Hikaru' 'Gabriel' 'Anna'. They said the two blonde boys and the brunet girl. 'Leila couldn't make it. She went to heaven a long time ago and Alex is haunting Kai. So you were the only other mediums in town.' Said Hikaru. "Wait a sec you're my great-great- grand father!" I said. 'Aki's Great-Grand kid? Zach was alive? Wait a sec, did you possess him?' Sakura whistled. 'He touch the 3 gods what was I supposed to do let him die?' 'Good point' he said. The boy ghost with green eyes said, 'Look we don't mean to barge in but with the millennium Age starting once again and all we need too. We're here to help the holder of the Puzzle. Namely you, Hikari.' :;.So it really had began again.;: 'Hey Yami, long time no see.' said every ghost present, excluding Sakura and Haru.
They all talked while the only ones alive in the house, namely Kenji, Takeshi, and I ate some ramen. I heard a knock and knew no ghost could do that. I got up and answered the door. "Kai? What do you want?" I asked. "Can you get rid of her?" he asked pointing to a girl version of Kaiba form those magazines I had read and knew who she was. "No can do cuz, she's our great-great- grandmother. Alexandra Kaiba." I said. "What's you call me?" "Cuz. Your mom is my dad's sister. Well was my dad's sister he died in an accident." "No wonder mom was sad all those years ago. But still can you get rid of her?" he asked.
"I can't. Like you I can only see em. Want to meet the rest of the great, great grand parents? They're inside." I said actually being nice to Kai. He followed and saw the ghosts inside. "How do you sleep at night?" "There used to be only 2. Sakura and Haru. Then Hikaru, Sarai, Gabriel, and Anna showed up. They will be leaving to haunt some where else when ever we want to sleep right?" I said. 'Don't worry. We'll be haunting on the roof.' Said Sarai. "When you do keep it down." 'Well lets go there now. Don't want to talk about the past with 4 people who wouldn't under stand present. Takes too long to explain things.' Said Anna. And they all went through the ceiling to haunt the roof. 'Be back later Kai!' yelled Alex. He groaned.
"Welcome to my nightmare." I said. he laughed actually looking 16 for once not 25. "So you don't hate me or anything? I was a jerk at those arenas." He said. "Nope. You were trying to look good to the other rich guys." I said looking directly into his light blue eyes, which had a lock of chocolate brown hair falling into them. "You're right." He said. Kenji had decided to like him because he asked, "So will you be my cousin too?" "Oh Kai, this is Kenji. My surrogate little brother. Kenji this is my actual cousin." Kai laughed and the cold mask he'd always worn was cast aside. He like Kenji a lot and Kai knew how to play the base guitar very well, to Takeshi's delight.
He was also the next best vocalist we'd found so far so we had him join as well as Kenji since he had a good voice too. "You sure you want to Join Kai?" I asked. "Sure. As long as I don't have to dress up like a French noble man or any noble man for that matter." He said. "Well since you and Kenji are my only family you could try the Egyptian style, or Arabic style. Or you could be different and do Chinese style." I said. "Chinese sounds good but what about one of those names?" he asked when he heard we went by different names in the band. "Lets see. Kanji we'll call Yami since I go bye Yamiko. You wouldn't mind being Hei? It mean's Dark in Chinese." I said.
"No problem." He said. "Oh and since you two are my family you'll have to get black wigs for this." "Wigs?" "Yeah, the others picked the costumes while I was doing other things like kicking the stupid rich guys' butts." He laughed. "Yeah they keep saying, 'I'm going to beat the Akuko some day'. It makes me laugh." "Evil Child? Those guys have lost it." "You're telling me." Said Kai. 'Well they only respect you because you own that arena Mr. Head president of the Neo-Kaiba corp.' said Alex. "You're that smart?" I asked. "Yeah." He said. "Then you're paying for your own costume." I said. "If you get one and want any designs we only allow silver. We rehearse tomorrow at Takeshi's house. I'll meet you at the dueling arena to show you the way." I said. 'Be careful!' Yelled Sakura as he left. 'Don't worry, I'll be fine.' He said.
I found my self yawning and looked at my watch. It read 9: 55 PM. "Takeshi, you'd better go home if you want to get in be fore your curfew." I said. "You're right. Come one you 3 time to leave." He said to his 3 ghosts. (Sari obviously had chosen to stay here.) They all appeared and they all waved good bye to the 3 staying here. "Alright. Sakura, Haru, Sarai you will keep an eye on Kenji if he has a nightmare comfort him or get me up. If anything happens get me up. Got it?" I said to them and they saluted. I rolled my eyes.
:;.They mean well.;:I know Yami. I know: I help Kenji get ready for bed (there had been a pair of small pajama's in here from Zach's visits to his Grandpa Haru.) I settled Kenji in. "Ok you need me tell one of these 3 and they'll get me up. Anything you want from them ask, alright?" I said. He nodded and hugged me tight. "night little brother." I said. "Night sister." He said and he laid down. I headed down the stairs smiling. Nothing could go wrong now right? I was so wrong.
Third Person POV
Hikari went down stairs into her room(The one that had once been Sakura's) and laid down. She fell asleep and had a strange dream.
Hikari's Dream
She looked around and saw a Pharaoh walking along with a brown haired woman. Between them was a little girl who looked just like Sakura. 'Temna…….' A voice echoed and the little girl looked around, for she was suddenly alone. 'Temna………..'
Hikari woke with a start. 'What was with that?' she thought. She sat up and saw a glowing light coming from the hall. "You shall no longer linger." Said a low voice. 'Hikari needs me!' I hear Sakura yell. "No human needs a ghost." I open the door and see her and Haru in a net of light :Yami, we have problems:;.What kind of problems?.;: he asked. :Ghost banisher ones, they're trying to get rid of Sakura:;. Let me take over. I might be able to do something about it.;: he said. :Hope you can. YU-GI-OH:
Yami blinked and saw she was the same height of Yugi. He entered the hall and Sakura noticed the difference but the guy didn't even notice Yami Hikari's presence. "Leave her alone." Yami Hikari said. "No, this is for your own good." He said. "Then banish me too." Yami Hikari. The intruder noticed the puzzle. "Spirits require a different spell." He said. He cast a spell, Yami Hikari jumped in front of it, and all went black for both halves. Hikari woke up. She saw 3, solid, forms next to her. One was Yami, and the others Sakura and Haru. She stood up and went into her room to change.
She came out and the trio was awake. THUD THUD THUD! Kenji and Sarai ran down the stairs. "We have issues." She said. "You said it." Said Sakura.
