Sorry It took me a while to update. I had a chapter, but I didn't like it so I had to start over but I got writers block. Tony and Michelle are in this chapter a lot (they're my favorite characters :) ) Well anyway here's ch. 3.
Tony- Michelle we didn't go in yet, it's not too late to leave!
Michelle- (practically dragging him)- Come on Tony. We need to help (opens door) it's just for to- (sees Carrie)…day…is that…oh my god it is… um, well I'm, sure they called a ton of people today so-
Tony- Hey wasn't Carrie first on my list of bad CTU memories?
Michelle- Shut up and let's leave before Bill-
Bill- Tony, I see you haven't chickened out. (much happier) Michelle, great to see you!
Tony- (angry) Why we here?
Bill- Someone's in a bad mood. What's up with you?
Tony- Three words- Carrie, Brad, you
Bill-… Chloe show Tony and Michelle to their stations.
Chloe- whatever…
Bill- (all peppy) Turn that frown upside- down!
Chloe- scowl
Carrie (who is a dumbass) finally notices Michelle is there.
Carrie- (thinking) omg she's not fired! What am I gonna do? I didn't think of ways to piss her off yet! I can't remember what I used to do. ( wow this is a lot of thinking for Carrie…) oh yeah… Hey Michelle how's Danny?
Michelle- Why are you talking to me?
Carrie-Why didn't you get fired and I did!
Michelle- because you suck and I don't
Carrie- I worked hard all day when the nuclear bomb went off and you made out in a hall way.
Michelle- Stop complaining I don't either. Neither do Chase, Kim, and a bunch of other people, but unlike you we weren't fired.
Carrie sulks and walks away, because her attack backfired. Michelle grins evilly.
Somewhere else in CTU…
ring
Tony- Hello
Jen- Omg Tony what are you doing at CTU.
Tony- Why are you calling CTU?
Jen- Fyi I'm dating someone there… Miles. (haha that's kinda funny)
Tony- Miles… oh, yeah he's the old creepy bastard from Homeland! He must be desperate…
Jen- You dated me.
Tony- I was an alcoholic.
Jen- Just put Miles on the phone.
Tony- Hey is there a desperate old guy named Miles here?
Jen- (under her breath) bastard…
Jack- Never fear, SuperBauer is here.
Jack has a post-it note with SB in cool letters on his head.
Bill- Jack, there's something I need you to do.
Jack- Yeah?
Bill- First of all, take the post-it note off your head.
Jack- right…sorry.
Bill- I need you to take out the girls on Laguna Beach.
Jack- Like on a date? Bill, I'm dating Au-
Bill- NO! Kill them you idiot.
Jack- Oh…Why?
Bill- Because they're prettier then me. (strikes a pose)
Jack- Can I use the sniper?
Bill- Sure.
Jack- COOL!
Tony- Why does Jack always get the cool missions?
Bill- What, are you jealous?
Tony- no.
Bill- You always copy Jack. It's kind of annoying. You're such a poser. Poser Boy!
Well, there's chapter 3. I'm not updating till I get at least five more reviews. In your review tell me who is your least favorite 24 character and your favorite so I know who to make the next chapter about mostly. (dead or alive characters) I have a cool idea. I may do a chapter with all the characters who I'm actually keeping dead. (just a thought)