Okay soooooo sorry bout the VERY VERY VERY long absence.. Got distracted
by various things but I plan to get back on track w/my writing.. Okay so
here goes..
I would like to dedicate the remainder of this story to roswellachick who will hopefully continue her insightful reviews as well as to WolfWhite1588 and friends who were persistent in trying to get me to update.. Okay that's really it. here goes.
So we left off (a long time ago) with two voices chiming in on a future claim to Sophia. also Sophia made a date w/ Paul and Luke isn't very happy about it..
Sean walked down the strip to the movie theater. Luke had ordered a "get together" b/t the teen wolven pack to talk about the Paul situation.
"That was sooo stupid Sean, you shouldn't have broadcasted your thoughts so loudly.. He has to know you want her.. so what maybe I could overtake him I mean with Sophia on my side that could be a possibility." Sean thought to himself.
"Careful Sean, you broadcast kinda loud when you're distracted." Presley warned him telepathically.
(Switch to opening credits and music, blah blah blah.. scan to movie theater w/ Sophia and Paul talking and Luke and his friends a few rows back.)
"Okay Paul, so this whole relationship thing is defiantely appealing I mean wow." Sophia said as the opening credits of the movie rolled..
"I am so excited to hear you say that I think that we could be great together."
"shh movie's coming on"
(End of movie and Sophia, Paul, and the pack walk out of the theater)
"Hey Sophia, and Sophia's friend," Sean yelled down the aisle with a snide emphasis on "friend"
"Oh hey Sean, guys," Sophia said hoping to get out of there soon.
Paul, seeing how uncomfortable Sophia was interjected on her behalf. "Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but Sophia and I have to get to work on our project so we'll catch you guys later okay?"
"Right, have fun" Presley said while draping herself around Luke who simply shrugged her off and started to go after them.
"Man not here." James, member him. the nice wolf, said as he grabbed luke's arm.
"If we weren't in public I could hurt you right now." Luke thought to James.
"But you know I'm right dontcha?"
(Scene ends with Sophia and Luke locking eyes as Paul pulls away in his car w/ Sophia in the passenger seat).
Okay I know it was a little below par but I'm rusty and working on getting back on the horse.. Give me a chapter or two.. As always reviews are great and insights are even better.
Thanks
I would like to dedicate the remainder of this story to roswellachick who will hopefully continue her insightful reviews as well as to WolfWhite1588 and friends who were persistent in trying to get me to update.. Okay that's really it. here goes.
So we left off (a long time ago) with two voices chiming in on a future claim to Sophia. also Sophia made a date w/ Paul and Luke isn't very happy about it..
Sean walked down the strip to the movie theater. Luke had ordered a "get together" b/t the teen wolven pack to talk about the Paul situation.
"That was sooo stupid Sean, you shouldn't have broadcasted your thoughts so loudly.. He has to know you want her.. so what maybe I could overtake him I mean with Sophia on my side that could be a possibility." Sean thought to himself.
"Careful Sean, you broadcast kinda loud when you're distracted." Presley warned him telepathically.
(Switch to opening credits and music, blah blah blah.. scan to movie theater w/ Sophia and Paul talking and Luke and his friends a few rows back.)
"Okay Paul, so this whole relationship thing is defiantely appealing I mean wow." Sophia said as the opening credits of the movie rolled..
"I am so excited to hear you say that I think that we could be great together."
"shh movie's coming on"
(End of movie and Sophia, Paul, and the pack walk out of the theater)
"Hey Sophia, and Sophia's friend," Sean yelled down the aisle with a snide emphasis on "friend"
"Oh hey Sean, guys," Sophia said hoping to get out of there soon.
Paul, seeing how uncomfortable Sophia was interjected on her behalf. "Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but Sophia and I have to get to work on our project so we'll catch you guys later okay?"
"Right, have fun" Presley said while draping herself around Luke who simply shrugged her off and started to go after them.
"Man not here." James, member him. the nice wolf, said as he grabbed luke's arm.
"If we weren't in public I could hurt you right now." Luke thought to James.
"But you know I'm right dontcha?"
(Scene ends with Sophia and Luke locking eyes as Paul pulls away in his car w/ Sophia in the passenger seat).
Okay I know it was a little below par but I'm rusty and working on getting back on the horse.. Give me a chapter or two.. As always reviews are great and insights are even better.
Thanks