All right guys…. Here is the revised chapter, well it's actually what I originally wrote…but, yeah…I didn't think you guys would like it…. so I guess I'll let you guys be the judge of that. So please tell me what you think…. and if you don't like it…. well…I told you! Laughs Maniacally
Here are the quotes! Enjoy!
"Just whistle… I'll be waiting for your whistle." Chapter 1
"Yuna… it's been five years… when are you going to move—"I know. I know I should…I just…can't right now." Chapter 1
"Get the fuck away from me Wakka or I'll shove some firaga right up your ass." Chapter 2
"Her name is Yuna, she used to lived here, but I'm not sure if she's still here? Do you know her?"
"Nope…never heard of her." Chapter 4
"It's 2:00 in the morning Rikku, I just got back…this better be important—"He's back." Chapter 5
"I watched you walk away once! Please don't do it again!" Chapter 6
"Don't worry baby…tonight it's just you and I." Chapter 7
"Are you serious? Little Yuna, is going to start acting hard now? Get over yourself. Stop being jealous." Chapter 8
"Just smile Yuna…when things get hard…No matter how tough it may be…just smile."
Chapter 9
"You want to hit Lenne where it hurts? Your weapon is right in your hand!" Chapter 9
"He wasn't that high when you dated him…actually he was higher, especially that day in the cafeteria. I'm sure he had a few feet on you, seeing on how you were on your knees." Chapter 10
"She is not your damn girl…stay the hell away from Yuna." Chapter 10
"I promise Shuyin…this will is the last time…please forgive me…" Chapter 11
"How's Yuna—"That's none of your business." Chapter 12
"I never wanted to hurt you Shuyin—"You're so damn fake! Just like Lenne! You are just like them all. You think you're the shit so you can play around with other people's emotions! I loved you Yuna, how could you! Bring your damn pretty little head out of the sky, and realize that it isn't all about you!" Chapter 12
"He was pronounced dead earlier at the scene…he was killed instantly upon impact." Chapter 13
"How…could this happen? It was…it was all my idea. What have…what have I done. I have killed Shuyin…and now…I'm killing Yunie…I'm a murderer— Chapter 14
"Yuna…you must wake up…I don't…I don't know if I could live with myself if…you died without knowing…that I love you. Chapter 14
"I have an image to protect Lenne, so keep your damn head on straight!" Chapter 15
"Damn…it's all my damn fault…if I…if I only listened to you—"If you only did listen to her…it would all be different right?" Chapter 16
"Didn't either one of you think to drive?" An awkward silence diverged between the two. "Well…uh…" Chapter 18
"I must tear away from you Yuna. There can be no us…there will be no us." Chapter 19
"Rikku…Lulu…I'm leaving tomorrow for Besaid. I am going to attend the University there. I…need…to get away. I don't believe I will be coming back." Chapter 19
"Rikku…please…just let me see her—"Tidus…you only cause her pain…she has had enough, why do you insist on hurting her…when you know…it can never be…you…both together…can never be. So please leave…let her go." Chapter 20
"Then why…why are you marrying Lenne…if Seymour is—"Rikku…I am still in love with her, I know my obligations, but that doesn't mean all of my feelings have been erased." Chapter 21
"Well…I'm not—"Do you lie often?" Chapter 21
"What…are you saying…you don't know anything—"I know that your running from something…don't give up little Yuna…I once did…biggest mistake I ever made." Chapter 21
"I…wont be my father…I am not my father…I will not…I can not abandon my family." Chapter23
"You…know nothing about my father…don't ever…don't you ever…say that again!" Chapter 23
"The baby…it isn't yours…it's Seymour's…he planned it to get to Yuna…that's why I thought it was safer for her to leave…away from him…not you." Chapter 23
"Kick his ass Tidus!" Chapter 23
"Tidus…please—"Get the hell out of my way. I have no longer any commitment to you." Chapter 23
All right…. here is chapter 24! Enjoy…hopefully! LOL!
The room was silent, an unnatural silence. All that could be heard was the slight ticking from the clock that sat upon her vanity. The ceiling fan whirled whimsically, and the feathers could be heard tousling around beneath, inside her pillow. Her eyes fluttered open only to stare solemnly toward the ceiling. Propping her self back onto her pillow she looked ahead to see Rikku slouched back in her chair, covered with a small blanket, sleeping heavily on the arm of the chair.
"How…did I get here…am I home?" Sliding from beneath the covers that had been heavily laid upon her, her bare feet graced themselves with the cold wooden floor, sending chills up her legs. Now fully standing she glanced to Rikku.
"She looks tired…I don't think I should wake her." Turning back away from her she took a few steps only naturally to stop before the mirror. Raising her right hand to touch what she hoped was a mirage she trembled. Her lip had been busted, and now swollen. The right side of her face bruised, as if she had been hit into something. The strange colors of purple, yellow-green, and blue illuminated from what was once beautiful ivory skin. As she clenched her face in pain the memories from the former night flooded in.
She had been waiting for someone to rescue her, to save her from Seymour's grip…but no one came. The pain was so immense she collapsed onto the ground as the Seymour was violently ripped away from her. Falling to the ground she witnessed, through blurry eyes as the two men exchanged blows, fading in and out she soon lost all consciousness. The once loud crowed now dimmed to a mere whisper, then to nothing at all.
"Get the hell out of my way…" That voice sounded too familiar; as he held her in his arms she slightly raised her eyes.
"This can still work Tidus!" The woman yelled standing not too far away.
"Lenne…how could you? I never thought you would do something so…so horrible." Tears had welled up into Yuna's eyes, slipping gently from her wet eyelashes. When the worst was believed to be over a strong voice surfaced from behind them.
"Give her back to me…give my girl back to me." A small pressure was applied to Tidus' hand as he held her. Looking down he looked into Yuna's swollen eyes, full of fear. Shaking his head he looked back toward Seymour.
"She'll never be your girl…ever." Turning around there were several attempts to halt Tidus as he pushed forward, but none seemed to affect him as they fell on deaf ears.
That memory still lingered and she thought to herself, "So…it wasn't a dream…it couldn't have been…" Looking away from the mirror she clenched her eyes tightly shut, attempting to erase that horrible night. Walking through the doorway into the hallway she turned, slowly descending the stairs. Before stepping from the last step, a cool breeze swiftly drafted beneath her feet. Looking up around the corner she found the door stood ajar. Confusion stirred within her, and with haste she made her way toward the door shutting it tightly, bolting it shut.
"Why…was that door open like that?" Turning around she then walked to the kitchen, but a shadow soon followed, sending chills down her spine, the hair on her neck stood, unsure of whether to turn around or not.
"Who…who's there?" She whispered scarcely. With no reply her eyes scanned the room once more.
"Father…are you home?" Still with no reply she considered it simply to be just her imagination, and turned around once more entering into the kitchen. As the presence lurked around her once more she grabbed the butcher knife firmly in her palm from the knives holder.
"Who's there? Show yourself! I know someone is there! Stopping hiding you…you coward!" Searching the prior room she saw no one, all she felt now was the cold, steel bottleneck of pistol pressing firmly into the back of her neck. The knife echoed as it dropped to the floor.
"Now…I wouldn't say coward…" Attempting to move the mysterious man pulled her hair, shoving the pistol harder into her neck, pushing her body into the wall.
"Didn't anybody tell you not to make any sudden moves in situations like this?" His voice cold, firm, stiffening itself into metamorphosis. The pain from his jolt caused to bite down on an already swollen lip, causing it to bleed once more. The blood cascaded down her chin and into her mouth, leaving her exhaling spurs of blood.
"Get out…of my house—"I don't think you are in any given situation to be giving me orders." He whispered mischievously into her ear.
"Then what do you want? Money? Well then you'll have to wait for my father." Yuna hissed with a tone of sarcasm toward the man.
"Money? No…that's not what I want—"Then what do you want!"
"Do not interrupt!" Taking the back of her head, pulling her hair, slamming it into the counter top she fell to the ground turning over to see him…Seymour. Pointing the gun to her head he smiled wickedly.
"You just couldn't let him go…could you?" He hissed with disgust, "What does he possess that I do not? Please, do tell. I am dieing to know?" Looking up toward him she laid leaning up on the back of her elbows.
"Tidus—"That's right! Tidus! Mr. Hotshot right!" Leaning down he pressed the pistol hard into her stomach, whispering into her ear.
"All…I ever wanted was you Yuna…if I can't have you…then neither can he. I will never allow you to be his girl!"
"I will never be your girl Seymour…. ever!" With that she spit into his face, raising her knee high enough until he groaned in agony. Rolling over he attempted to fight the pain as she scrambled away. Making her way through the kitchen he caught her foot pulling her back. She attempted to grabbed hold of the doorway, but only slipped further away from it sliding across the kitchen floor closer toward him. Struggling to pull away he locked his hand tightly around her thin ankle to the point where she herself thought it would break. Screaming in agony he cupped her mouth.
"Shut the fuck up! I know your cousin is upstairs…sleeping right…how would you feel…if she never woke up?" Uncapping her mouth she laid silently.
"That's better—"What…are you going to do?" Licking his lips he smiled as the saliva glazed her cheek. The thought was nearly sickening that his lips were touching her.
"I told you already—"I will never be yours!"
"Oh…Yuna…Yuna, I know that…but…you'll never be his either." Taking the pistol, he pressed it into her temple. Cringing her teeth, he continued to stare intently upon her.
"It really is a shame…I'll give you a chance to beg for your life if you want?" With spurs of blood she echoed back.
"Never…never would I stoop so low…" Smiling in dismay he cocked the gun back, his hand rested on the trigger, allowing the anticipation to eat her alive.
"Bye love—"Yuna!" A yell sounded from beyond the front door.
"Are you home?" The voice continued. Jolted his head toward the door, he could see the spiky blonde haired boy standing outside through the side window.
"Shit…" he mumbled beneath his breath, as Yuna desperately attempted to shout out, but Seymour quickly smacked her across her bruised face with the handle of the pistol.
"Don't you make a sound! Do you hear me?" He said nearly choking her quiet. Struggling to breathe she gazed back to see the knife she had dropped lying some feet away. Gazing back up Seymour awaited Tidus' departure. Then realizing that Rikku was still home wondered to himself if Tidus might wake her.
"Maybe I should take care of both of them…doesn't look like I'm going to have a choice…damn you Tidus!"
"Tidus! Help me!" Yuna yelled catching Seymour off guard.
"Shut the hell up!" The door began to budge as Tidus slammed his body up against it, now well aware that Yuna was in trouble. Stumbling through the door he scanned the room, only to see her foot being jerked away. Running closer he turned the kitchen corner, now standing face to face to Seymour's pistol.
"Revenge is sweet…don't you think Tidus?"
"How did you get in here!" Laughing maniacally he answered.
"After you left to the pharmacy…to get Yuna a potion or two, I just slipped in. Didn't think you'd be back so soon."
"What did you do to her!" Glancing down to Yuna and then back to Seymour he demanded an answer.
"She is just knocked out…no need to panic…she isn't dead…yet that is." Shaking his head reluctantly he denied his accusations.
"You won't kill her—"Oh won't I…I was only a trigger away…before you came." Glancing down once more Tidus realized that Yuna had begun to move once more, continuing to indulge Seymour into conversation he smirked.
"So now what…you going to kill two people? You going to kill us Seymour." Grinning to himself he nodded, thrashing the gun about.
"It looks like I have no other choice…" Tidus shifted his eyes briefly once more to Yuna. She stared wide-eyed up toward him reaching out with the knife she held firmly in her hand. With a quick motion she sliced through his heel, releasing a moan of pain, and worse the sound of a bullet exploding from within the barrel. It was too late the trigger had been released. Both men stood before each other neither one moving. Screaming she cried.
"No! What have you done!" With one swift moment Seymour fell before Tidus, blood pouring from his mouth onto her kitchen floor. His gun sliding away from his hand. Alone Tidus stood solemnly holding a pistol at waist level, in the state of shock. Jumping up from the floor Yuna pushed Tidus away back into the living room.
"I…killed him—"He tried to kill you! It isn't your fault!" Looking back into her eyes he snapped away from his trance like state and pulled her closer. Holding her for a moment he pulled away.
"We…should call the police." Nodding she turned and lifted the phone from the receiver.
"There's been a murder…we were attacked…" Tidus collapsed back onto sofa as Rikku ran down the stairs.
"Yunie! What are you doing?" Tidus jumped from his position to shield her eyes, calmly explaining the situation. Stepping back she nodded. Slowly peering to the kitchen she saw Seymour's hand, cold, blue, stiff, and turned back to the staircase, not being able to watch. After Yuna hung the phone back up she ran to Tidus' now comforting arms. The warmth of being held was soothing; the mere idea of being his girl…was comforting.
The Yevonite police arrived shortly with their summoner to send the body. Taking in Yuna and Tidus' story, they took their notes and were on their way. The idea that Tidus had killed a man had not been fully emphasized. Rikku, Yuna and now Tidus all sat in the living room looking coldly at the dry blood that remained on the kitchen floor. Standing Tidus broke the silence.
"We need to get away from here…I need to get away from here." Turning to Tidus Yuna shook her head fiercely.
"No Tidus! You can't leave me…not again—"Actually…Yuna…I kind of wanted you to go with me. You'll be graduating in about a month…we could go to Besaid…that's where you always wanted to be…right?"
"You…remembered that?"
"Of course I remembered…that's the only place you ever talked about when we were little…I could never forget." Tears had now welled up into her eyes, and overcome with joy she smiled. Running into his arms she continued to cry. He belonged to her, and she to him. It was how it was meant to be. Rikku attempted to be happy for them, but couldn't help but burst into tears. She was so happy, and the light at the end of the tunnel seemed nearer than before. Holding onto one another with no thought of letting go. Clenching his shirt she pulled him closer, embracing he leaned closer to whisper into her ear.
"Just cry…whenever things get to tough for you to handle…just cry…I'll be here."
The End
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