Ok, so once again thanks you so much for the great reviews, and I'm glad you like the story so far. I have taken into consideration all of your points and I am thinking that maybe it would be possible for me to turn this into a Rogan, perhaps using some of the idea you guys gave. So thank you for that.
Please keep reading and reviewing the way you have, fantastically, and well, enjoy…..
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Part 4 'Pretty Face'"Luke look at this magazine, I mean come on. She is so much more than this" Lorelai wandered into the diner, talking to herself. She sat down at the counter looking around for Luke
All of sudden Luke popped up from behind the counter
"What are you doing?" Lorelai asked
"I'm looking for something" Luke answered as if it were obvious
"Down there?" Lorelai looked strangely at Luke
"Yes down there"
"Why?" Lorelai questioned
"Because something I needed was down there" Luke answered standing up straight
"But why did you put it there, I mean then you have to bend down, and your beautiful girlfriend could come n, me, and think you were gone, so then she might go jump off a cliff" Lorelai explained
"Well id catch her at the bottom," Luke remarked sarcastically "What are you doing with that magazine," Luke held up the magazine to show the front covered with a picture of Rory
"I'm reading it" Lorelai answered plainly looking at Luke as if he was stupid
"No" Luke snatched the magazine off Lorelai
"What?" Lorelai looked puzzled as Luke folded up her magazine
"No" Luke repeated
"Again, I hear you but I don't understand you" Lorelai reached over the counter to grab her magazine
"Your not allowed to read this" Luke protested
"Why no, its just a magazine!" Lorelai shouted
"Yeah, a magazine that you see on the stand every day, and you walk past it every day, and then it makes you cry everyday. I don't want you to read it. Me and Sookie have spent the past 5 years steering you away from that magazine stand, taking the long way around town to go places, just so you wouldn't see whatever magazine had a picture of her" Luke held the magazine up to Lorelai and pointed at Rory's face "On the cover of them" Luke's face was turning red and Lorelai knew he was getting mad. But she also knew he wasn't mad at her, he was mad at Rory.
"Well, I know that, and of course I appreciate, more than words could ever say, but this one is different. Yeah the cover is a picture of Rory, but inside is an article about her kids. Yeah my grandchildren, the ones that I have never met, seen of know nothing about. Until this morning, I didn't even know that Rory had kids. Yeah I knew she was famous, but that I it. I've never seen any news about her, no newspapers, magazines or TV shows, because you Sookie or someone else in this place had stopped me. But I want to know about them. Did you know that Levi, he's four. That's four years of his life I've missed. Dylan he's 3, and he carries this giant stuffed bunny around everywhere with him. And Eden, she's 3 months old. 3 months old, she so cute and her face, she looks just like me. And Rory, Rory, she said that Eden looks like me, in plain black and white, she said, "Eden looks exactly like my mom" and then when they ask her about me she says, "can we please move on". And the thing that gets me the most is that you, you and Sookie, probably knew about these things, in fact I know you knew about them. 5 years and you dint think that I deserved to know that there are 3 of my grand children wandering around in the world, that I didn't know about. And you and Sookie, you didn't even think that I deserved to know! Yeah, I was upset, but this, this just makes me realise how glad I am that I left you at the altar!" Lorelai grabbed the magazine from Luke and stormed out of the diner, all eyes following her as she left.
Luke looked around the room to everyone watching him, and he realised, that he had made a very, very big mistake.
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"Mommy, can I stay a bit longer. Adam was going to take me fishing!" Levi begged. It was that time again, the time that Rory must part with her boys for another 2 months
"Sorry baby, but you know the drill, Daddy's orders" Rory smiled, shrugging it off "Adam can take you fishing next time" Rory handed Levi his backpack and followed him out of his room and down the stairs.
"I don't want to go back with Daddy and Benny, can I stay here with you?" Levi pleaded
"Sorry sweetie, mommy already explained to you how it is, if I don't take you back to your daddy, I'll have to go to jail, and we wouldn't want that now would we" Rory tried to smile, but it was hardly visible, she couldn't help but feel that going to jail was worth everything, just to get a retrial, so she could try once again to have her boys back.
"I hate Daddy. And Benny!" Levi shouted as he ran out of the house, down the drive and into the long black limo that waited on the driveway.
Jack came along the hallway carrying Eden and holding Dylan's hand.
"Bye Mommy" Dylan kissed Rory's cheek and then hugged Jack. Jack nealt down for Dylan to kiss Eden's sweet little face. Dylan waved at them and ran into the car.
"Don't worry, they'll come around" Jack brushed the hair away from Rory's face and kissed her forehead gently.
Just as Rory was about to shut the door, Levi ran in.
"I'm sorry Mommy" Levi jumped up into Rory's held out arms and she kissed him on the forehead, then hugged him tightly before putting him back down. Levi ran over to jack and gave him a hug, followed by a hi-5. Levi to, kissed Eden's soft face, then ran out into the driveway, giving a wave, Levi got into the car.
Joe waved to Jack and Rory as they shut the door. Rory heard the car drive away.
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Ok, so short chapter and no flashbacks, but I didn't feel there was anywhere to put them here. Please keep reading and reviewing, and I will post again whenever I can!
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