I guess it took me quite some time to write the second chapter, considering the fact that it's not gaining too much review. We all know that reviews motivate us to write more, right? But here I am, a newbie, is making the continuation of the story. This one's a little bit shorter than a typical chapter because I want to make a story that will never be forgotten by the readers. So some part will be the same as what you anticipate but some chapters will make you say, "Dang! It's too short!" There's going' to be a big twist so expect some puzzling scenarios. I hope you got the picture. For those who reviewed this long time ago, thank YOU very much.
Errr… I forgot the names of some characters like the members of Ren's family and so on. SO please bear with me… And…, if there are typos, I'm sorry… XP
"So his happy days are over ei..? Pitiful," Ren's father said, glaring in the pitch black color of the sky.
"I never thought that his plan would bang," his wife said, busy writing some ancient text in the empty space of the air. "Should I make the first step?"
"Go ahead then," Ren's father said, summoning the souls of their ancestors, making an deafening sound, slashing the space right before their eyes and making a chasm in the endless space.
Ren's mother's done. She clapped her hand on the text she just wrote, making it glow. Even more startling, it discharged a light going in through the vast hole.
Meanwhile, in Yoh's place…
"Mistress Goldva, Yoh has arrived," Silva shouted, pointing to Goldva who seemed to be in a deep thought.
Silva paused wondering if there are problems that occurred when he was away. "Mistress Goldva," he said weakly.
Suddenly…
"Get back!" Goldva screamed.
A wavering light coming from nowhere smashed the Great Spirits emitting a strong force that swept away Yoh and the others. But Goldva remained standing, trying to open her eyes against the radiant light that eventually imbibing the Great Spirits.
"Wha…. What's this….?" Yoh screeched.
"Mistress Goldva!" Silva could hardly see what's happening and searching for Mistress Goldva.
Little by little, the light vanished, same as the Great Spirits…
"Hm?" Mistress Jeanne awed.
"What is it Mistress Jeanne?" Marco was startled by her reaction. But Mistress Jeanne was speechless.
"The…. Great Spirits," Hao said weakly. "I can't feel their presence anymore."
Mistress Jeanne and Hao wondered, looking at the same direction…