To all my readers:
You're gonna think I'm a real S#& for this, but I'm going to take some time to do some revisions. The main plot will still go the same way, but some things I added in I find too tacky to stand, most of it regarding Takashi in the future (as in present day at the well and all that) and I'll also be adding a few things hopefully. By the way, I'M SORRY I'M SUCH A LAZY B$. Homework stinks in the life of a writer.