I don't like anymore this story...
I wrote the first and the second chapter in Italian, and they turned out like four pages each one. Sooo good, this in English is like crap compared to them...
Well, I will write the chapters anyway, just to finish, but don't hope something "very good", because I really can't...
I would give you an idea of my "Italian writing", but probably NO ONE know Italian... why I'm not English???
Anyway, if someone would know my "Italian chapter one" (it's a little different from the English one), I will put that in the next chapter, a special chapter or something like this... write if you want that chapter in the review: "yes, pleeeeeaseeeee!!!!!" or "no, don't want that. I don't like Italian craps", or "yes, I'm curious!", or "You're crazy? I don't understand Italian, why I would read something I don't understand??" (You can write these answers, I'll do not offend).
But, ANSWER. I prefer a "no, don't want that. I don't like Italian craps" instead of nothing.
Thanks!
Here we go, awful chapter 7...
7. Lo stesso dolore diviso in due part 1: THAT DAY
Then, that day came.
The weather was not good and not bad: clouds filled the sky, but it wasn't raining. It was breathing a soft, strange, wind... like it wanted to say something, to told something, and they didn't know what was going to happen.
"It's a strange day..."
"Yes, this wind is making my entire body trembles!" Lavi said, smiling.
"I'm serious!! This is not normal... about two day ago, it was snowing! And now, this! I don't like that... there's something familiar..."
"It's your past. Naturally it's familiar"
Allen gave at his friend an irritate gaze "I didn't mean that... I was only saying that maybe it's a day that I don't want to remember"
"In that day, the great Allen Walker..."
"Shut up!!" He wasn't in a good mood... he knew something was going to happen, something very bad, but he just couldn't figure out what day could be. His heart was beating crazily inside his chest, a strange sensation of fear into his entire body, his eyes were looking around to find something... someone. Where were him and Mana? His past seemed to far away...
He sighed, maybe he was just being paranoid, but inside him, in his unconscious, he was scared of find out that maybe... and that maybe he hopefully put it near "no", wasn't that day. That day it was flying a wind like that, but... Why was he so scared? He already knew that day was coming...
"Allen... are you okay?" He cringed, at Lenalee's voice, turning around.
"Don't worry, I'm only a little..." He laughed, nervous "I'm stupid, only this" He walked on.
The girl, gave a worried gaze to him, and after she came to Lavi, whispering "Allen has a strange behaviour... maybe..."
"What "maybe"? He knew that day was coming!"
"But... are you sure it's that day?"
"I don't know, but he was acting strange when Mana slapped him, too, before even known what was going to happen. Maybe... I know for sure, today isn't a fine day"
"Damn... I only hope... it isn't... I couldn't bear to see Allen if today is that day..."
"Let's hope, let's hope. Maybe the little one he's only going to have a discussion with someone!"
"But..."
"Lenalee, stop worrying!" Lavi gave to her a comforting look "It's not like we can do something about that..."
"You're right..."
"What are you two talking about? Laughing about me?" Allen had stopped, and he was looking at them with a frowned face "Well?"
"We weren't talking about you, moron! We're only saying that maybe you can do something about your hair. What about colour it black? No, no, no!!! Pink! What about pink!?"
"You're crazy..." Muttered Allen, going away.
"Hey! Don't run away! Pink is a really good colour!"
"Lavi, stop!" Lenalee said "He's not in the mood, try to understand"
About five minutes later...
"Do you know Lenalee, maybe it's really that day..."
"Please, don't say this, Lavi!!"
"Again!? Why are you two talking behind me like I'm not here?!?!" Allen, angry, yelled, making cringe his two friends "What's "that day"?!"
"Well..."
"I knew sometimes it would come! I knew!" He turned again "Stopping worrying about me and let's go!!"
"Allen..."
"Let's go!"
His two friends sighed... their only hope was the wish that "today" wasn't the day of Mana's death...
Ah, ah... I write in this chapter something like "five minutes later"... I'm sooo pitiful... "five minutes later"... what a stupid phrase...
I HATE THIS CHAPTER!!
I accept "bad" reviews...
:-C AcqueCristalline