The next morning Mufasa woke up and looked next to him, seeing that Scar was still asleep. He looked ahead and saw the King walking out the cave. Mufasa sleepily got up and followed the King. The King was stood at the edge of Pride Rock so Mufasa walked up to him and, hearing him, the King turned and smiled. "One day this will all be yours" he said, looking out over the kingdom.
Mufasa looked over the kingdom "everything!?"
"Everything," the King replied.
Scar had heard Mufasa get up and looked up just in time to see him walking out the cave. He got up and sat at the edge of the cave, watching the King and Mufasa and listening to everything they said. "Why should Mufasa get everything?" he muttered unhappily. He stood up and jumped down the rocks at the side of Pride Rock to the sandy path below.
The King was talking to Mufasa about the Circle of Life and he listened carefully, neither of them noticing Scar getting up and walking off.
Scar didn't know where he was heading, but he saw buffalo in the distance and made sure he avoided them. He kept thinking about how unfair it was that Mufasa got everything and was so deep in thought that he hadn't noticed the four hyenas in front of him and he bumped in to one.
"Hey!" shouted the hyena as he turned round. He was about to say something else, but being faced by a lion stopped him and he stepped back. Scar stood still watching the four young hyenas. After a minute he decided to speak and ask what they were doing, causing the hyenas to look surprised. Lions never spoke to hyenas. Scar wouldn't usually speak to hyenas, but he saw the way the hyenas reacted to him and it gave him an idea. After a short pause the hyena answered and soon the five were laughing and joking together.
Three of the hyenas were unsure of Scar for a while, but the other one seemed happy to be friends so soon they were happy for Scar to stay with them.
Scar started to teach them a few tricks and cool games and the hyenas were happy to learn. By the time Scar left it was getting dark, but the hyenas wanted to learn more so Scar promised to meet them the next day.
When he got back to Pride Rock, Mufasa was just walking into the cave. He heard Scar and turned round.
"Hey Scar," Mufasa smiled "where have you been all day?"
Scar didn't want Mufasa to know about his new friends so he quickly said anything. "Just walking around".
Mufasa looked at him wondering if he was telling the truth. "Oh," was all he said to that before he started walking into the cave. "Night," he said just before he disappeared from Scars sight.
Scar sighed and sat outside the cave, wondering how he was going to explain his disappearance tomorrow. He couldn't let his brother find out. This was something he had and Mufasa didn't and he wanted to keep it that way.
A few lionesses passed and went into the cave. His mother, Uru, was with them and she went up to Scar. "Scar," she said surprised "what are you still doing out here?" Scar stood up.
"I was just going in," he replied quietly, so together they walked in to the cave. Everything fell silent, but how long would it last?
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To zekesbabe
Thanks for the review. I won't ask why you put most of that but I have updated and will update again soon so…I guess I'll be safe.
To Mirage of Sarabi
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To Toshi Furame
Thanks for the review. I'd like to know what the several mistakes were that you found annoying. As for the sentences – I wrote them like that for a reason.
Please keep reading and reviewing!