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After a fit of maniacal laughter, Ganondorf removed his foot. I wiped the mashed potatoes off of my face and carefully stood up. I noticed that Marth was mouthing something to me, and that the room had gone quiet.
I turned around saw Ganondorf and Bowser. I reached for my sword and headed for them. In an instant I had it out. Ganondorf pulled out a sword of his own.
'Just a few more feet' I thought, 'then we'll make contact'. We were yards away from each other when our swords hit. We both slid back from the impact. A second later, I was heading back at him.
I slashed and stabbed at him, but he was just too fast and he blocked my every move. This game of hack and slash went on for what seemed like an hour but I knew we were only going at for about 30 seconds at most.
Someone screamed, 'stop them!' as I turned to dodge a hit. I blinked and Ganondorf was behind me. It was too late to counter so I braced myself for the pain that was bound to come. In a last attempt to stop the blow, I tried to slide behind Ganondorf but I knew my efforts would be in vain.
Just as I thought that all hope was lost for me, a green blur sent Ganondorf reeling. That blur turned into my roommate Link. I noticed that Ganondorf's hand was nearly was twisted and that his nails were black from being broken and from his blood.
Link walked over to me and asked if I was ok. I told him that I was and he walked away saying that he had to report this to the hands.
Ganondorf tried to pick up his sword but found that he could barely lift it in either of his hands. He did manage to snap his fingers to tell Bowser that they were leaving.
On his way out, he gave me a look that I hoped to never get again. A look of revenge.
This is my first fight chapter. I could really use a review on chapters like these because I might add more.