Hi, it's Surfwizard again, and to answer the question, I will pdate when I can as of the fact that I'm doing chemistry right now, so...
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Naruto looked at the man standing in front of him with indifference, "So, apparently not all of Orochimaru's experiments were killed along with him, good, I wanted a challenge."
"Never, Orochimaru-sama is invincible, he couldn't have died." The man shouted, black slowly covering his whole body. "I will kill you for your blatant disrespect of his holiness."
'Damn is this guy brain-washed' Naruto thought, getting into the basic Flare stance. "Well, I'm not lying; I killed him as well as the Akatsuki leader myself. Though, it has been two years since then, so who knows what's happened in that world." And Naruto dashed forward and struck a blow to the now dinosaur-like man, causing a flare of chakra to spread out from the contact point.
"What the hell was that you bastard?" The pterodactyl-man, as Naruto called him, screamed in pain.
"Well, since I want nobody to know my secret tai-jutsu style, I guess I'll have to kill you after this." Naruto said with a pain-promising smile, "It is called Flare style, as of the fact that it is a flare, a punch with gathers energy and causes minor damage, and an explosion of chakra at the correct moment to harm the body's chakra system. Far more powerful than a Hyuuga's jyuuken, but far more dangerous to the user as well."
The man stood up and smirked, "That must mean it injures you, and you're open for an attack, CHIDORI(1)!!" He dashed forward with the blade of lightning in his hand.
Naruto saw in his eyes all the times in which the chidori was used on, at the Valley of the End, in all those battles against Sasuke, and the time when he found the perfect way to counter it.
The marked man smiled as he stabbed his lightning encased hand into the blasphemous blonde thinking, 'Show's him to lie about Orochimaru-tenshu(2) to Kyouryuu Pa-puru (1).' "Any last words?" he said in a tooth decayingly sweet voice.
"Just two, bunshin bakuretsu (3)." Naruto promptly exploded, badly marring Pa-puru's body.
"What the hell?" Pa-puru shouted before he heard a noise from behind to turn around and find a large lightning dragon heading straight towards him. He jumped up to see Naruto standing behind the dragon with a bored look on his face. "Bored, why you, Katon: Karyūdan (4)" And a large fire dragon shot down at Naruto, only for Naruto to vanish in a puff of smoke as soon as the fire beast got near him.
Naruto smugly called out, "Hey, pterodactyl boy, behind you."
Pa-puru turned around with anger blazing in his eyes, "Katon: Gōkaikyū no Jutsu (5)" He called out, launching a fireball three times the size of his fire dragon. Once again, Naruto disappeared right when the fire got near him. Pa-puru looked around, 'Behind, above, not in front, or left or right, which leaves…' "Below" he shouted in triumph as he shattered the already weak ice beneath him. As it all shattered, he fell in and realized the grievous error he made, "Help, I, I can't swim."
Naruto smiled and walked over to offer his hand, only to drop a lead net on Pa-puru, "Say hi to the gay pedophile in hell for me." Naruto saluted with two fingers, then walked away.
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Zuko spun around to do a roundhouse kick to Zhao's face. As his leg was blocked, he grabbed Zhao's head to help him jump in the air and deal a flaming axe kick to that arrogant bastard's face. Zhao rolled under and spun about to deliver a blade of fire through Zuko's eye to find a fist connecting directly with his face.
Zuko jumped back and prepared for Zhao to get up, meanwhile, catching his breath. He stared at Zhao's shaking form, and realized what was about to happen, he jumped out of the way as Zhao shot out a large wave of fire with anger consuming him. Zuko looked at Zhao as he shouted "Idiot, you'll destroy the bridge if you use moves like that!"
Zhao stood up smiling, "Well, at least I'll die killing the Blue Spirit, a traitor to the great fire nation."
Zuko's eyes widened at this revelation, "I did what I had to, to save my honor."
Zhao glared at Zuko, "You should've accepted your life as a faliure, you should have accepted this as your life." At this moment four connected knives flew by. "What the hell was that Zhao shouted?"
"I see you've never seen a Windmill Suriken before." A blonde man jumped down from the roof of a nearby building, landing next to Zuko offering an arm to pull Zuko up.
"I don't need your help, so don't interfere in my fight" Zuko got up on his own, blatantly glaring at the blonde.
The blonde smiled and said, "Okay, but I want to watch, this might be interesting." The man then ran up the wall of a building and sat down, and with a poof of smoke, had a cup of ramen.
Zhao looked at Zuko arrogantly, "You really should have accepted his help; you would need it in order to even have a chance of beating me." Zhao started chuckling, which soon turned into full blown laughter.
Zuko saw his chance at this moment. He ran forward and gave Zhao a punch straight up into the jaw, followed by many successive hits to many other parts of the body.
Zhao stood up wiping blood from his mouth, breathing heavily, leaning against the edge of the bridge. "You little brat," he shouted, "I , I'll kill us both, this bridge will be destroyed and we'll both fall to our dooms, hahahah…" A tentacle made of water shot out and a large fish shaped creature came by.
Zuko looked at the water pulling Zhao in, and saw the avatar at the center. He realized that the avatar must have somehow taken the power of the spirit he heard Zhao babbling about. Zuko ran forward and stretched out his hand, "Zhao, take my hand, I can help."
For a second, Zhao looked as though he were about to take Zuko's hand, then he looked away arrogantly, letting himself go to his death.
Zuko sat on the ground fighting the urge to hit himself. He let a man die needlessly, he didn't like the man, but his uncle had always told him life, no matter whose it was, was precious, and should never be wasted. He thought he heard something behind him and turned around to find nothing, except a strange knife stuck into the ice bridge. A note was tied onto it:
Hey Zuko, that's your name right? Well, anyway, I wanted to say, you fight pretty good, and have a lot of potential, don't let it go to waste. Also, don't let that spirit of yours die, it will distinguish you from people. If you ever need help, go out into an area where nobody is and place some blood on this seal below.
Signed, Uzumaki Naruto,
Espionage and Front Lines Combat Specialist
Sure enough, below the signature, there was a spiral seal with nine marks coming out of it. Zuko looked out towards the sea, and went to where he was meeting his uncle.
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Aang was angry. Aang was not just angry, he was furious. First the fire nation tried invading the Water Tribe, then Zhao killed the moon spirit, and then that mysterious man needlessly killed those people, if Aang saw any one of those three, he would kill them.
Aang, in his anger, didn't notice Admiral Zhao's corpse floating through the fish body that he was controlling. Aang was just destroying firebender tanks, crushing them with water, and spearing them on ice. Aang was about to reach the sea, when he looked up and saw the moon, white and full, and felt the water-like energy making up his fish body flow back to the Pool of the Moon Spirit, leaving him on a broken wall of ice.
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Sokka, Yue, Katara, Momo, and Iroh were standing at the Pool of the Moon Spirit, looking sadly at the dead koi in front of them. Yue took a step forward and picked up the dead Koi.
"It's the end, we're all dommed, nothing can save us now." Yue kept repeating in hysterics.
Iroh turned to Yue with an idea bouncing through his head, "You, you have a piece of the Moon Spirit in you, a piece of its life, you can give it back."
Yue smiled sadly, "Yes, I must do it."
Sokka yelled out, "No, Yue I can't let you. Your father put me in charge of protecting you, if you did that, I would fail."
Yue looked at Sokka with sad eyes, "Sokka I'm sorry but I have to." She then placed her hands on the fish and a light appeared, which caused her to fall, lifeless, into Sokka's arms.
The koi fish, brought back from the dead wriggled back into the pond, and Yue's body vanished. Then a light appeared in the pool and Yue, all dressed in white came out from the pool.
"Sokka, I'll a;ways be with you." She kissed Sokka and vanished.
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Sokka walked up to Chief Arnook and sadly spoke, "You must be very proud of Yue right now."
Arnook sighed, "Very, very proud, and very sad. I knew this day was coming from the moment she was healed by the spirit."
Sokka walked away thinking of how Yue told of her birth, and thinking of how beautiful she was, and wondering wear that self obsessed weasel was.
A little ways over Pakku and Katara were talking, "Me and some other waterbenders and healers were thinking of going down to our sister tribe in the South Pole. It has been far too long since we had any contact."
Katara asked, "But wont Aang need a waterbending master?"
Pakku smiled, "Then he better get used to calling you 'Master' Katara." Pakku walked away leaving Katara with a heavy heart.
Aang walked up to Katara and spoke, "Hey Katara, we'll need to leave soon to get back to the Earth Nation."
Katara did something entirely unexpected and hugged Aang at that comment. Katara turned to the lemur that was standing nearby and said, Sure Momo, you can come too." And the furry animal joined in the hug.
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Zuko was getting ready to leave on his uncle's boat when he heard from behind him, "Prince Zuko, I'm surprised you aren't chasing down the avatar right now." Iroh said in a happy voice.
Zuko sighed, "I'm tired uncle, I just want rest."
Iroh smiled, "Then you should sleep, a tried man needs to rest." However, his thought weren't quite as peaceful, 'That dark energy I felt while battling Zhao, it was pure evil, what could have made that, and why is it here?
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On a cliffside nearby Naruto stood, looking at Zuko and Iroh, not even trying to hide his presence, "You can come out now; I know you're there, Yugito."
A woman slightly older than Naruto with long blonde hair drawn into a ponytail, wearing black standard ANBU gear walked out at the greeting of the man. "It's been a while hasn't it Naruto?"
Naruto didn't turn to acknowledge her presence, "Yeah, I'm assuming you being hear has something to do with the Nibi's power to raise the dead."
Yugito smirked, "Nothing gets past you does it? Well, as for why I'm here, when you banished all the Bijuu, the Nibi tried to stay in this world through my corpse, but that brought me back to life, and somehow, I had the strangth to send it to hell. During those years that you were gone, a great war erupted, and the Bijuu came back from hell. To make a long story short, our world is dead, I don't know how many survived, but right now, we have a long road ahead of us. So I'll see you around sometime, later." Yugito shunshined out using lightning instead of leaves like Kanoha shinobi use.
Naruto smiled as he looked down at Zuko, "A new world, a new start, and most importantly, someone to help, this might just be my lucky day."
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"Iroh is a traitor and your brother Zuko is a failure, I have a task for you."
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The princess had left the throne room and the Fire-Lord turned to someone hidden in the shadows, "Follow her and make sure she doesn't fail, Itachi!"
"As you wish Ozai-sama."
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Well, that's the chapter, they should be getting a bit longer as the stroy progress, once agian, tell me how to improve, and what you want in this story, there will be minor amounts of romance, and a few pairings are set in stone, some in wood, and some non-existant so see ya'.