Anyway, here is chapter 2, I really hope you all like it.
No flames or rude comments, but POSITIVE and HELPFUL criticism is always welcome.
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Chapter 2
Summer Vacation had arrived at last, finally Serena could have a day without having to see that creepy yet kinda cute Auma Sakashi, man he made her skin crawl.
Serena found herself strolling Luna Park and enjoying the bright, warm sunshine.
Darien would have loved walking with her on a day like this, but alas, he had left her and this world due to an illness last winter, it was always hard to think about it.
"Darien…" Serena murmured sadly, staring up at the blue sky, the clouds floating slowly by.
"Serena?" A voice said from behind.
She turned around the see the raven haired, crimson eyed Akuma Sakashi, what in the world was he doing here at the same time? Was it coincidence? Or was it something else…
"Hello, Sakashi-kun" Serena said coldly, hoping he would just go away.
No such luck, he smiled with some kind of hidden intentions, which were most likely as wicked as his smile.
"Please, call me Akuma" He said suavely.
"I don't have time to talk to you, Sakashi-kun" Serena said, and turned away as she began to walk down the paved walkway.
Akuma handsome face grew angry and vicious looking and he lunged out and roughly grabbed Serena's arm with a tight death grip.
"DO NOT WALK AWAY FROM ME WOMAN!" he shouted furiously, attracting attention from other males in the park whom were ready to help if Serena needed it.
Akuma glared at the men and oddly they shied away in fear for some reason and went back to their girlfriends.
He turned back to Serena and grinned with wicked amusment "You will do your best never to turn your back when I speak to you.
Serena stared horrified at Akuma and wrenched her arm away from his death grip, she back away terrified at how he could go from gentlemen to a raving psychopath in ten seconds flat like that.
Akuma merely stood there with a smirk on his handsome face as Serena ran from him as fast as her legs would carry her. Soon, very soon he could put his plans into action…
"Great fire spirits, please tell me what you can about the boy Akuma Sakashi, is he friend or foe?" Raye said softly as she knelt before her blazing temple fire.
It seemed as if nothing would happen until suddenly the fire blazed up to the very ceiling and then died back down.
"What?" Raye whispered in a terrified tone, she had never seen her fire act like that before.
"You should know not to interfere, Princess Raye of Mars" A voice said from behind, but before she could turn around to see whom had spoken all went black and she was no more.
"What the hell happened!" Serena and the other girls demanded as they stood outside the crime scene tape around the Hino Shrine.
"The priestess, Raye Hino was found dead, that's all I can tell you" The officer said softly.
"Please, officer" Amy said, holding the sobbing Serena "How did our friend die.
"It looks as if she was frightened to death, but never actually got to see her attacker, it is very strange" the officer said, telling them only because he felt sorry for the poor dead girl's friends.
"A girl was found that way near our skill, are the murders linked?" Mina asked.
"We aren't sure" The officer said softly.
"Thank you, officer" Amy said, holding back a sob.
Knowing they could do nothing the girls left and went to Serena's house to decide what to do.
(A/N: Hmmm, I wonder whats happening, what killed Raye and the previous girl before her? And what is up with Akuma? Is there more to him than we know? Find out in chapter three! Don't forget to review! I love you all, Ja ne)
