One of our own.
By Katee Shields
Background:
Ziva has taken Kate Todd hostage.
When Kate was shot by Ziva's brother, she was hit with a high tech needle which resembles a bullet and a bullet wound. Alkida scientists created the weapon to drug their victims. Upon impact the drug was released into blood stream placing Kate in an immediate coma like state.
Even though an autopsy was done Alkida had been planning the attact for some time and had previously forced a lady with the same build as Kate to have plastic surgery turning her into a Kate look a like. They shot her in the same time frame, drained her blood and replaced it with Kate's blood type. Took templates of her finger prints and surgically attached those as well. Kate was on the table (Autopsy) for a small period of time. Before Duckie could start the Autopsy Ziva swapped the bodies. Kate has been held in a warehouse, drugged and tortured for the entire time she has been presumed dead. Not only for information on N.C.I.S but also Air Force One.
You see the heart ache of Kate trying to defend herself over and over again even though she had no chance because of the drugs. Her endless attempts to escape and tell her team fail every time, as her every move is being monitored.
Could be a movie length episode creating interest with new viewers.
Is Ziva trying to take over NCIS, And will the team find kate before it is to late.
Possible following story lines:
Ziva on the run.
Kate finally seeing Tony's apartment after getting out of hospital, staying with him till she gets back on her feet. – Sexual tension starts up again.
Nicola ( new character- Abby's sister) working with the N.C.I.S team.
I just wanted to say that this is the script not the story line and for those Ziva fans thing dont always turn out like they might think.
Tony In a night club dancing, spots a girl across the room makes his way over and attracts her eye. They Dirty dance for a little bit kiss. She smiles and walks off.
Intro – title
Flash back. Kate waking up in the warehouse, tired up trying to scream
- tape on month-
Mmmmmmmm mmmmmmm
Tony is down in Abby's lab
So what does your sister look like?
Abby:
Tanned, blue eyes. But Tony if you touch her I will snap of your fingers and feed them to the birds.
Tony:
I wouldn't do that to you Abby.
Abby:
She only got in on the week end. She has been in Australia for the past 5 years studying. But I have not seen her yet, apparely she had to catch up with some old uni friends so she could spend the rest of the time with me.
Nicola:
Hi are you Gibbs
Gibbs:
And you are?
Nicola:
Nicola, Abby's sister
Gibbs:
So you're here for 1 week doing work experience with Abby.
Nicola:
Yes thank you so much
Gibbs:
We bent the rules for you. Letting you come here. Just don't make me regret it. I will take you down to Abby
Both walk down toward the lift.
Gibbs:
Abby I got some thing for you.
Abby:
What is it boss
Abby's sister walks toward her they hug and kiss
Tony:
Family should come more often
Nicola turns around and Tony realize who she is
Nicola:
Hi nice to met you
Tony- smiling
Ah you to
Gibbs:
Dinozzo get back to work
Tony:
Yes boss
As Tony is walking away Gibbs turns and raises his voice
Tony combat training at 15:00 be there.
Nicola:
May I come
Gibbs:
Why would you want to do that.
Nicola:
I've had training
Tony turn around – smiling
This is N.C.I.S not some week end self defense course
Abby signs to Gibbs that she has had combat training and is one of the best.
Gibbs- smiles points to Nicola
You be there at 3:00 pm – don't be late
Tony:
We wouldn't wont to get that body of yours dirty
Nicola:
Don't worry about me
Tony leaves
Nicola:
No way you sign that's so cool
Gibbs:
Back to work on those bodies Abby find out why they keep sending them to us.
Nicola:
So what the story, how can I help
Abby – shows Nicola the two dead bodies on the TV screen
These two men were shot but they both have Gibbs N.C.I.S craved into there butts. So they ended up here
Flash Back – You see Ziva swapping the bodies over before the autopsy you also see them draining the blood and placing new finger prints on the new Kate look a like.
Nicola:
So have you i.d them
Abby:
No we are running it now
Nicola's phone rings:
No boss I'm just on holidays seeing my sister like I told you I was .
Looks over toward Abby- half smiles
No. bye boss. See you in 2 weeks
Abby:
And we have a winner. One of your mystery guys is Mahmaud Montarzar. Man this guy is connected to Alkida. Gibbs is not going to be happy, and this is little brother Ahmed.
Gibbs walks in
What am I not going to like
Gibbs:
Spit it out Abby
Abby:
The fact that these two men are wanted for there Alkida movements
Gibbs:
Great and they have my name tattooed on there ass.
Abby:
Carved Gibbs. That is not art there is no way that classed as a tattoo.
Gibbs:
Ok Abby carved just find out why the hell they are sending them to me.
Abby:
We are running all kinds of test at the moment
Gibbs:
Call me
Abby:
As soon as I know any thing …. Yes Gibbs I know
Gibbs:
Nicola you are with me
Combat training
Abby:
May I come. I want to see her kick Tony's ass.
Gibbs:
Are you sure she can
Abby just smiles
Gibbs:
5 minutes then I want you back down here to finish those test
All 3 walk into the combat area
Gibbs:
McGee , ziva this is Abby's sister Nicola
McGee:
Hi – big smile
Abby frowns
Ziva:
Hello
Gibbs:
McGee, Ziva pair up
Gibbs:
Tony you are with Nicola
Tony:
You sure that's a good idea
Nicola:
This will be fun – cheeky grin
After 20 mins. we just seeing Tony smashed to the floor
Gibbs yelled:
Nicola that's enough back to work with Abby
Nicola:
Thanks Tony, was fun we should do it again. soon
Tony- struggling to speak:
Yesss
Nicola walks pass Gibbs and he whispers:
Don't want to beat him to badly on your first day
Tony:
Where did she say she did her training at
Gibbs:
She didn't
Combat is over Gibbs, Tony, McGee and ziva walking back into the office
Gibbs:
Tony, McGee find out every thing you can about the Montarzar brothers.
Do it now.
Tony:
Tonight
Gibbs:
You got some thing else to do.
Tony:
No boss
Abby walking towards the door. Turns off the light. Nicola runs behind her
Let's go. We have to celebrate
Nicola and Abby out in a club, Drinking, Dancing. Then you see them walking home - Drunk.
Nicola:
Has Gibbs ever lost an agent
Abby:
Once….. Kate
Nicola:
Were you two friends
Abby:
Yes I loved Kate she was great fun. She even went out to Goth parties with me. Why
Nicola:
Just wondering nothing really
They continue to walk home
In the morning Gibbs walks into Abby's lab
Abby:
Oh Gibbs, Gibbs. The boys were most likely shot with there own guns. You see they were wanted over a murder a year ago. While there guns matched, they were infacted in London at the time. So they never got pinned for it.
Gibbs:
Good work Abby, but who would be able to shot them with there own guns.
Nicola:
Some one they knew, or didn't expect to be able to kill them.
Flashes to Ziva knocking Kate out in the warehouse spiting on her. Telling her she is nothing and she is looking forward to the day that she is running N.I.C.S. So I can kill you. Of course after killing the rest of your perisous team first. Kate stuggles but cant get up.
Gibbs – starting to walk away
Good work girls
Gibbs:
Tony what you got for me
Tony:
Nothing they both have been off the radar for over 2 years now
McGee:
I got nothing as well boss
Gibbs:
Find out there last job. Any thing, find it today
Nicola:
Abby can you test there clothes
Abby:
No good. Duckie thinks they were changed.
Nicola:
Test the skin then
Abby:
Yes yes we can do that. Let's go see duck man.
Abby:
Duckie this is my sister Nicola
Duckie:
I was wondering when I would have the pleasure.
Abby:
Nicola had the brilliant idea. Well I don't know why I didn't think of it. Of testing there shin over all to see if it has been in contact with any thing that would giver us answers.
Gibbs – on the phone
Duckie send Abby up. I want to speak with her.
Nicola:
Would it be ok to take swabs from under there nails. I know there is nothing visually there but there might be skin cells
Duckie:
Of course you can, you might even find a killer
Nicola:
That's what im hoping for. Thanks
Nicola takes the test and goes back to Abby's lab, runs the test
Abby walks in
WHAT are you doing
Nicola:
I thought that I might be able to get some D.N.A form under there nails and after running the test it came back with agent Kate Todd.
Flashes to Kate being tourted for information but as she wont tell them any thing they drug her in the hope that she would talk.
Abby stands there shocked
But but
Nicola:
You see I thought if they are sending bodies to Gibbs they must know him pretty well. So started the search with x agents and got a hit straight away
Abby:
It cant be
Nicola:
D.N.A doesn't lie. She must have had contact or been there when they both died
Abby – puzzled look on her face
What
- goes to speaker phone
Gibbs I need you down here now
Abby – talking to herself, walking around in a circle
What to do, what to do
Nicola:
Run the test again to be sure
Gibbs walks in:
What you got for me Abby
Abby:
Not me Nicola
Gibbs:
Some one tell me what is going on.
Nicola:
I ran some test and I found out that the last person to have been in contact with your dead bodies down stairs was ...Kate Todd
Gibbs:
WHAT
Abby:
D.N.A dose not lie Gibbs. Im retesting now
Gibbs:
Call me as soon as you get the result. Don't tell anyone
Point at them
No one.
Gibbs grabs Dinozzo and pulls him in to the lift
Nicola just found out that the last person to have contact with the dead boys down stair was Kate Todd.
Tony:
What
Gibbs:
Just listen
Gibbs:
Now she is rerunning the test but we have to keep this to ourselves if it is true some one has been playing us for a long time. Im serious not McGee Ziva no one
Ziva walks into work late again but this time with a black eye
Flashes to Ziva finding out that Kate killed her friends using there own guns. Ziva goes crazy laying into Kate, even through she was drugged out she got one good punch in
Gibbs:
You ok
Ziva:
Yeah I got hit in training last night, but im ok
Gibbs:
Good, you right to work tonight
Abby on the phone
Gibbs I got something for you
Gibbs walks down to the lab
Abby:
Gibbs its Kate. It is her D.N.A
Gibbs:
Are you sure
Abby:
99.9 sure. We also tested there skin we came up with concrete particles. I would stay they were in a warehouse, storage or some thing like that.
Gibbs:
I got Duckie the body we buried as Kate. He is looking at it now.
Gibbs walks down to Duckie
Duckie:
Well there is not a lot left of her but the blood and her finger prints matched. Some one would have gone to a lot of trouble
Gibbs:
What about the teeth. Show as the teeth x-ray
Duckie put the x-ray up on the screen
Gibbs:
Duckie this is not Kate, She had her wisdom teeth out and Remember when she had to see that hypnotist because of the root canal.
Duckie:
Your quite right….. oh
Duckie:
Some one went to a lot of trouble. Not just that but cost.
So where is Kate
Gibbs:
She is still alive and we have done nothing to help her
Duckie:
Jethro you couldn't have known
Gibbs runs back up stair
Gibbs:
Ziva go and call Kate parents find out if they have had any one hanging around or any thing strange
Ziva:
What, what s going on
Gibbs:
Just do it now
Gibbs walking into Abby lab staring at Nicola
Is there any thing else you can tell me
Nicola:
I think it would have to be an inside job
Gibbs:
What gives you the right or the knowledge to say that
Nicola:
Some one would have to know your movements to keep in front of you this whole time
Gibbs walks out
Gibbs:
Tony find out every factory, warehouse, storage any empty or suss I want to know. Check them out now
Tony:
Yes boss
Gibbs:
Where is Ziva
Tony:
I think she went to see Kate's Mother
Flashes to Ziva Arriving at the airport
Gibbs:
Find her now
McGee:
She is not answering her phone. It's ringing out
Gibbs calls Abby
Find out where that concrete comes from
Abby:
We are already on it boss
Gibbs:
McGee you are with me
McGee:
Yes boss
Gibbs:
Lets go, lets go
Gibbs:
Get Tony on the phone McGee
Gibbs talking to Tony:
Where are you
Tony:
At an industrial area 5 mins away
Gibbs speeds up:
See you in 2.
Crosses to Abby and Nicola in the lab
Nicola:
Can I borrow your car
Abby:
Yes but for what
Nicola grabs the keys and runs
Abby yells:
What are you doing
Nicola keeps running
Nicola rings Abby from the car:
Where did Gibbs go
Abby:
What are you doing. It's no time to…
Nicola:
I can't explain but find out where Gibbs is please.
Abby calls McGee
Where are you
McGee:
No time to explain but we are at an industrial area
Abby:
Good luck
Abby calls Nicola:
Industrial area
Nicola:
I can see there cars.
Abby:
What's going on Nicola I want answers
Nicola:
I will explain every thing when I get back
Nicola hangs up
By the time Nicola pulls up they had already entered the warehouse. She looks around, hears Tony yelling put your weapons down. Grabs her gun which she hide in Abby car. Gun fire starts Gibbs, McGee, and Tony all are unharmed but over powered. Nicola can see them but they can't see her yet. She walks up behind the terrorist leader in charged of the Alkida side and just when Gibbs McGee and Tony start lowering there guns Nicola pulls her tiger back and has her gun pointing straight at his head. Gibbs smiles and raise his gun again. As one of the man goes to take a shot at Nicola, Gibbs shoot him and starts a gun war. Nicola shoots the Alkida man in the head and after a little gun fire the others surrender. Nicola and McGee handcuffed them as Tony finds Kate laying on the floor. Laying on her side so weak she can't even move. She had been attacted by ants and bugs had burses all over her and very under weight Tony bends down and pick her up in his arms. ( I'll be your crying shoulder by Edwin McCain starts playing – from the first course) Kate's head and arms drop back, limp. As he walks past Gibbs, McGee, Nicola a tear starts rolling down his check ( not even looking at the other ) just staring at Kate walks slowly out side.
Gibbs is on the phone
Gibbs:
I need an ambulance now
By the time Tony gets out side to the car park the Ambulance is arriving. He lays Kate on the bed. Whispers in her ear and jumps in the back of the Ambulance with her.
Ambulance offer:
What has happened sir
Tony just staring at Kate does not say a word.
Gibbs walks up behind them.
Gibbs:
Just help her
Ambulance Offers:
Lets go
Gibbs places his hand on Tony shoulder. They then ride off.
Gibbs:
Im going to the hospital. McGee take Tony's car. Nicola follow McGee grab Abby and Duckie all of you met me there.
Gibbs drives off
McGee:
What was all that about, where did you learn to fight?
Nicola:
I would rather not talk about it yet im sure Gibbs is going to kill me.
They jump in there cars. You see them arrive at N.S.I.S they walk in the front door Abby and Duckie are waiting for them.
Nicola:
Kate has gone to Hospital lets go
They all go in McGee car. They drive in silence. They run into the hospital to find Gibbs standing in the hall way.
Gibbs:
The Doctors in with her and Tony is in there to. We just have to wait.
Gibbs- points to Nicola:
You outside now. What was all that about I wan the truth and I want it now
Nicola:
I guess I use to work for the F.B.I in Australia. I was in the office one day when I heard the feed
Gibbs:
What feed
Nicola:
Feed from the terrorist saying they had an agent K. Todd. That they would kill her in 5 days if they didn't receive the money and no one would know because they already think she is dead
Gibbs:
The perfect cover up. No one would know she was still alive until they found the body
Nicola:
Exactly why they were not going to act.
Gibbs:
They were going to let her die to same them time and effort.
Nicola:
Not to mention the money
Gibbs:
Did you know Ziva was behind it all
Nicola:
Yes I did a bit of digging on your whole team before I came over
Gibbs:
Why didn't you say anything
Nicola:
Have you ever let anyone else run your case especially when it involved one of your own. Plus I don't trust any one till I see there aim.
Gibbs:
Good point but why would you risk every thing for Kate.
Nicola:
Abby knew her. She was a human being for goodness sack. I could not just sit back and let them tourter her. And they would not have stop until they got what they wanted if they didn't get it out of Kate they just would of tried some one else in your team. Maybe even Abby just to get to you.
Gibbs:
You said I guess I worked for the F.B.I
Nicola:
Well once they find out about this im gone
Nicola sits down out side and Gibbs walks inside
Gibbs:
Abby go and see your sister bring her in here when she is ready
Abby walks out side hugs her sister
Come on lets go in. you can explain to me later what has been going on. There is someone I want you to met.
Abby and Nicola walk into Kate's room
Kate grabs Nicolas hand
Kate:
Thank you.
Tony looks up and smile
Abby jumps on the bed next to Kate. Tony sitting on the chair next to Kate. Gibbs kisses Kate on the forehead and walks out. Tony jumps on the bed on the other side Nicola is standing at the end of the bed next to McGee. Abby has a hug smile on her face.
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