-1Authors Note (will be taken off)
Hello everyone, just letting you know I'm back! I finally figured out which email account I used and the password. Lol. It' been like what? 3 years and a bit since I last updated. Now looking back at this story I am extremely horrified at its quality, the way it was written, the shortness of the chapters and even worse the review requirements. I could not help but wince every so often and moaned in disbelief that I have written this.
I'm also quite pleased and surprised at the fact that I have received so many reviews! Too bad I never received any emails of them though, it has all been blocked by my school administrator. Oh well. Most reviews complained about the shortness and I definitely have to agree.
So basically, I'm planning to start rewriting the chapters. If you look at Chapter 1 it's already been rewritten. Hopefully its much better. What do you guys think? If you still remember what the original Chapter 1 was like you could compare, or even to the rest of the horrible story! Lily has more character this time and hopefully will develop more and kick ass!
Also, since the pace of the story was moving too fast, I either have to really elongate each chapter to have the same events or it will be pushed back to later chapters or even changing lots of things, meaning the content would be quite different if not completely.
Please tell me fellow readers whether I should continue with this story or leave it perching in the despicable pedestal of incompletion and hiatus? The only reason I was motivated to continue was looking at how many people liked my story (although I thought it was quite horrible), I was touched by how many people have enjoyed it!
So feedback please, to rewrite or not to rewrite the yucky chapters. E.g. is chapter 1 better? To continue or not to continue with this story?
Let me know please, and thanks for your support!
Fir3fly