Author's note at the end…

Well here is the first chapter REDONE! So read, enjoy and review!

! DISCLAIMER: I don't own ANYTHING except the plot and my character (Amber Decosta and her Bitbeast-Kryptonite)

"..." - People talking

'...' - People thoughts

/italics/- Bit beast speaking to person or person speaking to bitbeast

Italics - FlashBacks

(...P.o.v.) - Different points of view

This fic may contain some swearing, so don't say I didn't warn you...


Last time on Dark Past ,A Hopeful Present ...


"Well I see you all have met" Mr. Dickinson said, after seeing their reactions towards one another.

"Well as I was saying I've invited you all today because I would like you Amber to join the Blade breakers" Mr. Dickinson said.

Silence filled the room as those present processed the information. Realization began to etch in Amber as she glanced at the team and at her uncle.

"What" she yelled in outrage as, Kai and Tyson stood up ready to protest, while the others continued to look at Mr. Dickinson disbelievingly.


A Dark past A Hopeful Present

Chapter 3- Is she on the team?


I continued to stare blankly in my uncle's direction. I was stunned and found that the only thing I could utter was 'why'.

He glanced at me saying "Well, you have very good skills and this would best, you traveled the world and bladed many people but I think this would be a great opportunity for you, both socially and blading related".

I continued to stare blankly at him.

"That's bullshit" I mumbled angrily earning a glare from my uncle but I simply yanked a chair towards me and slumped down on it.

I glanced at my 'new team' and sighed. So these were the famous Bladebreakers…'joy' I thought sarcastically before closing my eyes.

"She did beat Tyson" Rei pointed out

"That was just luck" Tyson countered.

Typical...his ego always has to inflate, wonder why he just can't admit that he lost. I looked at my forgotten croissant that was still in its bag and rolled my eyes. Now I didn't even feel like eating…

"I think it would benefit the team greatly, we've also never had a female so it's a new experience" Kenny said blushing at the last part of his statement after he realized what he said.

'I wonder why they are talking about me like I'm not here' Amber thought, annoyed at her sudden 'disappearance' from the room.

"There is a Tournament in Canada and I signed you up for it, Amber should make a great member for the team" Mr. D said

'I haven't been there in a couple of months, although I haven't told anyone that I left there' Amber thought as she saw her uncle glance at her when he mentioned Canada. 'I wonder if he knows' she brooded.

The team and Amber turned their attention back onto the elderly man, now interested in what he had to say.

'This is going to be a long day' Amber thought bitterly before inspecting the team.

Once again silence entered the room for the umpteenth time that day before the Captain broke it.

"Your going to have to prove yourself if you want to be on the team" Kai stated

There was a pregnant pause in the room. Before Kenny spoke, "That's a great idea; I get to see her stats".

Amber listened quietly not caring about her surroundings.

"Who would you like to battle Amber?" Mr. D asked. Amber sat up in her chair thinking over who to battle.

"All" came her reply after awhile.

The Bladebreakers stared at her as if she was crazy; Amber just looked at her blade ignoring the stares that were sent her way.

'She's a girl, just because she won against Tyson doesn't mean she'll beat us, I know she's going to lose' Kai thought

/You should not underestimate her master/ Dranzer told his master.

"Whatever", Kai replied to the girl who was already making her way out.


Outside of the BBA building


The Bladebreakers and Amber were currently gathered around a large dish that was in the basement.

"Are you ready" Rei asked the girl who was currently attaching her beyblade to her launcher.

With a quick nod, she got into the proper stance glancing at all of them waiting for the countdown.

"She's insane" Max whispered as the rest of the team readied themselves.

"It's her choice, if she wants to make a fool of herself" Kai said coldly before signaling Kenny to count them in.

"Three, Two, One, Let it rip" Kenny shouted.

The five bladers released their beyblades, all of them landing gracefully on the dish while spinning furiously.

Amber saw there blades formations and was admired of their skill, although she wouldn't let that get in her way of winning.

I saw Kai's blade head toward mine, while the others circled around me. I grinned under my hood and began dodging there attempts before forming a plan of my own.

I decided to do it the easy way. Take 'em down one by one.

The only thing that worried me was if I would stand their attacks for a long period of time.

/Krptonite/ I called, hearing her growl in response.

/Take them down one by one, weakest first/ I told her while clenching my hands at the powerful attacks that were coming at me.

I looked at the battle and saw that I was surrounded and being pushed about as if it were some game of monkey in the middle.

I saw an opening by Rei and Tyson, and commanded my blade to slip out of there. Seconds later my blade was circling the dish. Kai's blade remained in the middle waiting for me while Max's blade came behind me.

Rei and Tyson's blade made there way on the edge of the dish as well speeding up to hit the front of my blade.

I grinned at their strategy, if I were to avoid being in a sandwich between Max, Rei and Tyson then I would have to pass close by Kai.

/ A weakness is invisibility; make mist which will cover us for a short amount of time. It won't last long because Max's strength is water and Kai's and Tyson's can use the wings of their phoenix and dragoon to simply blow it away/ I informed her quickly before I was attacked.

I smiled slightly as I saw mist begin to cover the entire area. I heard the others mutter and made my move.

I was shocked to find that my plan didn't work, and once again I was surrounded by the four blades, continuing with our nice game of 'monkey in the middle', that we commenced earlier.

They are actually giving me all they got I thought to myself before calling on my bitbeast.

"Kryptonite" I shouted watching her emerge from the blade. The others stared at the bitbeast in wonder. She was beautiful. The phoenix had soft features with a long feather laying on her head, which would rise when she grew angry.

Her color resembled the sun with various colors of red, orange, and yellow blended in with one another.

On her head was a black diamond in-between her forehead and beak.

The others seeing the me calling on my bitbeast summoned their own. All of which emerged in a dominant matter.

I looked at all of them with amazement, these were the four sacred bitbeats, and it was an honor to be in their presence.

/Our first attempt did not work, but we will try something different. We will use the element of snow to slow down the others. Although it won't work on Kai since his bitbeast uses fire/ I told her before tightening my cloak around me.

Snow began to fall and swirl around me and the others. It appeared to be a cyclone and we were complaetly surrounded by it and in the middle of this storm.

The wind began to howl, making it hard to hear anything. The temperature also began to drop several degrees, cause a shiver to run through my back.

The snow then began to fall more forcefully, making it hard to see as well. I distinctly heard the Bladebreakers yell but it sounded like a mere whisper to me.

Once I noticed that their blades slowed down immensely I stopped the attack immediately. I saw them looking around somewhat shocked that it ended so abruptly.

I raised my hand slightly waiting for the power to come to me. "Kryptonite" I yelled loudly, catching their attention.

I felt the power come to me, traveling around my body producing an aura around me, making my cloak billow around me.

I saw the realization enter their eyes as they tried several attacks that would stop my final one. I smirked as I placed a barrier, so that I wouldn't be hit, and so that the power could continue to accumulate.

The attacks then became more forceful, as they continued to chase after my blade which escaped from the circle during the storm.

The battle continued for five minutes with a continuation of forceful hits, and tricks from my bitbeast that would also help slow down their movements.

The power for my bitbeasts final attack was finishing and I looked at them.

"Kryptonite, attack" I muttered as they charged to attack. The blades collided and I felt myself fly backwards and grunted as I hit the wall.

I slid to the ground painfully, unable to move properly. I moaned in pain as I tried to lift myself so that I was on my knees but I found that to be a huge feat.

I looked around but I couldn't see anything, smoke littered the place, making everything invisible. I then shifted my right arm and growled as pain erupted through it. I grabbed my arm and tightened my hold on it, wondering what was wrong.

I removed my hand and saw blood sliding from my palm onto the floor.

I allowed my self to slump onto the floor unable to hold myself as the spasms of pain came through me. I shook and frowned at my foolishness, I should have known that the four would be two powerful of a hit for me to take.

I heard my name being called, but found that the only thing that came out of my mouth was a whimper. How weak...

I felt someone shift my position and mumble, although I wouldn't understand them anyways, there was a constant ringing in my ears making it hard to hear. I squinted my eyes finding my vision blurred as well. As soon as the spasms stopped I would be fine, but until then, I would suffer.

I felt my body being lifted and carried away. I tried to talk but was silenced. So I simply stayed quiet throughout my ride.

While I was being carried the spasms stopped, which made reality sink in slowly. I looked up and noticed that Rei was carrying me. I shifted, catching the team's attention.

Before they could talk, I asked the only thing that I wanted answered. "…who won?"


To be continued…


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