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Rejection chapter 3 "Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu" 2oo clones appear and run to fight Team gai and Sakura while the real Naruto fights Kakashi " So I finally get to fight the great Kakashi." naruto says sarcastically. Naruto charges foward throwing his last five shuriken and his last kunai. Kakashi dodges only to recive a punishing kick to the stomach from naruto causing kakashi to roll across the ground. "Damn it" naruto curses as neji gai and lee charge over Gai and lee run over to kakashi who pushes them aside. "Naruto please I dont want to hurt you" says neji his smirk showing naruto that neji wants to fight him. "I will take care of this kit" says Kyuubi enlongating naruto's nails into claws he runs foward and slashes at Neji leaving claw gashes all over Neji as kyuubis chakra flares into the wounds neji falls fainting from blood loss and pain severity. "So this is the hyuuga clan" says naruto " a scared little girl and a weak boy. hahahahaha. Pathetic." naruto rakes his claws along neji's face making three scars and then he dissappears and survays the area noticing his clones have captured sakura and tenten Gai and lee are back to back with kakashi "Tajuu Kage bunshin no jutsu" naruto wispers then he charges out leading 350 new clones who start to fight with Gai and Lee. Kakashi's and naruto's summonings face off 5 of kakashi's nin dogs Vs Gambunta and two samurai frogs while naruto charges his Rasengan substituting his normal blue chakra for kyuubi's red chakra while kakashi charges the chidori "AARARAGHHHH" yells naruto charging foward with a flash of red "damn" says kakashi flying foward to meet naruto everything flashes black and when its done there is a slight smoke kakashi stands there, his arm through a genin but not naruto. Kakashis chidori driven straight through lee's chest, Nauto Holds both kakashi's legs ripped off explaining why the lightening blade missed Kakashi collapses onto Lee who is now dead Gai stares at lee an odd expression on his face Naruto appears and wispers " now I will let you join your precious youthful student." Naruto plunges his arm through Gai's chest "uraghf" is the noise Gai makes as he dies. Naruto stabs 2 of gais kunai into Kakashi's arms pinning him there then asks " Is this all tsunade sent after me" " Yes..." kakashi stutters "why naruto why?" Because you all treated me like shit I saved the village again and again and again and I was still looked down on as if I was shit. Thats why " naruto walks over collecting Neji, tenten and sakura then thinking who if anyone could follow him... Kiba is stunned Hinata and Shino won't follow they're smart enough to know I will kill them akamaru arms are ripped off, Gai and lee are dead and kakashi is pinned to the ground soon to be dead. Naruto makes a slash across his forehead protecter discardes it and jumps off into the trees.
The next day... Sakura and tenten are tied to trees and neji is lying on the ground too wounded to do anything. Kyuubi you said you could make me more like a demon? thinks naruto to kyuubi "ZZZ..." Kyuubi snores sleeping "KYUUBI!!! WAKE UP!! Naruto mentaly screams" "...what do you want kit? I was sleeping..." kyuubi says sleepily "I want to be more like a deamon and less like a human." naruto says "Go Find a place where you can sleep for nine days." "Um why 9 days?" " I am the 9 tailed demon it takes 9 days for my chakra to transfer into your veins and for you to adapt and change. So I suggest you find a place where you can sleep for 9 days and then train for about 10 after the change. OH and 1more thing if you try this and die I will be reborn in all my power." "thats not good." " Maybe for you." "If I die you have to promise me you will kill Orochimaru." "With pleasure Kit. With pleasure." " I think I will wait till we get to somplace safe to think about the demonic transformation ok Kyuubi?" " Yeah. Now about the 2 girls and the hyuuga. What are you going to do with them?" Naruto walks out of the cave Neji is still healing from the wounds he got, Sakura is still unconsious, and tenten is sleeping. " I think Neji will aid me if I can relese him from the damn caged bird seal, sakura is a medic she might be convinced to join us." "and the Chun-li wannabe" "I honestly don't know, but she never treated me badly so I have nothing against her" naruto walks over to tenten and undoes her buns letting her hair fall out it rests lightly on her soulders and a little ways down her back "wow" says Naruto looking at tenten " she is really cute with her hair down" "I agree also most girls look cute when they sleep."kyuubi states matter 'o' factly Tenten opens her eyes slowly " ow these ropes really hurt... Naruto... please untie me? " tenten innocently asks " No I am sorry but I don't think its a good idea" says naruto to tenten. Tenten suddenly relizes "hey where are my ribbons?" she sees them in Naruto's hand "give me my ribbons" she says "no... I think you look better with out them" he says. she blushes slightly from the statement. naruto crouches down right in front of her their eyes meet he looks like he is going to kiss her "naruto...?" her eyes widen and her head goes limp resting on her shoulder naruto leans closer brushing a light kiss on her lips. "wow" says kyuubi as naruto goes in to the cave and curls up closing his eyes and falling into a light uneasy sleep filled with nightmares of his past.
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Rejection chapter 3 "Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu" 2oo clones appear and run to fight Team gai and Sakura while the real Naruto fights Kakashi " So I finally get to fight the great Kakashi." naruto says sarcastically. Naruto charges foward throwing his last five shuriken and his last kunai. Kakashi dodges only to recive a punishing kick to the stomach from naruto causing kakashi to roll across the ground. "Damn it" naruto curses as neji gai and lee charge over Gai and lee run over to kakashi who pushes them aside. "Naruto please I dont want to hurt you" says neji his smirk showing naruto that neji wants to fight him. "I will take care of this kit" says Kyuubi enlongating naruto's nails into claws he runs foward and slashes at Neji leaving claw gashes all over Neji as kyuubis chakra flares into the wounds neji falls fainting from blood loss and pain severity. "So this is the hyuuga clan" says naruto " a scared little girl and a weak boy. hahahahaha. Pathetic." naruto rakes his claws along neji's face making three scars and then he dissappears and survays the area noticing his clones have captured sakura and tenten Gai and lee are back to back with kakashi "Tajuu Kage bunshin no jutsu" naruto wispers then he charges out leading 350 new clones who start to fight with Gai and Lee. Kakashi's and naruto's summonings face off 5 of kakashi's nin dogs Vs Gambunta and two samurai frogs while naruto charges his Rasengan substituting his normal blue chakra for kyuubi's red chakra while kakashi charges the chidori "AARARAGHHHH" yells naruto charging foward with a flash of red "damn" says kakashi flying foward to meet naruto everything flashes black and when its done there is a slight smoke kakashi stands there, his arm through a genin but not naruto. Kakashis chidori driven straight through lee's chest, Nauto Holds both kakashi's legs ripped off explaining why the lightening blade missed Kakashi collapses onto Lee who is now dead Gai stares at lee an odd expression on his face Naruto appears and wispers " now I will let you join your precious youthful student." Naruto plunges his arm through Gai's chest "uraghf" is the noise Gai makes as he dies. Naruto stabs 2 of gais kunai into Kakashi's arms pinning him there then asks " Is this all tsunade sent after me" " Yes..." kakashi stutters "why naruto why?" Because you all treated me like shit I saved the village again and again and again and I was still looked down on as if I was shit. Thats why " naruto walks over collecting Neji, tenten and sakura then thinking who if anyone could follow him... Kiba is stunned Hinata and Shino won't follow they're smart enough to know I will kill them akamaru arms are ripped off, Gai and lee are dead and kakashi is pinned to the ground soon to be dead. Naruto makes a slash across his forehead protecter discardes it and jumps off into the trees.
The next day... Sakura and tenten are tied to trees and neji is lying on the ground too wounded to do anything. Kyuubi you said you could make me more like a demon? thinks naruto to kyuubi "ZZZ..." Kyuubi snores sleeping "KYUUBI!!! WAKE UP!! Naruto mentaly screams" "...what do you want kit? I was sleeping..." kyuubi says sleepily "I want to be more like a deamon and less like a human." naruto says "Go Find a place where you can sleep for nine days." "Um why 9 days?" " I am the 9 tailed demon it takes 9 days for my chakra to transfer into your veins and for you to adapt and change. So I suggest you find a place where you can sleep for 9 days and then train for about 10 after the change. OH and 1more thing if you try this and die I will be reborn in all my power." "thats not good." " Maybe for you." "If I die you have to promise me you will kill Orochimaru." "With pleasure Kit. With pleasure." " I think I will wait till we get to somplace safe to think about the demonic transformation ok Kyuubi?" " Yeah. Now about the 2 girls and the hyuuga. What are you going to do with them?" Naruto walks out of the cave Neji is still healing from the wounds he got, Sakura is still unconsious, and tenten is sleeping. " I think Neji will aid me if I can relese him from the damn caged bird seal, sakura is a medic she might be convinced to join us." "and the Chun-li wannabe" "I honestly don't know, but she never treated me badly so I have nothing against her" naruto walks over to tenten and undoes her buns letting her hair fall out it rests lightly on her soulders and a little ways down her back "wow" says Naruto looking at tenten " she is really cute with her hair down" "I agree also most girls look cute when they sleep."kyuubi states matter 'o' factly Tenten opens her eyes slowly " ow these ropes really hurt... Naruto... please untie me? " tenten innocently asks " No I am sorry but I don't think its a good idea" says naruto to tenten. Tenten suddenly relizes "hey where are my ribbons?" she sees them in Naruto's hand "give me my ribbons" she says "no... I think you look better with out them" he says. she blushes slightly from the statement. naruto crouches down right in front of her their eyes meet he looks like he is going to kiss her "naruto...?" her eyes widen and her head goes limp resting on her shoulder naruto leans closer brushing a light kiss on her lips. "wow" says kyuubi as naruto goes in to the cave and curls up closing his eyes and falling into a light uneasy sleep filled with nightmares of his past.
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Thats it for this chapter sorry it took so long to get out but I had to change some things and kinda lost touch with the story
again please review critisizem and compliments are all welcome and apprieciated