Thanks for reviewing!!!! 20 reviews, that's pretty good. I am excited to see your reactions at this chapter!!!

-oh, I have decided to add Liz into the story, she is going to be about Lorelai's age, maybe a little younger.

Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you love this chapter!!!

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William opened the door to his apartment, Emily peeking over his shoulder. The door swung open, revealing the relatively clean room. Liz, Luke's 13 year old sister, who was pretty small for her age, lay sprawled out on the couch reading. She looked over her shoulder to see the small group in the crowded doorway.

"Hey dad…" Liz sat up on the couch "Who is…"

"Um… Liz, as you know, it's snowing really hard outside, and this is Emily and Lorelai, and they are kind of snowed in here tonight, so they are going to stay here tonight, ok?"

"Yeah, sure, whatever…"Liz said, disappearing into her bedroom.

"So… that's my daughter Liz…" William explained "What can I say… she's a teenager." But Emily wasn't listening; she was too busy examining the tiny living room.

"Your house is very…. Um, nice, isn't it Lorelai." Emily lied through her teeth, feeling guilty that the house wasn't as nice as she'd hoped

"Sure mom…" Lorelai said, more interested in Luke then the décor.

"Luke, I'm going to close up the store, alright, I'll be back in a little while, ok?"

"Sure dad, that's fine."

"Good." William said, closing the door behind him.

"Um… Lorelai… can I see you alone for a moment?" Emily said, motioning for her to come to the corner of the room.

"What, what's wrong?"

"Have you seen this place! It's unbelievably small and cluttered. And look, I think it only has one bathroom. Lorelai, how on earth do they manage to live here?"

"Mom, listen to yourself, your being a snob! It was nice of him to let us stay here tonight. We're lucky to be here!"

"Oh I guess you're right…" Emily said "Excuse me but I have to use their rest room." Emily hurried off to the bathroom in the corner. Luke and Lorelai we left alone again

"Hey" Luke said

"Hey yourself" Lorelai said, walking closer.

"so…"

"so…"

"yeah.."

"it was nice of your dad to let us stay here tonight…"

"He's a good man with a good heart"

"I can tell…" Lorelai said "It's too bad you didn't inherit that." Lorelai smiled

"You just shut-up" Luke smiled too "Because you are the splitting image of your mother…"

Lorelai frowned "Why are you wearing a baseball cap in the middle of winter?" Lorelai's short attention span showed

"Well, I like baseball, and my mom got it for me… not too long before she passed away… so I always where it."

"That's nice…"

"Yeah…"

"You seemed to be pretty close with your mom…"

"Yeah, I was… "

"I wish I had that relationship with my mom, but we're as different as heaven and hell. If I ever have a daughter we'll be REALLY close. But I doubt I'll ever have kids…"

"Why is that?"

"Me? A mother? I can hardly keep track of myself! If I had a kid she'd be all hyped up on coffee and she'd be running around jumping off buildings, I can't control that!" Luke just laughed.

"Hey! Stop laughing, I am serious!"

"You're crazy!"

"Oh yeah, Butch?"

"Yeah!" Luke, suddenly, without control leaned over and kissed Lorelai, it was so sudden Lorelai almost stumbled backwards, but some force managed to keep her up on her feet.

Liz, unnoticeably walked into the room. "Luke did dad leave to go to…" She looked up from the magazine to see her brother kissing Lorelai. "Never mind, um, I'll just be heading back to my room, I didn't see anything…"

Luke finally looked up and just stared at Lorelai, she stared back at him.

"You're the crazy one…" Lorelai whispered in his ear "…for kissing me…" she smiled and continued to look straight into his eyes.

Emily came into the room. "What in the world is going on?"

"Nothing." Luke and Lorelai said almost simultaneously and as quickly as possible. They both looked at each other and started laughing.

Emily shook her head "Teenagers…"

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Sorry, that was kind of short, but I'm tired and I wanted to finish it tonight

I'll try to update tomorrow (if possible)

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