A/N: Ahh, it is a good feeling to see that your O.C. fanfiction has about 28 reviews for only 4 chapters. I was hoping that it would get to 30 at 3 chapters but I've been getting nothing but reviews in mailbox for a couple of days.

So yeah, let's go back to the scene of the crime!

The Comeback Girl

Chapter 5: Forbidden

Amber POV

"Mr. Cohen, you didn't see anything did you?" I spoke up after a very awkward silence.

"Me, oh nothing, just came in here and saw my son kissing the daughter of my best friend! What are you guys thinking keeping this from us?" Seth exclaimed.

"We were afraid that you guys would get mad." Justin took the words out of my mouth.

"Well I know who would be, your Dad." Seth answered pointing a finger at me. "I remember when you guys were little kids, Ryan said if you (points the figure at Justin) ever did anything to her (points finger back at me) he'll cut my left ball off."

"Okay Dad, only child here!" Justin said making a gross look with his face and raising his hand up.

"Sorry son, anyways, don't worry, I am not going to tell a soul." Seth went on.

"Not even Mrs. Cohen?" I asked.

"She's going to get it out of me I know it but I won't go in and exclaim, 'JUSTIN AND AMBER ARE DATING!' But I just have to ask, how long did you guys keep this from us?" Seth went on.

"Shh!" I blurted.

"Valentine's Day." Justin answered.

"Damn your dad's blind." Seth remarked to me. "So's your mom. God, you know Summer thought she saw it. She just asked me the other day-"

"Okay, Dad? Can we just go home now?" Justin butted in.

"Just wait a moment, I wanted to talk to Ryan." Seth said and walked back out to the front room and up the stairway.

"You think your mom will keep this away from my parents?" I asked Justin.

"Probably not, they been friends since they were fetuses practically. But I am pretty sure that your Dad won't find out for a while that is."


Marisa POV

"Your what?" Ryan asked.

"For about a week I have been pregnant, I was planning on telling you sooner but things popped up and I can't keep it a secret anymore." I said as tears began to fall again.

Ryan moved closer and knelt in from on me looking up into my eyes. "No, sweetie this is great, now all we have to do is turn the upstairs sitting room into the baby's room." Ryan said putting his hands on my arms.

"Your not mad?" I asked.

"Of course not, I have another kid on the way. I hope this one is a boy at least." Ryan said rubbing my stomach with his right hand.

"Oh, I'm sorry is this a bad time?" came a voice from the doorway. Seth was standing there with his right hand up and in a fist as if to knock the side of the door.

"Hey man." Ryan said standing up as I wiped me eyes clear.

"Hey, so I thought I would just come up here and say hi and everything before I took Justin home you know." Seth rambled as he made his way into our room.

Ryan and him hugged and then he walked towards me and hugged me this time.

"So what are you up to?" I asked smiling.

"Nothing, nothing at all. What about you?" Seth answered.

"Well, I'm having," I began.

"We're having another kid." Ryan finished.

"Your pregnant?" Seth asked me with wide eyes.

I could only nod my head in response. "Dude, Marisa that's great congratulations man."

"Thanks." I said smiling again.

"Well, look it's getting late and Justin does have school tomorrow as does Amber, the girl really needs her beauty sleep so I am going to go. By the way, I can officially tell Summer right?" Seth asked.

"Sure." I answered.

"So see you guys later, or you'll see me or me and Summer later." And with that Seth left.

"He's acting weird." Ryan pointed out.

"He always acts weird." I went on.

"But he's weirder than weird today." Ryan said shutting the door behind him and going back to the bed. "Look, let's not think about the whole Theresa thing until Saturday. Okay, I have work, you have work, Amber's birthday is coming up soon. We have plenty of things to think about."

"Like the new baby?" I asked going to the closet and slipping into pajamas. "I am going to need to go shopping for maternity clothes. Maybe I'll do a maternity clothes line next season."

"You shouldn't do that, that will only encourage teenage girls to have sex and get pregnant so they can wear Marisa clothes."

"You say it likes it a bad thing." I said slipping into bed next to him.

"It is, look at where we are right now."


Seth POV

"Hey baby." Summer greeted me as I walked into our room.

"Hi." I squeaked out.

"What's wrong?" she asked.

"Too much." I whispered.

"What?" Summer repeated.

"Oh nothing." I said louder with a smile.

I looked over at Summer who had stopped messing around with the candles over her dresser and looked at me with her hands on her hips.

"What, happened?" she asked.

"Okay, well I guess there is no use hiding it from you, Amber and Justin are dating." I exclaimed.

"I TOLD YOU! I knew it! I totally knew it! Why would they hide it from us? I mean, this is great, wait." She suddenly stopped. "Do Marisa and Ryan know?"

"Um… no?"

"What? Why not?" Summer asked.

"Well see, Ryan will kill me practically. I mean, Amber's his only kid, for now." I said.

"WAIT! What do you mean for now?" Summer asked.

"Marisa's pregnant."

"SHE IS! Oh my gosh, this is so great, you are just a bundle of happy news." Summer ran up to me and wrapped her arms around my neck, hugging me.

"But see," I began pulling her away from me. "You can't tell Ryan about Amber and Justin, because I know Marisa can keep it from him, but look, Ryan will go ballistic when he hears about it. Amber and Justin are both going to tell him soon though."

"Cohen, why?"

"When they were born Ryan said he would cut my left ball off if anything happened between them."

"Maybe he was kidding around."

"See that's what I thought, and what if it comes true? I mean I can't live with or in this case without that Summer."

"Okay fine I won't tell a soul."


Kyle POV

After dinner I began working on my homework when my Mom walked in.

"Why did you have to makes friends with underclassmen Kyle, you're a Junior!" She began.

"Hey, don't make fun of Amber, she's very sweet and one of the only people who actually cares about me. Is this about the weird vibe between you and her father?"

Mom made her way into my room and shut the door. "That's none of your business. Now I don't want you to talk to her, anymore."

"Why?" I screamed.

"Because I said so, I think it would be a bad idea."

"But she's my friend!"

"And I'm your mother."

"But yet you get to meet with her Dad on Saturday for lunch?"

"How did you hear about that?"

"I don't always listen to you, you know."

"Well you better listen to me about this. Look I know you probably don't have any classes with her, so we don't have to worry about that.

"Mom I am not just going to ignore her and I have to go to her birthday party."

"Look, I am going to talk to her father Saturday. Just, don't get attached to her."

"Right, so we can move again?" I asked.

"This isn't about that."

"YES IT IS! I HATE MOVING EVERY COUPLE OF MONTHS, I ACTUALLY LIKE IT HERE AND AM MAKING FRIENDS! YOU ARE NOT GOING TO DESTROY MY LIFE JUST BECAUSE YOU HAVE A CRAPPY ONE!"

"Don't you use that tone of voice with me!"

"NO, YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IT IS LIKE TO NOT HAVE ANYBODY CARE ABOUT ME. NOW WHEN I FINALLY MEET SOMEONE WHO DOES YOU FORBID ME TO TALK TO THEM? WHAT KIND OF MOTHER ARE YOU? I AM GOING TO KEEP ON TALKING TO AMBER, BECAUSE THERE WOULD BE NO USE OF ME AT HARBOR HIGH AND I AM GOING TO HER BIRTHDAY PARTY NEXT WEEK WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT!" I left my room and stormed out of the house. I sat down by the curb of the street. I liked the cool Newport air, and I never wanted to live, even if she made me.

Updating Night for Holly Thompson in Southern California. I couldn't wait to update this story. I mean it is really nice that my first O.C. story is doing so good. So heres to all the reivewers...

ShadeConfidential: I don't really know what to say to a reivew like that. I mean you like my story even through you hate it when Summer calls Seth 'Cohen' and your one of those stupid people who have no life but to correct my grammar. Look, I have said it a million times, I am only human, I tend to make mistakes and miss stuff when I proofread stuff. Look, I know you may now hate me for saying this but people who are just here to make fun of author's grammar have noabsolute lifes. And I don't care if you don't review for me anymore, just because I may not have 'Perfect' grammar is no reason to rag on me, gosh.

SpringSmiles13: Anything can happen in the O.C. Even Theresa kying to Ryan about losing the baby. Even when Amber and Justin are dating and Seth finds out. You know intenionally I was going to have it as Seth didn't actually see it but I realized that it is perfect for what is going to happen next. giggles Don't Ask.

MiaMicheal4EVER: Heck I love the New CD from All-American Rejects too. There are an awesome band that should never die! Like the Killers. Sorry, I'm a big Killers fan too. Thanks for the great review though.

Dogsbody: I don't know what it means by this is barely a sparkler, but I am pretty sure it is good because :) that followed it! Thank you my faithful reviewer and you keep being your sparkler self!

newportbeachbabe: IT'S A SURPRISE! Anyways, I was planning on making it that way anyways so don't get all apologetict (sp?) on me now. Anywas, loved the review and I want to read another one like it soo.

tinydancers17: Please Review More!

Purecoolness: I'm sorry I didn't make it clear until now that Kyle is a Junior. SOOOOO sorry. I hope you understand it now. Thanks for the review and keep reading!

iluvryan: Is this story genius or am I a genius? Or both:) just kidding, loved the review.

kursk: Well now you get to look forward to Chapter 6. Ryrissa is still going strong and will only recieve one downfall with an amazing upbringing in future chapter. RM forever!

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