OK YES I'm updating more and it's going to be a little confusing (and yes to some people it confused me to) so on with the chapter…

Have To Find Kimiko

It was more than a day and Raimundo still couldn't find Kimiko and he really was scared out of his mind. And the note didn't help either. So he tried to reread it:

Pedrosa,

I told you to come and you didn't I guess we have to take matters in our own hands oh well I won't tell you where the girl is but I will give you a hint listen she probably told you a story that happened I want you to think hard and go to the same place that happened in the story she told you got that.

Signed,

Alex

Raimudno slapped his forehead and remembered something that Kimiko told him: the bowling alley an abandoned bowling alley at that.

"I have to make sure it was the one they were talking about and the only way to find out was to go there." He said to himself.

Raimundo of course knew that he was in deep and Kimiko… well she might as well try and escape because she is in deeper because of him. But what bothered him the most was why they killed her father maybe it was from what she told me and they finally got him but he really didn't know.

Damn this place is huge wonder why they abandoned it. Oh well.

"Where are you Kimi?" He whispered to himself.

"HELP ME!!!" Raimundo heard a girl's voice.

"KIMIKO!!!" he yelled while running as fast as he can.

When he reached there he didn't like what he saw. Kimiko was chained up and really beat bad. She was crying and looked like she was close to blacking out. It hurt Raimundo to see her like that. But wasting no time he ran to her and tried to break the chains but it won't budge.

"Come on!!" He yelled.

"Rai look out!!" Yelled Kimiko. When he turned around he got hit on the head with a metal pipe. But he tried so hard to keep his head up and conscious but he couldn't he just blacked out.

Ok I'm going to keep it at that so please review. Oh and before I forget thank you every one who reviewed. It meant so much for me!!