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Chapter 7 – The Rescue
The Group was back on the Backdraft Whale King. Bit was still bleeding very badly. Jack kept trying to stop the bleeding by applying pressure every time it seemed like it would stop it started back up again. The other children were as silent as could be. The twins cowered in fear in the corner with Naomi and Jamie trying to calm them down. Jack sat on the floor against the wall cradling Bit's limp desecrated body. Brad came and sat down next to brad to inspect the Baby. "How is he?"
"His breathing is ragged and the bleeding won't stop." Jack said quietly.
"They've gone way too far. He's only a baby. I can't believe them." Brad said disgusted.
"Yeah well what are we going to do?" Jack asked Brad not taking his eyes of the pale Baby dieing in his arms.
Brad was at a loss for words. He didn't know what to do except wait. Who knows how long that would be. And so they waited. An hour went by and Jack had finally been able to stop the bleeding, by holding Bit's head as close to his body as possible. The pressure lasted so long that the bleeding finally gave. However Bit had lost a lot of blood and was still unconscious.
Leon after looking it over in his head and contemplating it finally decided to approach Bit. He looked at the small body and took one of the cold hands. Jack was very alert with Leon there. He didn't want him doing anything to the Baby boy. But Leon didn't do anything. Instead he sat down and rubbed the cold lifeless hand, watching Bit's face to see if he had any progress in waking him up. However nothing he did awoke him. Bit was still a small, cold, limp body.
Suddenly a loud boom came from down the hallway. And heavy foot steps could be heard Approaching. A grey haired man came down the hallway and looked around cautiously. Everyone recognized him. He was of course one of the Backdraft. His name was Stoller. Stigma Stoller. That's right. Stoller pulled a ring of keys out of his pocket and placed one in the lock hole. He turned the key and opened the cell.
"What are you doing?" the Doc asked "Who are you?" although he already knew who he was.
"Please be quiet I'm getting you out of here!" Stoller said putting his finger to his lips in a motion to be quiet.
"Yeah well we don't trust you!" Leena said rather loudly.
"Please! Shh!" Stoller was worried he would get caught if they didn't shut up!
"Can you get Bit to a doctor?" Jack asked from the back of the group. Everyone turned to look at him. He still held the limp body one arm hanging down, with dried blood covering it.
Stoller was shocked. "Who…?" He couldn't finish the sentence he was so shocked. He walked back to where Jack stood and examined the body. The pale features covered in dried blood stood out the most to Stoller. "Yes I can help him." Stoller said quickly turning and leading Jack out the door. The others hesitated but soon followed.
Stoller lead them to a deserted hanger where there were a few air type Zoids. Leena Mounted herself in one, Jamie in another. Brad took one of the twins with him and Naomi took the other. Doc placed himself and Leon in one and Jack took Bit with him. As Jack was placing Bit in the back seat of the Zoids Running foot steps could be heard. Jack quickly jumped into the front seat and started the controls. Soldiers with guns ran out and started firing at the Zoids. A bullet penetrated the glass but was harmless. Jamie and the Doc had taken off. Bra and Naomi were firing at the guards trying not to hit them but still firing enough to scare them off.
Suddenly the Whale King jolted and sent the guards to the ground. Naomi took off and Brad came up on the screen. "Go I'll cover you!" Brad started firing again at the guards. They started to back off, but soon other Zoids appeared and a Zoids Battle began on the Whale King. Brad fired everything he had at the Approaching Zoids but it was futile. The Large Iron Kong fired a missile in Brad direction. He just remembered that one of the twins was in the back.
Jack saw an explosion from where he was and covered his eyes from the brightness. He couldn't risk staying any longer. He started to head for the exit and started his boosters when he was shot down. His system wasn't frozen but he was having trouble getting up. Suddenly a flying Zoid flew over him and kicked his Zoid into mid air and into freedom. Jack started his Ion Booster and jolted off. Brad came up on the screen again. "I told you I had your back."
"Yeah I guess you did." Jack said with a slight smirk. "I guess I owe you one."
Down below Zoids of all types could be seen. Just then another man popped up on Jack's screen. "Hey there!" it was Bit's brother Reilly.
"Hi." Jack couldn't think straight. How could he tell him that his brother was dieing.
"You okay?" Reilly asked noticing Jack's uncertainty.
"Y-yeah." Jack stuttered.
Reilly was much more serious now. "Where's Bit?"
The dreaded Question. "He's in the back." Jack said nodding his head back to indicate the back seat. He had to be vague he couldn't bear to tell him.
"Is he alright?" Reilly asked rather concerned.
"He…he…"
"He…?" Reilly repeated.
Jack let out a sigh. He was hardly breathing he was so nervous. "You'll have to take a look at him." What else could he say? That the boy was dieing. That he was probably already dead?
"Follow me." Reilly said this then ended the communications. He came up in front of Jack and took off straight. Jack looked back one last time to see the whale king being attacked by hundreds of flying Zoids. He looked ahead and took off after Reilly.
