Maximum Ride is property of James Patterson. Kisha, Deveann, and Adriana Reaper (giggle), Kai and Lisa Ride, George, and Lita are property of ME! Kumali, Static, Raivin, and Tom are property of Jwan!
This is it! The end! I have written this part months before I have finished the story, I'm writing this waiting for Jwan to e-mail me chapter 24. So bored! Anyway, this is going to be extremely fun and I have every intention of creating a sequel with the character's kids. FUN! I just love writing from Adriana's POV. Although it's pretty fun to be Static, too just cuz of his reactions to everything. He might be the coolest guy character Jwan ever made up. Deveann still tops my list. Have you noticed that I might fling in a little "I love Kai!" any where? Well he's definitely runner up.
(The day of the update commentary: Sniff, sniff. I can't belive it's over. Oh well. SEQUEL HERE WE COME! Hm... the name will be a problem but I promise I'll post the sequel tomorrow, so keep an eye out. I hope you guys liked this!)
Deveann's POV
I had to wait even longer. I wished Kisha would just hurry up and have the baby already. She was stressed, annoyed, fat, and she couldn't feel anything so for all we know, Adriana should have arrived by now. I could hear Max screaming in the room next to ours. Twins. Kisha desperately wants to feel the horrible pain that having Adriana should be giving her but she can't and she's ticked about it. Apparently not being able to feel anything at all is far worse than feeling excruciating pain. Kumali had already had her daughter, Raivin, who was "perfect in every way" so say Kisha and Nudge. Nudge had a boy six months ago, his name was Thomas. He was pretty tall, but then, his father was extremely tall as well. Static, Gazzy and Lita's son was to be born next week. I hesitantly opened up the door. Kisha was just staring at the ceiling, crying. "I'm so bored. I want to have a daughter, just one daughter and I want to be able to feel the tears on my face but I can't do both at the same time?" She sighed, hearing the creak of the opened door.
"Hon, you weren't made to have kids." I handed her a mountain dew, Adriana is going to be addicted to mountain dew.
"I know, I shouldn't even be alive right now. Stupid DNA failed me again."
"Don't say that, I love you, it would... Well it'd really suck if you died."
"You're so tired you can't even argue. Go to sleep. Lita and I are the only two till expecting, you know?"
"Yes, it's disconcerting." Kisha laughed spitefully.
"Yesterday the nurse asked me if I'd felt contractions. I was supposed to be dilated five. I can't even remember what that means."
"I'm tired, my brain just says it means you're in labor."
"I already knew that."
"Go to sleep, play a video game or something." I said and fell asleep.
Three weeks later
All the women were in the room with their new children. That is 'cept Kisha. Kisha was holding Caixein (later to be known as Kai), Max's son. He had messy brown hair and "lovely" brown wings. His sister, Lisa (named her before I figured out what the Red-haired-wonder's name was), had golden hair and light brown wings. Tom was chewing on a rattle. He looked just like his mother, except his blue wings and of course he was a boy and shared his father, George's, tall size. Raivin had green eyes and brown, normal, wings. Her hair varied in color, starting with Platinum blond but becoming redder as it grew. Static looked just like his father with his blond hair and blue eyes. His wings were white with black splotches, as well. Angel hadn't had children yet but she was planning on getting married soon. Kisha predicted she would have triplets and hey, she was right about Max's twins. Kisha was staring fondly into little Caixein's eyes, finding it hard to be annoyed about her prolonged labor. "I'm worried bout Caixein." Max murmured, taking Lisa from Fang.
"Why is that?" Fang said, looking a bit disgruntled his wife didn't trust him with the baby.
"He didn't cry when he was born, in fact, he's never once made any sound at all. His sister always seems to know what's wrong with him and cries for him as far as I can make things out."
"Well, at least they have a bit of a bond." George offered.
"No, not exactly." Fang ran his hand through his hair.
"What do you mean 'not exactly'?" Kumali handed Iggy Raivin and began walking towards the door to get us all refreshments.
"Lisa likes to be near Caixein and tends to fall asleep somewhere near him but Caixein doesn't seem to be able to tolerate her company or the company of pretty much any one for that matter. It's amazing he likes you so much, Kisha."
"Hm, I'm not sure if it's really me he likes, perhaps my perfume. Maybe he just doesn't like parents." Caixein had three freckles under his left eye, on the other hand, his sister had three freckles under her right eye. Definitely twins.
"You're a parent." Angel corrected.
"Not yet she's not." Gazzy sighed. Just then Static started crying.
"What's wrong with him?" Nudge shouted over Static's incessant noise-making.
"He's just tired." Lita called back.
"Well make him go to sleep then!" Iggy couldn't plug his ears while holding Raivin. Lita handed him to Gazzy, whispered into Gazzy's ear and Gazzy left.
"I'm so sick and tired of being in labor, I wanna C-section. For goodness sakes, you guys, I've been stabbed through the stomach and healed in hours, why are you so scared?!" Kisha screamed at the shocked faces of her friends.
"It's fine, you guys, she wouldn't let anyone but Dr. Washington do her operation." Dr.Washington had delivered all of the children.
"Alright..." Max said hesitantly, "but at least make it another week. Adriana can't possibly be that stubborn."
"You act like you have no idea who her parents are." Fang scoffed, which got him a hard smack upside the head from Max.
One Week Later
"Give me my baby." Kisha was already on her feet. Chagelums were incredible creatures. I took another glance at our daughter before handing her to my wife. Adriana was, amazingly, just what Kisha'd described to Dr.Washington years ago. Green eyes, pink hair, gray wings, and tan skin. She was wonderful, I couldn't stop gawking at her. She was mine, no one could take her away from me. That beautiful child was mine and Kisha's. Kisha stared at her, her eyes welling up with tears.
"What do ya think? Was it worth it?" I asked, already knowing the answer.
"Totally worth it." Kisha sobbed stroking Adriana's cheek.
That's it! Right now I've still got a long way to go but I'm sure that when I post this I'll be crying so, whatever. Please Review! Kissies! I love you all, all of my reviewers! It's been so much fun!
(Update day commentary: HECK YEAH, I'M CRYING! I'm really anxious. You guys have been great, thanks for everything. I want to give special thanks to those of you that have been regular reviewers for a long time:
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Those that have helped me right the story:
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Thank you all so much. I hope to see you in the sequel. Keep in mind. Almost everyone is an OC.
Heh, I'm listening to Missing again. "I miss you, like the deserts miss the rain" how appropriet. Heh. Aw, I'm gonna cry. Kisses!)
