Okay. As the author of this I have a couple things to say in regards to the reviews that have been made.
Thank you to everyone who has been commenting and giving your opinions, your thoughts are appreciated.

And now to those of you who have been suggesting things, in a both tactful, and a – well let's just say a less tactful way. I want to clear some stuff up.

I have zero intention of stopping writing this. The last time I checked this was in fact a site for amateur writers. It's not like I am sitting here waiting and hoping for someone to come and offer to publish this. This has been written purely to pass the time and then I felt bored so I ended up posting it.
Hasn't anyone read something that they didn't like? Okay, I'm not the best writer. I might even be so horrible that you can't even stand to look at another word I've typed and you think I've soiled the show and offended yourself and everyone else who watching Supernatural under the sky, but the point is that I would never, and I mean NEVER, tell someone that their writing is awful, or stupid, an insult to mankind, or many other varied insults I'm sure you very creative people can come up with.

Now I am just one girl, who likes to watch a show and wrote something about it. Please, by all means, light your torches and come running through the streets. But I have done nothing of substance to offend anyone and I do believe this would be a good time for everyone to take a deep breath. I'm pretty sure me having written a Fan Fiction about a show that isn't exactly about how the show is isn't the end of the world. Now please, stop me if I'm wrong, but am I not allowed to revise things and change them to my liking? And if you were wondering, the answer to that is, "Yes RooftopsAndInvitations, you can revise whatever you want, I love every syllable you write!"

And now moving on to Kaiden being a Mary-Sue and me just wanting to place myself in these situations, for the record, I am nothing like Kaiden, nor do I want to ever be like her. Therefore, I'm not sure how this would constitute as an attempt to work myself into their story. (Oh no! But it's not their story. I've royally screwed the pooch on that too. My deepest sincerities.) And, another thing, wouldn't you have to know me to be able to judge me, at all? For example by telling me what I'm trying to do? I was not aware that I was "obsessed with the hotness of the characters mutilating and twisting them to meet the needs of her own self-inspired creation." (Thank you to I'llkickyourass for such a…grammatically correct…statement) I would appreciate it if you would hold off on your accusations of me just trying to insert myself into nice little make believe situations until you know me. Which, to be quiet honest, would never happen because the two people who have in fact judged the hell out of me, would not be able to get past your deeply engraved opinion of who you think I am. Oops, there I go, judging you for judging me. I apologize; I don't take very well to sinking to other's levels.

To 'Jade and Diamonds" I would like to thank you for your suggestions, although attacking Starshine26, I believe that was seriously unnecessary. The point she was making (and I'm not just saying this, I have in fact talked to her) was that there is a difference between being rude, and being helpful. For example, telling someone the only way to save their fiction is by completely revising it or deleteing it, is rude. I would like to point out though, that you, Jade and Diamonds, seem to have a pretty good time judging and critiquing others, but you have no work of your own posted. As anyone who has written things and then put it up for complete strangers to comment on, it's not easy. So I would like to invite you to please, post something and show me how it should be done.
Now I do hope that I haven't offended anyone but stating my true feelings, but I have worked pretty damn hard on this and I'm not one to take crap like that lying down. Okay?
Thanks and have a nice day,
-RooftopsAndInvitations-