alright second chapter is up like most of you wanted i got all my grammer fixed up to the best extent possible right now i would like to thank my current beta whos a friend of mine in real life but she doesnt have her own account so dont think i was able to make so many corrections with grammer. and just a heads up for next chapter might take a good amount of time cause i pretty much have a entire city to describe...anyway here is the chapter please and enjoy and review at the end
disclaimer: i dont own naruto...
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"Wait, who are you? Why and how would you help me?" asked Naruto, unsure of himself. He felt something different about this man. He could sense amazing power and no feelings of hatred emanating off of him.
'I can't let my guard down. He's probably just here to kill me even though I can't feel it. I'm sure he has hidden desires through those words,' thought Naruto.
"Like I said before, Naruto-kun, my name is Orochimaru, and you and I are very much alike. We both crave power for different reasons but all in the same. I also left the Leaf behind me several years ago, just not in such an extraordinary way such as yours, Naruto-kun," said Orochimaru with almost a lustful way of saying those last words.
"You're from the Leaf?!" questioned Naruto.
"Was from the Leaf, Naruto-kun. But enough of the past, we must focus on our futures together. Kukuku," said Orochimaru with a snake-like hiss every once and awhile.
"Who said I'd join you? You still haven't answered my other question!" said Naruto.
"Very well, Naruto-kun. The reason why I want to help you is because I want your strength. The strength that you hold can help me crush the Leaf and make them suffer for being so weak and loving," said Orochimaru with a stern look on his face.
"Alright, I'm liking the plan so far, but how could you help me?" asked Naruto with his full attention now toward the strange man.
"Surely, you have noticed, Naruto-kun, even with that monstrous strength you have inherited from the kyuubi, you have still yet to learn any jutsu or master of chakra control. Surely, you have noticed this, right, Naruto-kun?" questioned the smiling Orochimaru.
'Kid, he's right. Even though you can kill any normal non-ninja, you could probably not kill a ninja about jounin level right now,' murmured the kyuubi from behind his cage.
Naruto was digesting all the new info he was hearing and started to think of the best course of action he should take. He then wondered if this man could teach him everything he knew. He could become very powerful! But first, he had to see if the man was powerful in the first place.
Orochimaru was sure his plan would work. All he had to do was convince this half-demon he could trust him. Then he could move one giant step forward to being able to carry out his plan that took so many years of planning. But surely he knew this boy would not go so easily and was most likely gonna test him, and sure enough, Orochimaru could sense the battle readiness of the boy and smiled.
"Well, Naruto-kun, it seems you don't trust me of being able to avoid the Leaf and be able to slaughter countless Leaf ninja when needed. But surely, I'm fine with that."
Naruto heard the sound of the man talking but it didn't seem to reach him. All he wanted to do now was to fight at his best and test the man. After several moments, Naruto charged head on, right at the ninja!
'Don't be an idiot, kid!! This man isn't a normal ninja! You will have to use strategy to even touch this man!' roared the kyuubi in Naruto's mind.
'Kukuku. It seems he's not the greatest fighter at the moment, but that is expected. He's only 5 years old with no battle experience,' thought Orochimaru.
About 10 feet away, where Orochimaru was just standing there still, Naruto jumped up into the air and slammed his fist right into the ground. By grabbing a big amount of his new chakra, he threw the chakra through his fist. 'Sure, I have no control over my chakra, but it comes in a large amount!' yelled Naruto in his mind.
Soon, only a huge crater was left where Orochimaru stood, but Orochimaru was not in sight. "Surely, that had to do something to him," whispered Naruto.
"Kukuku. Such splendid, raw power and such great potential for the future," said Orochimaru while doing a few simple hand signs. "kuchiyose no jutsu". Muttered orochimaru
Before Naruto could move a muscle, a very large snake wrapped around him and constricted him until he could barely breathe.
"Now, Naruto-kun, I think it's time you made your decision. Will you follow me? Will you help me destroy the Leaf? Will you train under me to become even stronger?" asked Orochimaru with a hint of joy in his voice.
"Y-yes," muffled Naruto. Orochimaru gave a smirk, and a giant puff of smoke surrounded Naruto. The snake disappeared, and Naruto fell to the floor, panting for breath.
"Good. Now we must hurry, Naruto, or else, the Leaf will be here soon, and even I can't handle the amount of ninja coming," said Orochimaru while walking into the deep forest motioning for Naruto to follow him.
'Kid, I want you to be careful around this man. He can be extremely dangerous,' cautioned the kyuubi.
'I know that already,' thought Naruto as he started walking after Orochimaru into the dark forest of seemingly endless trees
[10 minutes ago, back at the Hokage tower
"Hokage-sama! There have been reports of large chakra spikes a few miles outside the village! We believe it might be the kyuubi!" exclaimed an anbu captain after barging in on the hokage, who was going over several scrolls.
"Don't you dare call him that! Naruto is not the kyuubi and if you don't understand that, maybe you don't deserve the rank you hold, captain.
"Please, forgive me, hokage-sama, but we must send a team out there and see what's going on," pleaded the anbu.
"I agree, captain. You will be staying here while I am gone-"
"But, hokage-sama, we can't allow you to go out there! You are too important to this village to lose!" interrupted the captain.
"Learn your place, captain!! Don't you dare interrupt me while I'm giving an order! In case you have forgotten, the duty of the hokage is to protect the village with his life and I'm doing just that! I will be taking 10 groups of anbu with me, so you can calm down," said the hokage.
"Of course, hokage-sama, please, forgive me for my outburst," replied the captain in an apologetic tone.
"Very well, I'm leaving now. Captain, I want you to stay here and inform the jounin level and above of what has taken place here tonight. As for the others, tell them I'm on an important errand," ordered the hokage and started walking out the door.
"Of course, hokage-sama," replied the captain.
The hokage vanished into thin air, leaving the dismayed and unconvinced anbu captain.
[15 minutes later at the pond area
The hokage and several teams of anbu had just arrived and what they saw confused them. They saw a huge crater going a great distance down into the ground and a very large circle outlined by another circle right next to it.
"What happened here?" asked the anbu member with the dog mask.
"I'm not sure, Kakashi, but the crater has traced amounts of chakra surrounding it. That can easily be told to be Naruto's demon chakra. But this other chakra, its so famil-," the hokage paused with a shocked look upon his face, "N-no. NO!! This is not good! The other chakra belongs to Orochimaru!!" shouted the hokage.
"What!? But that's impossible!!" shouted several anbu in disbelief.
"Apparently, it is! I want all anbu squads to search the area for the 2! If Orochimaru would get his hands on Naruto, this could mean the end of the world as we know it!! We have to find him!" shouted the hokage, fear obviously shown on his wrinkled, old face.
"Yes, hokage-sama!" everyone shouted in unison before scattering in different directions.
"This is not good, not good at all," whispered the hokage before running off into the forest with 2 anbu following him.
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Naruto and Orochimaru were now running through the trees at full speed, about 8 miles ahead of where they just fought, knowing they are most likely being pursued by several anbu now. But that did not worry Orochimaru one bit. He knew they couldn't find them in time to do anything. In only a few minutes, they would be arriving at one of his several underground hidden bases that are scattered all over fire country.
"We will be arriving soon, Naruto-kun. Only a few more minutes at this pace, we shall be in a place where no one can find us. Unless, they actually knew it was there," said Orochimaru smiling, thinking of how well his plan is going and how it just took a huge step forward.
"Finally, Orochimaru, can I ask you something?" asked Naruto.
"Of course, my Naruto-kun, heh," responded Orochimaru.
Naruto, twitching a little bit, began asking "If I join you, will I be accepted as more than a demon by others under your command?"
"What an odd question, Naruto-kun, but yes, of course, you are a major key point to our success. We wouldn't be anything without you. Of course we shall acknowledge your existence," replied Orochimaru with a smile.
"Finally..." Naruto said.
"Alright, we are here, Naruto-kun," said Orochimaru before stopping in the middle of an ordinary area with trees.
"But, I don't see anything," said Naruto quizzically.
"Hold on, Naruto! Of course it's here! It's just not easy to access. Kukuku," replied Orochimaru before doing 9 hand seals in quick concession. Right before them, the floor of the forest was literally sliding forward and revealing several stairs leading underground.
"Follow me, Naruto-kun," said Orochimaru while heading for the stairs with Naruto closely following him. They had traveled down at least 20 feet before it leveled out to flat ground and a light at the end of the hall. As they walked through the light, Naruto gaped at the sight before him. It was incredible! It was like an entire underground city with a bunch of ninja without a forehead protector for any village.
"But how?" asked Naruto, his eyes full of amazement.
"Kukuku. Naruto, welcome to the temporary area for the future village of the Sound..." chuckled Orochimaru.
alright well ya please review and tell me what you though and what you thought wasnt all that great of course the battle didnt turn out to great but dont want naruto to be freaking overpowered at the age of 5 then be able to go through amazing training and being able to blow up a city in seconds like some fan fics ive seen before. oh and to those of you hating how naruto seems smarter and kind of emo lik.e im gonna be changing that around once he gets to know more people in the next few chapter i wont make him a freaking idiot like the show but not a freaking genious either. and we will be his semi happy go lucky guy later on.