Well as said before I dO NoT oWn WaRrIoRs!!

1 moon later……

Talonpaw was creeping up on a rabbit in just a moment she would unleash all her power from her hind legs and dash to make the kill.

She carefully placed a paw forward and boom! Talonpaw began running with all her might. She leaned forward and she bit into its

soft flesh. It was dead. The rabbit was half Talonpaw's size. Now Breezefur would be really impressed! She walked into camp

almost dragging the rabbit it was so big. When Larchpaw saw her he mewed,

"Wow that's a big rabbit".

The rabbit must be big because Larchpaw was always trying to out do her and if he was impressed, what would her mentor think? A

big black tom padded up to her "That's a pretty big rabbit Talonpaw!" he purred "I think you deserve to go the Gathering tonight"

Talonpaw's dark tabby head shot up "Really Breezefur?" she questioned "Really" he simply mewed.

The tabby she-cat ran over to her best friend Smokepaw "Guess what?" she purred "What" mewed Smokepaw swiping a delicate

white paw over her glossy black head "I get to go to the gathering!" Talonpaw purred "Me too!" cried Smokepaw "Swiftclaw said

that I fight very well!" she purred "And I killed a rabbit more than half my size!" cried Talonpaw. The tabby she-cat so very excited!

Her first gathering, she could meet all the great leaders, warriors, and medicine cats! But then Talonpaw had a dark thought, her father

would be there. She wanted nothing to do with him let alone see him. I will avoid him she thought to herself.

A cry rang out "Let us go to the gathering!" Onestar called. Talonpaw fell in line with Smokepaw and Specklepaw and Ripplepaw

and Larchpaw were towards the back of the line talking about how they would get to meet Brambleclaw and the great Firestar.

"Maybe we will meet Liontooth" Larchpaw mewed loudly. Talonpaw whipped her head around. She took her paw with claws

sheathed and knocked him over. "Don't you talk about my father" she spat "Nice one" Specklepaw mewed. Specklepaw was

Talonpaw's other best friend she was also Larchpaw's sister. She was a beautiful dappled black tortishell and she always tried to

keep her obnoxious brother in line. Larchpaw muttered something about stupid halfclans, but everyone could tell he was embarrassed.

As Windclan finally reached the island Ripplepaw silently whispered to her sister "I think I am going to meet Pebblestream"

Smokepaw cast her icy blue gaze on him. "Are you sure?" the gray tom sighed "I owe it to him." Talonpaw almost scoffed at him she

was not going to meet her father! The cat who made everyone think that she was disloyal? Not a chance!

"We're here" mewed Specklepaw in wonder. There were so many cats! As Talonpaw looked around like a moonstruck rabbit a kind

new voice spoke to her "Hi welcome to the Island" he purred. She whipped her head around and saw a very handsome ginger and

white tabby tom. He had bright blue eyes. "Hi" she mewed "What's your name?" The ginger tom sat down and liked his paw and

draped it over his chest. "I am the newly named Sparrowflight! Who are you?" he asked "I am the great, one and only, amazing, most

talented, "I think I get it" Sparrowflight mewed there was humor in his big blue eyes. "My names Talonpaw" grumbled the tabby.

"Well why don't I show you around the Island?" Sparrowflight asked "Sure" mewed Talonpaw.

Talonpaw followed the ginger tom as he introduced her to the Thunderclan apprentices. "This is Featherpaw, Splashpaw, and

Birdpaw." Featherpaw was a pretty tabby she-cat. Splashpaw was a little older than herself he was a big white tom with black

patches. Birdpaw was a pretty tortishell she-cat "Featherpaw is my sister," he mewed "The only reason she isn't a warrior is because

she twisted her paw and she had to stop training for about 3 moons!" Talonpaw looked at all the apprentices they had all been to

gatherings before and she was slightly jealous. "My father is Stormfur and my mother is Brook" he mewed "And Birdpaw's parents

are Poppyflower and Spide-"

He was cut off when Mistystar called for the gathering to start. Talonpaw looked at Birdpaw she looked almost a little sick, was her

father not Spiderleg? Talonpaw pushed the thought out of her mind. "We have two new warriors with us tonight" called Firestar

"Sparrowflight and Ravenwing" have both received there warrior names. Sparrowflight proudly gave himself a chest lick. Talonpaw

looked at him as he sat beside her he is quite handsome... What was she thinking! She could not love a cat from another clan! "We

have five new apprentices here with us tonight" called Onestar "Specklepaw, Larchpaw, Ripplepaw, Smokepaw, and Talonpaw have

begun their apprenticeship" Some cats began to hiss when the called the halfclans cat's names where called "They are not useless"

called a handsome golden tom "Speak for yourself" hissed a Shadowclan warrior "Your only defending them Liontooth because one

of them is your daughter" Talonpaw met her father's eyes she stepped back and hissed at him "Thanks" she said sarcastically "Stop!"

called Firestar "Mistystar, Russetstar, anything else to report?" they both told him no. "Then this gathering is over!"

"I am so sorry about what happened" mewed Sparrowflight "I hope you forgive him he is a great cat" as he licked her on the ear "I

hope no-cat bothers you" he mewed as he slipped out to follow his clan. Easy for you to say she thought but as she padded home there

was only one thing on her mind and it was those bright blue eyes.

Oh is our Talonpaw falling in love with a Thunderclan warrior?? Also would you guys want me to do a diff. point of view?? If so tell me!