Yes, dun dun dunn, more!
Icestar smiled. It was her could-kit time. She loved Blackwing, and what better way to show it? Tomorrow, though she would see him.
Icestar slowly drifted off to sleep, when she smelled a sent from long ago, like burning brush and a raging fire. She gasped. There stood Wildfire, in all his glory. White and orange, and that mischievous smile that always adorned his face.
"Wildfire! Oh I-" she started, but Wildfire silenced her with a flick of his tail.
"Shh…shh, darling, stay still, just for one second…" Wildfire came near Icestar's head, and shot his paw out, knocking her out.
"Darling, you know I love you."
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Icestar shuddered. This was StarClan, for she had lost another life. She looked down into the pool, where on the ground Wildfire crouched over her body. She glared. Soon, more cats approached. Mintbelly ran over to comfort her daughter.
"Why, mother? Why did her do that?" she whimpered.
"It's because he's jealous." A deep voice resounded from the line of cats. "He loves you, and he knows that you love Blackwing."
"I know, but how could he do that? Why?" she cried, "Why, Blizzardstar, why?"
Blizzardstar hesitated, "We have learned of a prophecy. It has to do with ScarClan."
Icestar was surprised. A prophecy? These never came, and when they did, most of the time they resulted in death. The stars on StarClan's pelts glittered as if with hope, but in truth, most of them were despairing.
"We cannot tell you now, daughter, but you will learn." Mintbelly whispered.
"But what of Wildfire? He…he raped me!" Icestar exclaimed.
"You have a strong tom under your nose. Show your love for him as much as you can. As for Wildfire, he is part of StarClan no more." Mintbelly whispered. The cats all faded away, when she awoke with sun shining on her face.
"Show your love for him as much as you can…" Icestar thought. She smiled, and she knew she would.
Yes, evil Wildfire! There will be more next time, so review of I will tear out your heart and devour it before it has even stopped beating.
Aneis
