EgyptMotou- hello everyone what up

Egypt- hey (waves)

EgyptMotou- well here's the new chapter I promised, I got my five reviews so here it is

Egypt- EgyptMotou does not own anything so you can't sue, you won't get anything

EgyptMotou- I don't have anything to give in the first place

(Yugi to Yami or Yugi's thoughts)

((Yami to Yugi or Yami's thoughts))

(((Egypt's thoughts)))

(Writers note)

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Egypt sighed as she watched her creature scan the area, his nose held high, as he continued trying to gather the scent of his master's friend. Bringing his nose to the ground for the hundredth time, Bone Crusher began to follow the scent of the pharaoh, Egypt and Yugi right behind him.

"Has he got anything yet, it feels like we've been walking forever," Yugi groaned, making sure to stay close to his cousin so the protective shield Egypt had conjured up could protect him as well as her.

"Actually we've only been walking for about 4 hours," Egypt sighed, before stopping, causing Yugi to stop as well, watching her monster scan the area once again.

"Are you serious, it feels longer," Yugi whined, before turning his attention to the large shadow monster that had his nose tightly presses to the dirt.

"Well here time passes by very slowly, it makes torture all the worse, when you think it's been days, it's truly on been a few hours," Egypt explained, before grabbing Yugi's hand and forcing him to fallow her as Bone Crusher began to walk again.

"That's awful," Yugi breathed, his amethyst eyes going wide, before his voice dropped, his head bowing low. "You don't think… whoever has Yami, is torturing him…….. do you?" Yugi asked softly, his voice holding fear, and sadness.

"To tell you the truth Yugi………. I really don't know," Egypt answered sadly, glancing at her cousin, and feeling her heart ache as tears began to fall from the young ones eyes, his amethyst jewels holding fear, concern, and deep worry for his beloved.

Placing her hand on Yugi shoulder, Egypt moved her fingers under Yugi's chin, softly lifting his head to stare into his bug innocent eyes. Yugi's eyes sparkled with fresh tears that threatened to fall and spill down his soft features.

"Don't worry Yugi, we'll find Yami, and when we do, Joan, and whoever has him now, will pay, trust my word on that," Egypt promised, using her thumb to wipe away Yugi's tears, before she smiled, and placed a soft loving kiss on Yugi's forehead, causing the little light to smile slightly.

"Thanks Egypt," Yugi breathed, giving his younger cousin a tight hug, before loud barking alerted them to Bone Crusher.

Giving each other curious looks, the two teens rushed over to the barking creature, Egypt kneeling down beside it, stroking its head softly, before she began to speak.

"What did you find boy?" she asked, looking at her monster curiously.

Giving his master a soft lick to the face, Bone Crusher pointed his paw, barking softly as he did so.

Following the massive claw covered paw with her eyes, Egypt quickly noticed the small building that looked like a run down warehouse, but what she didn't get was, what the hell was a warehouse doing in the shadow realm.

"Is Yami in there boy?" Yugi asked, also kneeling down beside the shadow creature, his soft voice holding hope, but still held sadness, and fear.

Giving a nod of its head, Bone Crusher barked once more, before looking at it's master, awaiting new orders from the girl.

"Good job Bone Crusher," Egypt smiled scratching behind the shadow creature's ears, before standing up and looking at Yugi, who also stood.

"Ok Yugi, we're going to have to sneak into the building without being caught, so we have to be quite for here on out, understood?" Egypt whispered, her voice low, but loud enough for Yugi to hear and understand.

Giving a nod of his head, Yugi took his younger cousins hand, so the two of them could stay close to each other at all times, the last thing he wanted was either of them getting lost in the shadow realm.

Yugi clearly remembered the last time he was in this place, and o be honest it wasn't a very happy memory. Shivering at the cold air the shadow realm held, Yugi moved closer to his cousin, his amethyst eyes wandering around, making sure no shadow monsters were following them.

After commanding Bone Crusher to be quite, Egypt began to walk, Yugi closely at her side, this was it, this was were the true danger began, who knew if there were traps up ahead, which mostly there would be, and what if there were guards or some type of monster guarding the building?

They had to be as quite as possible, and as prepared to fight as Bone Crusher was, who at the moment, was scanning the area with his big red eyes, his ears perked up, at alert for any danger or threat to his master and her cousin.

(Don't worry Yami, we're on our way, hang on, please love, hang on)

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"JOAN!" Yami screamed in fear and terror.

Yami could hear rustling within the dark room, and suddenly every candle lit within the room, causing an eerie glow to cast over the once dark area, creating shadows and figures on the wall.

It took Yami's deep crimson eyes to adjust to the new light, but when he did, he gasped, and he felt his body ache all over again, cause there, standing before him was Joan, a blood stained knife held tightly within her cold fingers.

"About time, your highness," Joan laughed heartlessly, the glow from the candles casting upon her dark eyes, causing them to look even more soulless, and empty.

"I knew something wasn't right with you," Yami growled, his voce surprisingly returning to him.

"Yes, you did, too bad your little friends didn't or you wouldn't be in this situation now would you?" Joan cackled, causing Yami to clench his teeth tightly and growl low within his throat.

"Who are you, what is your real name, cause I know it's not Joan, I heard what Egypt and Yugi said, before you knocked me out, you bitch, now who are you, tell me," Yami barked, his voice stronger then it was earlier, now that he knew who was keeping him captive.

"Uh, so demanding, let me tell you something Atem," Joan growled, before leaning down to whisper into Yami's ear, her breath icy cold against his flesh, causing Yami to shiver.

"You're not pharaoh anymore, and this is my turf, you have no power here," Joan whispered harshly, her voice like a shape cutting knife itself, which caused Yami to shiver once more.

Standing up straight, Joan smirked down at the shivering pharaoh, her deep dark eyes empty and emotionless, but fierce nonetheless.

"You stupid mortals can't even figure out the most simplest of things," Joan snorted, twirling the blood-coated knife between her fingers, watching as Yami's eyes widened horror at the sight of it.

"What…. what do you mean?" Yami stammered, his voice low, and evident with fear as his crimson eyes closely watching the dagger as was twirled within Joan's hands.

"Joan pharaoh, swatch the to syllables of my first name and you get anjo, and do you know what that mean?" Joan smirked, knowing full well that Yami didn't a damn thing about many languages.

Shaking his head 'no', Yami continued to keep his crimson eyes on the bloody dagger, watching it closely as it moved.

"It means Angel in Portuguese you stupid king," Joan snarled, rolling her eyes, before she began to toss her dagger, catching it by its handle each time it fell from the air.

"You're no angel," Yami growled, tugging at his chains once more.

"Oh but that's were you're wrong Atem, I am an angel, for you see, I'm not an ordinary angel," Joan smirked, walking around the table as she spoke, the dagger still moving within her fingers.

"Do tell," Yami huffed, his crimson eyes following her, watching as she moved about the table, the coated knife never once stopping it motions.

"Well my last name is Murete, now rearrange the r and the e pharaoh," Joan smirked, knowing that Egypt had thought Yami some Spanish words, especially the one she was talking about.

Yami's eyes widened in horror as realization hit him square in the face. No this wasn't, this couldn't be…. it just couldn't be………. it wasn't possible… she couldn't be….

"The Angel of Death," Yami whispered, his crimson eyes wide in horror and newfound fear. She couldn't be, this wasn't happening, this couldn't be happening. Yami could feel his heartbeat pick up speed just at the very thought.

"Correct, Anjo Muerte, The Angel of Death," the death angel smirked, stopping in front of Yami, her dark eyes glistening with murder and hatred, thanks to the candle light that flickered within the room, the gleam form the fire sparkling in her cold eyes.

"You… you're…. Anubis's angel," Yami breathed, suddenly feeling very dizzy and uneasy, this couldn't be happening to him.

"Wow, you're not as stupid as I thought you were, Atem," the dark angel smirked, watching as Yami began to tremble in fear before her.

"What do you want with me," Yami whispered, never taking his eyes of the death angel, and her twirling dagger.

"I told you, you're paying for what you did, you cheated death, no one cheats my master and lives, not only did you cheat once, but you cheated a second time, when you returned to this world for that runt you call a lover, and now you must pay for what you did, my lord hates you Atem, do he sent me down here to kill you, but that's not all I'm here for," the angel of death smirked, running the blade down Yami's cheek, causing the pharaoh to hiss in pain as blood trickled down his face, gathering in a small pool by his head.

"Ex… explain," Yami breathed, trying to ignore the now aching pain in his face. He knew Anubis hated him, the lord of the dead made sure every god knew his hatred for the once king of Egypt

"Oh he didn't tell you, what a shame," the dark girl pretended to look sad, before the expression changed to one of hate and sear madness.

"Who?" Yami growled, his fist clenching once more. He was really getting tired of this girl and her irritating questions that she knew he had no clue about.

"Your love Yugi, he didn't tell you the deal he made with me?" the death angel smirked, looking at the glistening crimson blood that now sparkled on the blade thanks to the candle light.

"Yugi would never make a deal with someone like you," Yami growled, becoming very irritated and angry with this so called angel of Anubis. What in Ra's name was she talking about?

"Oh but that's were you're wrong pharaoh, for you see, your little lover did make a deal with me, a deal of death," Anubis's angel smirked, catching the confused and angry look on her captives face.

"For you see, when your little lover died in that hospital he was transported to the land that separates this world and the land of the dead, the crossover ground for the dearly departed souls of this world, he had a choice to make you see, either return or go to paradise, and I'm sure you know what he chose," Death smirked, before smearing the glistening blood on her blade to her palm, watching as the liquid stained her skin, making her smirk widen.

"He chose to come back, for me," Yami whispered, turning his head away from the angel of death, tears glistening in his eyes.

"Yes and for that he had to pay a price, since he chose to come back, I got the privilege of choosing anyone I like to take his place in paradise," Death cackled watching as Yami's eyes became fierce.

"Yugi would never do something like that, you lie," Yami spat, not turning his head to look at the angel, but his deep crimson orbs held anger and frustration. This so called angel was lying, Yugi would never take a risk like that, he would never!!!!

"Oh but he did pharaoh, he did for you, and since not only did I have to kill you for cheating my lord, I had to kill another human to pay the debt your little love owed and why not kill to birds with the same stone," Death smirked, the candle light flickering in her eyes.

Yami's head snapped up, his crimson eyes wide in horror and realization. Quickly turning his head, Yami's crimson eyes clashed with Death's, and his eyes widened even further.

"And you choose me, to take Yugi's place," he whispered his body beginning to shake uncontrollably out of fear, and pain.

"Exactly," Death smirked, before dragging the end of the sharp blade down Yami's forearm, causing the pharaoh to scream in pain as he tried to move himself away from the agonizing dagger, but only succeeded in causing his chains to bit even more into his bleeding wrist and ankles, causing his screams to intensify.

"But no one said, I couldn't have a little fun with you before you die," the death angel cackled, before dragging the blade down Yami's chest, cutting his black leather top as she went, the blade ripping into his tender flesh, causing Yami to scream and howl in agony.

All Yami could was scream and shake as every part of his body was cut and ripped apart, scream after scream falling from his lips, but falling on deaf ears.

Crimson blood mixed with wet crystal tears as the assault on his pain racked body continued; this was pure, horrifying torture.

The deep, dark, red liquid dripped from the table, and landed softy on the floor, but not being noticed, not being cared for, for both parties were to caught up in what was going on to care for the spilled blood. One party being tortured, cut to ribbons, their blood being shed from their shaking body, while the other did the torturing, enjoying the pain they were inflecting on the helpless, shaking being lying on the cold table.

Soon the Angel of Death grew tired of torturing her victim, so she tossed her bloody dagger aside, and stared down at the bloody heap that was once pharaoh Atem, proud ruler of Higher and Lower Egypt.

Now the king lie there on the blood soiled table, his entire body shaking from enormous amounts of pain, while he bled from every wound, every cut, every mark on his body, the scene horrific and gruesome.

Blood covered everything, the floor, the walls, the table, even Death herself, but she didn't mind, she liked it this way.

Yami lay thee panting, his vision cutting in and out as he tried to breath, his lungs not wanting to work properly. He hurt all over, even in places he didn't even know he had, and he could feel the life draining form his mangled body, but he knew this wasn't over, he knew his suffering had yet to cease.

Turning his head slowly towards the dark angel, Yami watched as she came near him, the gleam in her eyes not too friendly. Yami opened his mouth to scream or protest, or beg for mercy, but nothing came out, he had screamed himself hoarse, now all he could do was watch.

Death smirked as she approached the dying pharaoh, watching as his blood drained from his body, and falling around him, the deep red liquid sparkling and glistening in the candle light.

She could see Atem's eyes growing glossy, his body becoming pale and cold, but she wasn't through yet, oh no, there was much more to come, she wasn't through playing with her prey just yet.

Pulling out a gag, Death wrapped it around the pharaoh's mouth, causing Yami to choke, his breathing becoming even worse. Now the king had to rely on breathing through his nose, which only caused pain, severe pain.

Crimson eyes met now black ones, the two locking and holding the others gaze. Yami could feel his consciousness slipping away, and he couldn't help but close his eyes, suddenly feeling sleepy and lightheaded.

((Please let me die, please let me die, if you truly love me father Ra, please let me die)) Yami mentally pleaded, tears falling from his closed crimson eyes.

Suddenly everything went black, darkness consumed Yami's vision as he fell unconscious, the extreme agonizing pain being too much for his body to handle.

Watching as the pharaoh passed out, Death smirked, giving a small flick of her wrist, causing Yami's wounds to heal.

Later my pharaoh, I will torture you until you vocally beg for death, and then, I'll happily grant you your wish, the death angel mentally cackled, before exited the room, leaving her prisoner to rest, well, at least for now, she wasn't through with him just yet.

You will pay for cheating my lord you wicked king, and once I kill you, I'll happily give your mangled corpse to my lord, who will praise me for my work, not only that, but the debt your little lover owes will be paid as well, with your blood pharaoh Atem.

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EgyptMotou- I know, not long and I'm sorry but the next one's going to be longer trust me

Egypt- (mouth open) (eyes wide)

EgyptMotou- what?

Egypt- Joan is actually Anjo Muerte, the Angel of Death…. EVIL!!!!!!!!

EgyptMotou- uhhhh well…… ummmmm…. I have no comment,

Egypt- you're evil you know that?

EgyptMotou- yes as a matter of fact I do (smiles innocently)

Egypt- how come Yami had to get picked to take Yugi's place

EgyptMotou- because Anubis already had it out for Yami anyway, and like Death said, why not kill two birds with the same stone, so not only will Anubis get Yami, the one who's cheated death twice, but Yugi's debt to Anubis will also be paid in the process

Egypt- that's cruel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EgyptMotou- yes I know, just as a little info thing, Anubis is the Egyptian lord of the Dead, but Anjo Muerte is his angel, so she is the one who actually kills the people, he just chooses who dies, she is the one who kills them, so she's like the grim reaper but she doesn't get to choose who dies, she choose for Yami to take Yugi's place, not Anubis

Egypt- evil I say, EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EgyptMotou- well please review everyone and please no flames, I'm really trying something new here, this is all new to me, so be nice!!!!! I know there's no real angel called Anjo Muerte, but bare with me here please (does puppy dog eyes)

Egypt- Review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EgyptMotou- REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Translations

Anjo- Angel- Portuguese

Muerte- Death- Spanish