Summary: Naruto's fight to be Hokage and the fight for Naruto's heart begins. Things aren't as easy as he would like especially when one must make a choice that will affect the rest of his life and many others.
Disclaimer: Naruto is not mine. It's his creators' property (Kishimoto Masashi). The only things that are mine are my own made up characters.
A/N: This is my first fic I hope you guy like it and review, if you like it or didn't, you're opinions, etc. well enjoy.
This chapter was beta by Hisoka316 andJiraiya thanks for the help I really appreciate it.
Don't forget to READ and REVIEW
"Hello" speech
Hello Thoughts
Hello Kyuubi
Hello Kyuubi's thoughts
(Hello) Inner Sakura
- Scene change
-LIFE LONG FIGHT- by ToniMan.
Chapter 19: Painful Truth
They stood face to face, one with a calm expression while the other was expressing his anger.
"Long time no see, Naruto-kun" Orochimaru calmly said.
Naruto's expression was unaffected by his calm words "You won't get Sasuke" Naruto yelled.
"Why do you still care about Sasuke-kun? Didn't he try to kill you?" Orochimaru stated letting out a small chuckle.
"They told me it wasn't his fault, your seal made him nuts" Naruto said back, remembering what they had told him before, even if he had ignored it out of anger when he was told so many days ago.
Orochimaru closed his eyes and gave a faint smile. "My seal did no such thing, it just gave him what he wanted, and he wanted power, not pitiful friends like you, that's why I have come here to take him to the sound. Where he will get what he truly wants!"
"LIAR! Who do you think I'll believe you or Kakashi-sensei?" He yelled as he formed a hand seal.
"Kukukuku, looks like you already forgot what happened between you two. Friendship… hah. That's something he doesn't need and doesn't want, you can ask him right before he kills you" Orochimaru mocked.
Naruto's eyes narrowed as he looked straight into Orochimaru's. "I haven't forgotten what he did, I'll never forget what happened in that fight, but he's my friend…and I won't let you get him. KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!" Naruto yelled as one Naruto turned into many and jumped Orochimaru.
-
"Oh man, this is bad…." Jiraiya said to himself as he watched the two girls.
"I have a job to do, I can't look over these two" He complained again, but was interrupted by a groggy Ten-Ten.
"What happened?" She complained as she rubbed her head.
"You're the guy that hangs out with Naruto-kun. Right?" She said as she stood up.
A smiled appeared on Jiraiya's face has he jumped back and ended his hand toward Ten-Ten and started to jump side to side.
"Oh! You know me? I guess my name is known by many, for I am the great Jiraiya, the frog hermit of mount…"
"Don't care. Where's Naruto-kun" Ten-Ten interrupted making Jiraiya fall anime style.
Jiraiya approached Ten-Ten "What do you mean you don't care?" He yelled with tears in his eyes. First time a pretty girl isn't captivated by my words….Jiraiya thought doubting of his abilities.
"I just don't. Where's Naruto-kun? I saw him before the snake hit me" Ten-Ten said.
Jiraiya had no choice but to accept her words and had realized that the torch had been passed to Naruto.
"I'll tell you, but only if you promise not to go after him and to stay here and care for her" Jiraiya said pointing toward Hinata.
Ten-Ten was a bit unsettled by his serious words, but had no choice but to nod, since she really wanted to know why he suddenly disappeared.
"There's a battle going on, a man came for Sasuke and Naruto went to stop him" Jiraiya said.
"So Sasuke wants to run away again? So he has to stop Sasuke again" Ten-Ten commented spitefully.
"I don know if he still wishes to leave, but what Naruto doesn't want is for Orochimaru to take him against his will…and stop him if he does want to go" Jiraiya commented
"Stop him from taking him, why does he get all the crappy assignments?" She asked bluntly.
Jiraiya smiles lightly. "No one ever asked him to do what he's about to do, he wont give up on Sasuke even after what happened"
"But why? Why does he still care about what happens to him?" Ten-Ten said furiously.
"Because he's Naruto, he won't give up on one of his friends" Jiraiya said with a huge grin on his face.
Ten-Ten simple looked to the horizon toward the source of many explosions. Hoping those weren't meant for Naruto.
"I have to go, I have a lot to clean up, take care of the other girl!" Jiraiya stated has he left toward the remaining snakes.
As Jiraiya left Ten-Ten was left thinking about his words.
Baka…he should just forget about Sasuke and leave him to the Hokage…but Naruto wouldn't abandon one of his friends…even if its Sasuke…I just hope he doesn't get hurt.
-
"HA!" A blond woman yelled as she punches the ground cracking it open.
A white hair man jumped behind her heavily sweating and breathing heavily.
Damn one of her punches did this much damage? I should have been more careful, I got careless. He thought has he hold his chest trying to breath, hoping he didn't have any mayor internal damage, hoping they where just a few cracked ribs and sternum.
"Too bad, if I would have hit the second one, it would be over" A smirking Tsunade said.
Kabuto started to form hand seals a green light surrounded his hands, after which he placed them over his chest, after a few seconds he took a deep breath a smile at Tsunade.
"With my cell regeneration abilities and chakra healing I can quickly recover from any hit, though it still hurts" Said Kabuto as he once again formed hand seals preparing his chakra scalpel.
"Stuck up brat" A frowning Tsunade said, as she started to perform hand seals.
Her hands started to glow green like Kabuto's, an expression of shock filed his face for a second but he quickly recovered.
"You're not the only one who can use chakra scalpels" Said Tsunade as she charged Kabuto.
In a second Tsunade reached Kabuto throwing a punch toward the young man, he dodged by ducking out of the way, while ducked Tsunade performed a vertical kick, hitting his chin lifting him to the air.
In mid air he managed to control himself back flipping and lading on his feet, but he didn't had time to rest as Tsunade already was throwing a heel kick toward his head hitting his glasses throwing them to the ground broken.
Kabuto managed to take a few steps back putting some distance between them. "I'm glad to see that desk works hasn't lowered your abilities" Kabuto said.
"Shut up, this is payback for last time" Tsunade said as she watched Kabuto take out another pair of glasses from his bag.
Tsunade raised an eye brow. "Replacements. Just in case the other gets damaged" Kabuto explained as he noticed the Hokage's slight reaction.
After their calm words they continue to fight, the fight was mostly missed punches as one hit could be fatal, a scalpel hit to the neck could sever the jugular vein, a hit to the chest the aorta, a hit to the thigh the femoral, a deep enough hit in any part of the body could damage them in a life threatening way, so they dodges hit after hit.
But Tsunade had the advantage in this fight as she managed to dodge an elbow strike and got close enough to deliver a deceived blow to Kabuto's stomach, shredding his insides.
Kabuto fell to his knees holding his stomach. "Don't worry I just hit the muscle lair in you abdominal cavity, it's not life threatening since I didn't hit your nerves or arteries, just the muscle lair, but you wont be able to move freely" Tsunade explained.
"Don't patronize me, I know what a hit there does" Kabuto said back as he held his stomach and tried to get up in vain.
"Heh! Time to end this" Tsunade said as she cracked her knuckles and got close.
What happened? Last time I had her under control…is she this strong without her fear of blood? Kabuto thought as she got closer the smile still present on her face.
BOOM! Two smoke bombs exploded between the two, and from the smoke two masked sound nins appeared.
Looks like I'm not as useless as he said. Kabuto thought as a smirk appeared on his face. He quickly started the healing jutsu to repair the damage Tsunade had caused. He wasn't about to waste the valuable time these two nins had given him.
Kabuto's action didn't go unnoticed by Tsunade as she charged, but a barrage of shurikens caused her to take a few steps back.
Damn it, they know I'm not good at long range attacks. She thought as she saw Kabuto stand up, unable to do something about it.
"Well I have to leave you now, Hokage-sama…I have more important matters to attend…delay her as much as you can" Kabuto stated as he ate a soldier pill and jumped out of sight.
"KABUTO!" Tsunade yelled as she ran after him, but was intercepted by the two sound nins.
Damn it…I have to take care of these guys first. She thought as she bit her lip.
-
In side Konoha hospital. Two medic nins and a masked one stood in front of a raven hair boy.
"Orochimaru is here?" The boy yelled.
"Yes, it looks like he came for you" The medic nin responded.
"Why are you telling me this?" A suspicious Sasuke asked.
A silence fills the room for seconds but is interrupted by the younger medic nin. "We've been working with you for a month now, and we have managed to get that curse seal under control, but we think we might be able to get rid of it, maybe…" He said hoping Sasuke would understand.
"You have placed seal after seal over Orochimaru's. Why ask me now if I want another one?" He asked again.
"Because the seal messed up your mind, we had to place them there for your good, but now we think you're on the level and well enough make a choice by yourself" Shinji, the older medic nin said.
"You have to make your choice, since you can think clearly now, just remember all we talked about" The younger medic nin Koshi added.
"I don't know any more, how can I know you two are telling me the truth?" A paranoid Sasuke asked again.
"Don't forget what they told you about the five sounds" The masked nin interrupted.
Sasuke threw a simple glare to the masked nin, but felt he had a point.
"I honestly thought you deserved to be severely punished when they brought you back, but know that I have seen all the power the course seal had, you lost your freedom to make choices" Shinji said.
If you decide to go to Orochimaru-sama, you'll lose your freedom to make choices, you'll lose your free will….Those words rushed to his mind, those words that one of the five sounds told him, those words where a warning given to him by them yet he didn't cared he was blinded by his hunger of power. It appeared they didn't want another to feel the pain they had, the pain of always being under another's control, the pain of not doing what you want, and the pain of never being free again.
Sasuke looked straight into the medic nin's eyes and nodded. They nodded as well as the older medic nin took the masked nin out side that room, leaving Sasuke to be prepped by the younger medic nin.
"We need some more time…" He said to the masked nin. After which he banish leaving the medic nin thinking.
I hope it works, if this doesn't work we'll be out of options. He thought as he watched Sasuke being prepared by the other medic
-
"HA!" Naruto yelled as he hit the ground all his clones exploding around him.
"You haven't gotten any stronger Naruto-kun, I don't know how you could have stopped Sasuke-kun from coming to me" Orochimaru mocked as he got closer to the fallen Naruto.
"Don't you ever shut up…?" Naruto said in a cold voice as red chakra started to emanate from his body.
The Kyuubi again….Thought Orochimaru as he started to form hand seals.
"GATSUUGA!" Was heard by them, forcing Orochimaru to stop his seals, and making Naruto return quickly to his blue eyes form.
"How annoying" Orochimaru said to himself as he evaded two spinning attacks.
The boy after missing his attacks took position in front of Naruto, accompanied by his beast clone.
"I can't see what's so great about you, especially when your on the ground like that, but she would have hated me if I didn't stop that guy from killing you" The boy said in a joking way as Naruto got up.
"Kiba?" What's the hell is he talking about. Naruto thought as he watched.
"I want to talk to you after we beat this guy" Kiba said as he ran toward the snake sannin followed by Akamaru in Kiba form.
"AH!" Kiba yelled as he started to slash Orochimaru, but the sannin evaded every strike easily, Akamaru managed to get behind Orochimaru and together with Kiba attacked furiously, but not managing to get even one hit.
Orochimaru in a quick move managed to strike Akamaru with his knew sending him back, undoing the jutsu.
"AKAMARU!" Kiba yelled out of concern for his partner, but this concern became his undoing as he dropped his guard and received a punch from Orochimaru sending toward Akamaru making them crash into each other.
"Kiba, are you ok?" Naruto asked as Kiba and Akamaru stood up.
Kiba shock his head trying to recover. "This guy's strong" Kiba stated.
"You didn't give me a chance to tell you. This guy is Orochimaru" Naruto said.
Kiba's eyed widened as he looked at the pale man in front of him, he didn't expected him to be Orochimaru, yet his instincts told him this guy was dangerous, and he expelled the non-mistakable stench that is death.
So this is the guy that convinced Sasuke to leave Konoha, he doesn't look tough, but he makes me nervous. Kiba who has started to sweat lightly thought.
"Kukuku. What's wrong? Is the dogboy's bark mightier than his bite" Orochimaru mocked.
His comment made Kiba furious as he showed his teeth's at Orochimaru, and took out two soldier pills.
"BAIKA NO JUTSU!" Was heard by all as a large spheres crashed into Orochimaru lifting a large dust cloud.
"What the hell was that?" Naruto complained as he covered his face from the dust.
As the dust cleared they saw Orochimaru stopping what appeared to be a rolling Chouji.
"Roll, roll, roll, roll" Chouji repeated over and over again as he tried to run down Orochimaru, but with a calm smile on his face Orochimaru lifted him over his head and threw him toward a building.
"I told you to wait until I came up with a plan" A pony tail chuunin that landed next to Chouji said.
"I know. But Kiba and Naruto where in trouble" Chouji answered.
"Shikamaru, Chouji get out of here! That's Orochimaru!" Naruto yelled.
"I know…I saw his photo when I read his file before the Sasuke mission…" Shikamaru answered as Chouji stood up.
Naruto and Kiba where a bit surprised from his answered as they didn't expected for him to know the sannin.
"How did you know we were here? Did you sniff out Naruto too?" Kiba asked making Shikamaru sweat drop, and like many times before he forced himself not to insult Kiba's stupidity, instead he took a deep breath and answered calmly.
"We didn't, it was obvious that he would come after Sasuke" Shikamaru answered.
Kiba eyes widen. "Sasuke is here? How did you know?"
"I saw his name in the patient listing" Shikamaru coldly answered. Making every ones jaw drop as no one ever read those listings.
Konoha shinobis are so annoying. Orochimaru thought as he heard them talk between each other.
"I'll take care of him!" Chouji yelled as he jumped to the sky and formed a seal.
"BAIKA NO JUTSU!" He yells as he transforms in mid air falling straight toward Orochimaru.
BOOM. Chouji caused an explosion as he slammed to the ground, as the dust settled Orochimaru was standing next to Chouji.
"How annoying! Orochimaru said as he started to walk to ward the hospital, only to find that after a few steps he wasn't able to walk anymore.
"Good work Shikamaru!" Kiba yelled as Shikamaru has he used shadow bind on Orochimaru.
How annoying…Orochimaru -who was reaching his limit, thought. He started to walk once again easily breaking the jutsu
In a second Orochimaru kicked Chouji toward Naruto and Kiba who where unable to evade him , causing them to crash into each other, he also in a quick move grabbed Shikamaru by his collar sending him toward the rest of them, slamming him against the others.
All of them quickly stood up as they saw Orochimaru simply standing in front of them, they didn't know what he was waiting for they felt that if he wanted he could have finished them long ago.
"You really should keep it quiet, I can't rest with all your commotion" A sound that came from behind the leaf nin.
They quickly looked as the saw Neji walking out of the hospital with Lee by his side.
"All right! We're all together again!" Naruto yelled as he took a few steps ahead of them all.
Naruto extended his hand, palm facing the sky. "Born and raised in the old fire country…trained as a ninja in the village of the leaf... I… the future Hokage and great ninja, Uzumaki Naruto!" He said making every one sweat drop even Orochimaru's.
"What the hell is wrong with you?" Kiba yelled. What the hell does she see in this buffoon?
"What? Ero-Sennin told me to make a good impression you have to have a great entrance…but I forgot to do a dance like him"
"BAKA!" Kiba interrupted.
"We're in the middle of a fight, remember?" Kiba added making Naruto rub the back of his head.
"You're right…well…I'm Uzumaki Naruto and we are the Konoha 5!" He yelled pointing at Orochimaru once again causing his friends to sweat drop…except for one that was a bit confused.
"Naruto-kun there are six of us" Lee interrupted.
"Oh that, well you weren't one of the team Lee" Naruto said, and caused Lee to get teary eye, he didn't wanted to be left out by the guys.
"Sorry Lee, you're a member of the Sasuke recovery team and should be mentioned in the intro…we are the Konoha 5 featuring Lee" With those words Naruto took a battle stance along with Lee, Chouji and Kiba. But Neji and Shikamaru had been embarrassed by his words and simply stood their looking how their comrades made fools of themselves
Orochimaru's eye twitched, his fore head showed sweat and had a forced smile on his face, he was truly being ticked off by the Konoha shinobis, he was ready to blow and that wasn't good for the Konoha gennins.
How annoying…I'll kill them for doing that. A truly ticked off Orochimaru thought.
-
"Take this!" A petit large breasted woman yelled as she connected a punch to a sound nin sending through a building leaving him under a large amount of rubble.
She turned to the remaining one and stared him down, the other one is visually shocked, as he turned and ran away from the scene, but no one had ever escaped from a ticked off Tsunade.
"Not so fast!" She yelled as she ripped out a nearby tree and threw it toward the escaping nin, crushing him with it.
Damn it I lost too much time with these losers. I have to get to the hospital. Tsunade thought as she ran toward the hospital hoping she wouldn't be too late.
-
"Your in range of my divination" Neji said as he started to throw hit after hit of his technique, his hands where moving at amazing speed they where just blurs for the other genins but more impressive was Orochimaru evading them all with out any difficulty.
In hi last hit Orochimaru grabbed Neji's wrist stopping his movements, after which he punched Neji on is side and slammed his elbow on his shoulder sending to the ground unconscious.
A malicious smiled filled Orochimaru's face as he slammed his foot on Neji's shoulder.
"NEJI!" Lee yelled who in a quick move managed to hit Orochimaru's head making him take a step back.
Orochimaru placed his hand over the light wound; he was a bit impressed at Lee's speed. Lee once again tried to hit him with a spinning kick, but Orochimaru's stopped him with his hand leaving Lee in shock for no one has ever stop his kicks.
"You seem to have a bit of talent" Orochimaru said to Lee as he swung him into the ground wit such impact that he was knocked out immediately.
"Fuzzy brows!" Naruto yelled as he saw Lee getting his ass kicked. Naruto looked around and saw all of his friends lying on the ground. There were Kiba, Akamaru, Lee, Neji, Chouji and Shikamaru. They where all defeated by the snake sannin, even Naruto himself had taken a beating but some how still managed to stand up.
"Damn it! I'll beat you by myself" Naruto expressed as he formed a hand seal.
But in that moment Kabuto appeared next to Orochimaru.
"Orochimaru-sama, I will take care of Naruto-kun" Kabuto expressed.
Orochimaru shook his head. "No I will kill the Kyuubi brat, he's becoming a great bother and he being Jiraiya's pupil makes it even more worthwhile"
Orochimaru dash toward Naruto preparing his jutsu, but a few Shurikens stopped him.
"Nani?" Orochimaru yelled as he looked toward the source of the shurikens.
In a second a figured jumped from the hospitals roof and landing on Naruto's side.
"Need any help?" The new arrival who was none other than the mask nin asked.
Naruto formed a foxy grin, finally things where starting to look up.
"Nah I can take them…I already beat the white hair guy" Naruto said mocking Kabuto for their previous battle.
"Is that so?" The mask nin responded but was more interested in inspecting the opponents. Orochimaru…I won't be able to defeat him if the white haired kid interferes…but I guess my job wasn't to stop him, just to stop him from getting Sasuke or killing Naruto.
"Orochimaru-sama. I'll take care of them, while you go retrieve Sasuke" Kabuto stated and with those words Orochimaru nodded and ran toward the hospital, but the nin tried to block him, he threw a punch toward Orochimaru but Kabuto appeared in front of him stopping the punch with the palm of his hand. The nin tried to move and go after Orochimaru once again but found it impossible as Kabuto tightened the hold on his fist making it impossible for the nin to pursue.
"You're not going anywhere" Kabuto mocked as he threw a punch of his own just to have the nin stop it in the same way.
"I'll get Orochimaru!" Naruto yelled as he ran into the hospital after Orochimaru.
"Naruto wait!" The masked nin yelled at him, but Naruto didn't care as he kept running.
I can't let Naruto-kun get in Orochimaru-sama's way. Kabuto thought as he tried to go after Naruto, but the masked nins held his fist in the same way Kabuto hold his moments ago.
"You're not going any where" The mask-nin said as he pushed Kabuto back, who reacted and jumped back.
There the two stayed motionless waiting for the other to make a move, carefully analyzing the other.
-
In Sasuke's room.
Sasuke was sitting on the edge of his bed, he was being held by the shoulders by Koshi the younger of the two medics. The other one was doing a large number of jutsu.
BOOM and explosion outside Sasuke's room started them, causing a bit of tensions and forcing Shinji to increase his speed.
"I'll go buy you some time" Koshi said as he left them alone.
Sasuke nodded at the man, informing him that he was ready. The medic nodded back and performed the last seals.
"FUUIN JUTSU: YIN-YANG SEAL!" He yelled, slamming his palm over the curse seal causing Sasuke to yell in pain as he fell to the floor trying to withstand the pain. He laid there on the ground still in pain, but it was slowly recovering.
"There now you have complete spiritual and mental balance, now you can make your own decisions, so if you decide to run again you wont have a excuse for doing it, you would be running away by your own will" Koshi replied.
"This seal is no excuse…I tried to go to the sound because…"
"You made a mistake, every one makes mistake, you just don't have to let them get you down just learn from them" Shinji interrupted leaving Sasuke speechless.
"That was corny" Sasuke said getting the medics attention.
Was that a joke? Hope the seal works. BOOM his thought where interrupted as Koshi went through the door hitting the wall.
"Nani?" Sasuke yelled as he and the medic got close to inspect Koshi.
"His neck's broken…he's dead" Shinji reluctantly said as he hit the wall out of anger.
"I finally find you Sasuke-kun" Was hear from the door, and as they turn the find the snake sannin and behind him dead medics along with nurses.
"Orochimaru!" Shinji yelled as he stood up.
Orochimaru's slowly enters the room a malicious expression on his face.
"AH!" Shinji yelled as he punched a hole in the wall leading toward an alley behind the hospital, in a quick move he threw Sasuke out through it.
"Get out of here!" He yelled as he formed hand seals and produced negative chakra similar to the one that Tsunade tried to use to kill Orochimaru with, when he asked her to heal his hands.
"I only need one hit!" He expressed, but the only reaction Orochimaru showed was amusement.
"Kukukuku, you actually think you'll get one hit, you're not at my level" Orochimaru mocked.
"If I can destroy your seals I'm sure I can land a hit" Shinji spat back this time getting a sock reaction from Orochimaru.
Orochimaru looked toward Sasuke who was holding where the seal was supposed to be, but was unable to be sure if he indeed had remove the seal.
"What's wrong? Why aren't you laughing anymore" Shinji mocked as he charged Orochimaru, he threw hit after hit, rights and left all trying to hit hi in the chest or head for a fatal blow, Orochimaru evaded them all a few managing to scratch his cheeks and torso.
SLAM. After Shinji missed an arm thrust Orochimaru saw an opening and he took full advantage of, hitting him in the stomach, after which he grabbed him by the throat lifting him up.
There Orochimaru stayed holding him, just letting him die slowly letting the life escape his body slowly.
"We…know…everything…." Shinji managed to say.
Orochimaru's eyes widen, his words had interested him. "You know nothing…" He said to the dieing man.
"We…know you…had part in…the Uchiha…massacre…we know…why he did it…we finally… know why you're so interested in Sasuke…we…finally know why you left the Akatsuki…" Shinji struggled to say.
"You were responsible for Itachi killing them all!" Was heard by Sasuke who had stayed to watch the entire thing.
"Damn it…I told you to leave…do what you're told for once!" SLASH His eyes widen as he felt a sharp pain in his chest. Orochimaru had placed his hand through it giving him a death blow.
"You talk too much" Orochimaru said with a smirk on his face.
"Bastard!" Sasuke yelled as he saw Shinji's lifeless body hit the floor.
"My, my, Sasuke-kun. Are you actually going to believe him?" Orochimaru responded, but Sasuke's eyes where filed with anger.
"Want to know? Then follow me" He said as he jumped toward the Hospitals roof top.
Orochimaru walked toward the gaping hole in the wall and jumped up after Sasuke, but unfortunately for him a blond managed to see him and went after him.
-
In the roof top Sasuke stood in front of Orochimaru, they where both silent as the only traded gazes, that is until the silence was shattered by a familiar sound.
"SASUKE!"
They turned to see Naruto jumping on to the fence that limits the roof top.
There the three looked to each other. One with a smirk on his face, other with anger in his eyes and the last surprised for the sudden appearance of the loud mouth ninja.
END CHAPTER
A/N: Well what did you guys thought about this chap? nasty cliff right? LOL, well to;
TO everyone that reviewed; thanks for reviewing and hope you keep reading i have a lot of thing to write and a couple more twist, so enjoy the fic.
Kyubi-Naruto; Yeah this isnt a pure love story, thats why i added the gerneral category, so i can add, humor, drama, etc. you get it right?.
Silver dragon 15: Thanks, and i change summaries after every chapter, tell me if this new one is better. :p.
Kawai-angel: Ate some sugar before reviewing:) thanks for reviewing and how your shaman fic coming?.
Kuria Kitsune: Thanks for your support.
Yondaime-Hokage: Is the grammar better?.
Dragon Man180: Thanks for reviewing man, your probably the most loyal revier out there, you have reviewd almost all my chaps in all my stories, thanks.