Yay! I finished this chapter pretty quickly. This is my longest chapter yet!

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I assume my beta is on vacation right now, because she doesn't respond to any of my messages, so the next few chapters will be written without her help.

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Disclaimer: I may love Edward and Twilight and Mr. Darcy, but that doesn't mean I own them, which sadly, I don't...

Last Time:

I flew towards the door and up the stairs! Her poor heart was now dead. I took her hand in mine. It was so cold! Like ice, if not more...

Her eyes were closed and I knew she was experiencing her last sleep for forever...

Chapter 9: The Goth Seduces

EPOV

I'm sure Bella had been asleep for about an hour or two since she 'died'. In those few hours, I somehow managed to convince myself several things- 1)Bella wouldn't hate me now, 2) I was not worthless (I owe a big thanks to the family for helping me with that.), and 3) Now, me and Bella had eternity to live and to love.

I wanted to marry her, but I was terrified of what her answer may be. I decided that I would ask her in a little while. A few days, after she had time to readjust to this new life. We also would have to make Charlie believe she was dead. Bella, of course, would have to help, to make it believable.

Finally, my love stirred...

BPOV

I remembered pain. I also remembered darkness. When I opened my eyes, however, all I saw was Edward. He looked deep in thought. He appeared to be thinking hard about something and for a minutes, I was frightened that it had to do with me, but then he recomposed himself and gave a smile. But not just any smile, the one I would go around the world to see. He grinned and I could see his golden eyes sparkle with excitement.

Why excitement? I wondered.

"Um...good morning?" I said, however it sounded more like a question.

He laughed. That was a good sign, and so, for a while I just figured I was just paranoid.

" Actually, darling, it's 7 pm." I giggled.

"And I assume that it's not very good either," I replied, but instead of the chuckle I wanted, his face turned dark.

So I wasn't paranoid! Well, what's wrong, then?

Suddenly, his eyes brightened up a bit, and his face became less frightening. I could tell there was a confused look on my face.

What are you, PMS-ing? I thought. I knew that if I actually said that aloud, I would find a way to become red. I decided to improvise, but before I had the chance to say anything, Edward burst out laughing.

EPOV

So I wasn't paranoid! Well, what's wrong, then?

I heard Bella's thoughts. What does she mean 'what's wrong?'

Oh, who cares? I actually heard her thoughts, twice! I suppose this would soon fade away, so I brightened up. Bella got a really adorable confused look on her face.

What are you, PMS-ing?

I burst out laughing. PMS-ing? That's nice. (note the sarcasm). I don't think I was supposed to hear that.

"Okay, what's with you and mood swings today?" she asked.

"What do you mean, love?" I had to keep from laughing aloud again. That would explain her 'PMS-ing' thought.

BPOV

"Well, first you were deep in thought, then you were smiling, then excited, then happy again, then you turned scary, then your eyes brightened up, and now your laughing again!" I explained.

He sighed. "I really didn't want to say this, at least not yet." My eyes widened.

What happened? What does he mean?

"W...what didn't you want to tell me?"

"Well, now that you're changed, we have to fake your death for Charlie and Renee..." his face was dark and it scared me, a lot! Then, he smile. "And I just got the two best gifts of all!"

"Oh? And what could they be?"

"Hm, lets see... you and something else..."

I was getting impatient. "What else?" I demanded.

Edward looked frightened, to say the least. My voice softened. " Sorry, what else?" I asked sweetly.

He gave me a crooked grin, " I just read your mind."

I wanted to jump out the window. He heard the 'PMS-ing' thought? Shit! That's why he laughed. But he wasn't supposed to know that. Surprisingly, I didn't feel any heat in my cheeks.

Then I remembered what made him so angry in the first place. Charlie!

"What are we going to do about Charlie?" I asked, slightly worried.

"You'll have to be in an accident. By the way, where is Charlie? And why did you disobey me? I told you to leave with him!"

I winced. I was scared for you... I was scared for me... You told me 'goodbye'...

Edward's eyes became hard and scary. I immediately regretted thinking that.

"I'm sorry. I...I wasn't thinking. I...I mean I was, but...but...Oh, Edward, I didn't mean it like that!"

He looked murderous. "You...stayed here...because you thought I-"

"Yes, okay? I was afraid that something would happen to you and I wanted to make sure nothing did..."

"Bella! Your... your stupidity cost you your humanity, your...your soul, your family!"

I winced again. Edward can be very frightening when he wants to be. He noticed me wince and frowned.

"I'm sorry for yelling at you, I just don't know why you would want to stay after I told you to leave. I was so worried, goddammit. The werewolves were about to attack when I noticed Victoria was not there but Demetri was. He told me she went to you, to kill you. When the wolves heard they ran. They forgot the treaty just to go and save you.

"When we got there, I saw you, half dead. I wanted to kill Victoria, but it was to late. Jacob already attacked her. We had to burn your house. Of course, since you had to change, we didn't take any of your clothing." he paused and took a deep breath.

"Oh, so e...every...everything is"gulp "gone?" I asked.

"No, Alice stopped by your room and took some things. A few pictures, a necklace, and a ring. Also, a journal" he smiled "and my CD."

"Did she take the diamond necklace?"

"I believe so, may I ask why?"

"Well," I began, "My father gave it to my mother and she gave it to me. And the ring? Was it a plain gold band? Like a wedding ring?"

"Again, I believe so, was it also your mothers?"

"Yes,"

"Bella!!" I could hear Alice's voice as if she was right beside me, it was so clear. Then I remembered.

I was a vampire!

A smile slowly grew on my face. "Edward, I'm a..."

"Yes," he replied, a little down.

"What's wrong?"

"Nothing, just wondering how you'll like this life. This damnation! This life of the undead. This life without a soul, or a proper family-"

"Edward! I have a feeling I'll enjoy it... If only you could stop sulking!"

"Okay, just know I love you. With every inch of my body, I love you. Now, come with me."

"Why?"

He chuckled, "Don't you want to know what you look like?"

I smiled. I realized that I still lay under the covers on his couch and my hair was in a ponytail, so Edward couldn't see either. I pushed the covers back and stood up. I noticed the angel before me gawk.

He took me to a mirror in his bathroom. Now I was gawking with him. I could see my ruby red eyes, but hopefully they would change within a year or two. I was taller, maybe an inch or two, but still taller. My waist was slim. My breasts seemed a little bigger too... I let my hair down and noticed that it turned more mahogany. I could also see natural red highlights in it. My hair had curls, but they looked like they belonged on a doll rather than an 18 year old 'girl'. My hair was waist length.

I looked...beautiful. That was something I never thought I would think.

"Edward..." I gasped. My voice seemed a little different too. Why had I not noticed that before? It rang like a bell, but sounded more like a music box.

"My love, you are now the most breathtaking person, vampire, whatever, I have ever seen." he whispered.

I turned to him and gave him a soft kiss. It was sweet and made me crave for him even more than usual. Just then, Alice burst into the room.

"Bella, come with me! I bought you a few outfits, but we still need to go shopping. Now you need a whole new wardrobe." For once, I'd like shopping.

I followed Alice to her room. There, she presented me with several different outfits. They all seemed different, like she wanted to see what kind of clothes I wanted to wear from now on. There were plain shirts, colorful shirts, shirts with words and shirts with pictures. The shirt that stood out to me most look goth-like.

It was a body-hugging black corset-style top. There were mesh sleeves which cut diagonal and split in two. The corset-style body has a lace-up panel which is studded with white diamond- style crystals. It was beautiful!

There was a skirt that went with it. The skirt was long, with a waist band that looked like a waist cincher. There were boning in the front and back. The black satin lacing went through silver grommets and there was an 8" slit up the back.

The shoes had a huge heel. 2 or 3 inches. They had large and small D rings for lacing and ribbed seams. The red stitching matched my eyes!

The whole outfit was goth and I loved it! I put it on and modeled it for Alice.

" Wow! I think we found your style!" was her reply.

After Alice did my hair and put some black nail polish, black eyeshadow, and eyeliner on. I was allowed to go to Edward.

As I walked in, I could have sworn his eyes were popping out.

"Wow! I hope Alice buys you some more things like that." I don't think I was supposed to hear that. I grinned.

He walked over to me and gave me a kiss. It was so sweet and passionate. More than ever before. I felt love, happiness, but I also felt lust, and that scared me a little, so I pulled back to ask a question instead.

"Edward? What happened to my scars? And am I going to have a power?"

Just then I heard Carlisle call us down. When we reached the living room, I received a hug from everyone, including Rosalie.

"Wow! You look good!" she told me. I don't think anyone but I could understand what I was feeling. Not even Jasper. I guess surprise, excitement, and perhaps pleasure. Rosalie Hale just complimented me!

"Thanks, I guess." she smiled.

"Bella, I know Edward has forgiven me for everything that has happened, but I want to make sure you do too."

"I forgive you. Besides, I would have to one day, since I am now going to stick around for a while." I giggled.

Everyone took a seat on the couch and the love seat. Okay, I lied, the girls sat on the guy's laps.

"We have to discuss what to do now," Carlisle said.

"Well, Charlie is in New York, so you can call him and tell him I... I'm dead," I said.

"He'll come here to make sure, so we'll make it seem like a car crash," Alice seemed excited about having to create the whole facade.

"I'm sorry, Edward, but you'll have to 'crash' the Volvo," Carlisle said.

"Anything for Bella," Edward replied, sadly. I squeezed his hand and he smiled.

"Bella, after this we will have to move. Do you have any suggestions?" Esme asked.

"Not really, I have always wanted to visit Europe, so perhaps somewhere there?"

"That's a nice idea. But, maybe not Italy," Emmett said and I smiled.

"Maybe England," Jasper suggested.

Everyone agreed on England.

After discussing the move, new cars to buy, and Charlie, we were free to go. I pulled Edward to our room, but he said he had to talk to Carlisle and left for a while. I walked over to his mirror and while examining myself, I started to hum.

EPOV

I left to talk to Carlisle about what he thought happened to her scars when I heard an angel's voice. It was coming from my room. Bella!

She was humming a mysterious melody, but it was so enticing. I, unconsiasly, began to head back to my room. Her voice was luring me to her.

I stepped into the room and closed the door. Her humming stopped and my head began to clear automatically.

"Edward?" Bella walked to me. "Are you okay?" her voice was full of concern.

"Bella, you're voice..." I couldn't continue, but I had to warn her. She could seduce someone unknowingly with that voice.

"What? What about it?"

Edward tell her, NOW! Every male in this house heard and was going to her. You have to stop her from doing so again! Alice

"You're voice is alluring. I didn't even get to his office when you're voice made me go back..."

"So, I'm like, a seductress?" she asked, getting frightened.

"I think so."

"Oh god, that is not good, I could hurt someone by doing that. I have to make sure I don't hum again, or sing..."

I didn't want that. Her voice was heavenly and I wanted to hear more, I craved it.

"May...maybe you could sing to me some...sometimes?" I suggested and my angel smiled slightly.

"I'm scared. I don't want to seduce you, even if I love you!"

I instantly regretted suggesting such a thing. It made her uncomfortable, and me very excited, even though she refused.
"I'm sorry."

"Don't be, I think I would slip anyway, I love music and singing. So, maybe you'll get lucky."

That was all I needed to hear because I kissed her with all the passion I could muster up. We fell to the floor, still kissing, and stayed that way for what felt like hours.

That's the end of chapter 9, folks. Not much of a cliffy. Please review! Pleasie please with a cherry on top! Till next time, Nat