The Torn Couple
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"Oh ow ouch this is hurting me I probably have twenty thorns on me right now
said Leafpool. "Me too" said Crowfeather. "Finally we're out of those Stinken brambles but we
have to keep it down low were in shadowclan's territory" said Crowfeather. Leafpool and
Crowfeather were downwind and were traveling half way through shadowclan's territory. "Stop
right there" said a deep voice.
Crowfeather looked behind him to see a cat he recognized. "Tawnypelt don't ever
do that again" said Crowfeather. "What are you guys doing here anyway if your looking for a
fight I will warn my clan but just going through then alright but you have to give me a reason"
said Tawnypelt with a grin.
"We're leaving the clans because they won't like it if we're together and Leafpool
is a medicine cat so we could never be together unless we leave the clans" said Crowfeather.
"Please don't tell any one" said Leafpool. "But Crowfeather you were one of the journeying
cats" protested Tawnypelt. "I know but I just want to leave now will you please move" asked
Crowfeather. Tawnypelt was about to protest but then she saw a sad look of depression in
Crowfeather's eyes that made her want to pity him.
"Ok I guess I will let you guys pass but what if every clan starts looking for you
what am I suppose to say" asked Tawnypelt. "Just act like you never saw us we weren't even
here" said Leafpool. "Ok buy you guys I'll miss you guys a lot oh and stay safe watch out for
those badgers" said Tawnypelt. "We will" said Leafpool. "Ok so I think we're almost out of here
and then we can head to the snow topped place" said Crowfeather. "Once we are out of this
territory we can find some prey and rest" said Crowfeather.
They finally got out of Shadowclan's territory and started to head towards the
snow topped place. "Ok we will stop here for the night" said Crowfeather. They caught their
prey and shared tongues. Then they went to sleep. "Nooooooooooooooooooooo stop were is
Leafpool, Cinderpelt whats happened whats happened to you Cinderpelt" voices sang the
moonlit sky. Badgers and a lot of them coming attacking cats hurry" screamed more voices.
Then Leafpool woke up and looked around. It was all just a dream all of it it was a dream.