Sorry, this isn't the chapter I promised. After I finished it, I found it would fit better in the other story instead. I tried to write a different chapter that would fit this story better but it wasn't any good. So I'm ending this story. The Bonus is a good place to leave off I feel.
Soo, ya. Sorry for making you wait all this time ; I've posted the new story. I couldn't think of a better title so I'm sticking with 'Fall of the House Bunansa'
It's mostly about centers completely around Balthier and how his interaction with the others around him contributed to the events of the game. Nothing less for the leading man XD Tho I warn you, he's gonna be angsty. But suffering builds character. I plan of fully depicting how a pampered boy from a privileged family broke down and choose to be a rebel.