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Tigerkit jumped to his paws. Something wasn't right. He felt alone, empty, and colder than ever before. His nice, thick, mossy den was gone. Instead he found himself in a messy make-shift one. The warm milky scent of the nursery, gone! Replaced by sickening herb odors of the medicine cat's den.
"Where am I?" he croaked softly. "Where's my momma?"
Spottedleaf sighed. "Oh little one, your momma, Tenderheart, is safe from the cold now, up in Starclan with Williowkit." Tigerkit's eyes grew big as moons. He flopped down and tilted his head back, giving the most squeaky, sorrowful yowl any cat had ever given.
"Why! She promised she'd stay with me! She was lying!" he squeaked, pure fury in his large amber eyes.
"Oh now Tigerkit, she couldn't help that Starclan needed her. She didn't leave you on purpose." Spottedleaf tried to talk some sense into him. But Tigerkit wouldn't listen. He turned his back to the medicine cat and curled his tail over his nose. I hate you momma! He thought. I hate you Starclan!
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