Ok, so I decided to rewrite the story because I thought it was crappy and couldn't bare myself to read it and thought I would save you some pain so here is CH 2 rewritten hope you like it! Please review and tell me it's getting better!

'I wonder where we're going' she thought to herself as she kept a lock oh Shikamaru's chakra 'we've been walking for what seems like hours' she groaned top herself. She hated now knowing where she was going 'The grounds soft so we have to be in a forest' she though to herself trying to pinpoint how far away from the city they had gone. When suddenly she collided with into something hard that she only assumed was his back.

"Gomen" Shikamaru said meekly as he turned to face her thankful that she hadn't fallen on her butt yet again. He watched as she changed the scowl on her face into a 'I forgive you' smile.

'Wow her eyes are amazing' he thought slowly to himself. This being the first time he had really had the time to look into them. He couldn't help but feel as if he was being swallowed whole by them.

"Is something wrong" she asked her cocking to the side in confusion. 'Why is he just standing there?' she thought to herself once again wishing she could be able to read his face.

He coughed thanking god that she couldn't read his face that held a slight blush. "Not at all" He told her feeling anxious, feeling as though he had been caught staring, even though she was utterly oblivious.

"Oh alright then" she replied, exchanging her confused 'what's going on' look into her famous carefree smile that he was beginning to grow fond of.

"So let's begin shall we?" he asked as he began to move to a tree and preformed several seals creating 5 bunshins. 'This is simple chakra searching, if she is as good as she said then it should be fairly simple' "Try to find the real me." He said his voice slow and uncaring.

But his voice didn't matter. However he hadn't realized this yet. He thought that his emotions were hidden. But she could feel the intensity he was giving off. She could feel him watching her.

'So much power' she thought to herself as her body became jittery, excited to be around such strength 'why is his chakra so strange. It reminds me of' she shook her head memories coming to her.

'Snap out of it' she told herself as she roughly shook her head. 'now focus and don't mess up' she told herself so sternly that her entire body tensed and then went back to a normal stance.

'Focus' she took her chakra and let it spread along the ground. Her eyes fluttering closed. She felt her legs slowly edge into a low crouch. Her hands crossed and her fingers separated. She let her chakra seep out of herself. She let it cover everything around her. She could feel every bump, any life form. She felt the life force of every object. Goose bumps ran along her body. 'Focus' she said again to calm her excited body. Her chakra engulfed the clones one by one. Running over each of them, it even seemed to enter them.

Shikamaru shuddered 'what's going on' he thought to himself his eyes darting around the field. However he refused to move and kept him and his clones in place. Steeling himself against the strange assault and feeling that now engulfed his skin.

He didn't need to calm his body from fear though, because he wasn't afraid. His body felt…excited, it was a warmth the surrounded him it had no killer intent. He shivered to think how it would feel if it was filled with killer intent. He took a deep breath and waited to see what would happen.

She sighed softly to herself. She could feel him, his chakra. His heart beat along with hers, their chests rising and falling in a unique unison. She stopped suddenly as she noticed the absence of tension from his body. 'Why was he so calm' even those who had trusted her before, that time had still been scared and on edge. Even those who had trained her had feared her. So than why? He was fine, perfectly relaxed. She was confused but the thought of him relaxed, and the fact that he actually trusted it her set into her stomach. This feeling that she felt it made her smile.

He saw her smile softly even as she had her body in a stance that was meant for fighting. 'Wow she has a gorgeous smile' he felt himself think, he shook his head 'why? Shit this isn't the time' he thought scoldingly as he forced himself to become focused again.

With her eyes closed, and her mouth set in a straight line she once again tightened her muscles. 'Focus, focus, focus' she repeated to herself every time falling more and more into her power. Her heart beat slowed and the sound fell away. She could see the vibrations in her head. Her world of black and white, full of the waves that let her 'see' the world. She could feel his chakra again however this time she could see everything that he tried to hide, because in this state there was no such thing as hiding your chakra from her.

"There" she said as her hand shot to her kunai hoister that sat on her right leg. Shikamaru heard her shout and quickly looked towards her. He nearly jumped out of his skin when all he saw were kunai being thrown towards him and his bunshins. He had no time to react. He threw his hands up to guard himself knowing that it would do little to aid him. However he was taken over by surprised when he felt no pain at all. He dropped his arms and looked around him all his bunshins were gone and a very smiley girl stood before him staring at him in triumph.

"So troublesome" he said as he slid down the nearby tree trying to calm his nerves 'stupid this is why you should pay attention to what's going on around you and not on how her clothes hug her-' He roughly shook his head before sighing.

She looked at him confused again. Wondering why he seemed so worn out all of a sudden. She wondered if he was sick. Maybe that was it. ((Cough))

'Damn' he thought as she once again cocked her head to the side staring at him intently even if she was blind. 'So damn cute' he thought to himself again 'women are so troublesome' he sighed and looked up to the sky wondering if the clouds held any answers.

Ok thx for reading more to come. Bunshin is also replication or copy. Gomen means sorry. REVIEW PLZ I wont update until I get at least ONE review ok. Any questions than e-mail me at