OK So here is the rewrite of Ch 4 I hope you all enjoy it because this is a pain in the ass to rewrite! So read enjoy and REVIEW!!


'Shit' he thought as he once again felt her chakra wash over him, only this time he felt a little bit of…not fear but…awareness that something was going to happen. He felt his body tense.

"This time we spar" she said as she raced towards him a kunai appearing in her hand


He jumped as her body came racing towards him. 'She seems like silver light' he thought. The idea flashing through his mind as he saw the sun reflect off of something. He realized just in time what the object was; to counter it he pulled a kunai from him hoister. They locked weapons her eyes seemed to stare through him; he shook at the force she placed on him. It surprised him at just how strong she seemed to be. However part of that strength was do to the fact that she had come spinning down at him... She jumped away from him twirling in the air as she flew away from him, and skidded to a halt. She stood and looked in his direction. And that's when he knew she was serious. Her eyes locked onto him and she once again attacked.

She felt so free; her body was light as a feather. The world came to her in pulses of black and white. She could feel the vibrations of the air as if they swam in her head. She could hear him, feel him, his heart beat sounded in her head as did his breathing which she didn't realize went at the same pace as hers. She steadied herself as she landed. Stretching her chakra even farther up, down, left, right, everywhere, her 'sight' grew. She looked at him her heart racing the images surrounding her, the adrenalin pumping through her veins. 'Wait' she paused as he disappeared. She froze and her body went tense waiting for the attack. 'Focus' she thought as she searched for him her eyes closed in concentration. ''Focus' she thought harder her hands fisted tightly as she continues to search for him. 'There' her mind screamed as she ducked and brought her weapon up and to his throat. 'Shit' she thought her eyes going wide and her heart stopping in her chest, she couldn't stop. The kunai went right through his neck echoing a slicing sound that nearly made her heave, She froze 'he should have dodged that' her mind nearly screamed to her as she stared in complete and utter shock feeling her arms and legs begin to shake.

'Damn' he thought 'that was a close one' he thought as he sat up in the tree above her head. 'That was way too close' he began as sweat trickled down the back of his neck. 'What now?' he thought in exasperation as he watched her. She was completely still. Was she looking for him? He just watched her closer.

'NO this isn't right he had to of dodged that!' she nearly screamed to herself. She was beginning to shake even harder. Her mind was starting to turn red and she felt her body begin to go numb as well. "no" she said softly to herself 'there has to be-'. She stretched her chakra up and out. She stretched it farther than she ever had before. She searched desperately for him. 'There' she thought as tears nearly came to her eyes due to her utter relief

."No" was all he heard, before her chakra encased the entire field. He jumped 'how does she have so much chakra?' he thought his eyes widening as he sensed her chakra grow larger and larger. He then began to notice her body quaking. 'wha-' he began but he was cut off

"Got you" was all she said before she disappeared in a mist. She completely hid her chakra, Watching him from behind her mask. She watched him getting ready to attack in moments 'I'll get you for making me think you were dead you bastard' she thought hotly to herself.

'SHIT' he thought as he looked for her. His eyes darted left and right, up and down. 'Where did she go?' he thought to himself as he still attempted to find her location, however he continues to get nothing.

"Look behind you" he heard her voice whisper lightly into his ear, the next thing he felt was that of metal being pushed lightly against his throat. He could only guess that it happened to be a kunai. He felt his throat get slightly nicked.

"Check" she whispered into his ear. She softly blew into his ear. Positive that she had been victorious. She felt herself smiled to herself proud that she had beaten him. He shivered, but a smile crossed his lips.

"Not quite" He said to her as he began to move his body. His arm moving away from his throat and twisting towards hers.

"What is going on?" she said as her body began to move of its own free will. She tried to fight it but her chakra was slightly drained due to the earlier explosion that she had. She felt strange because even though she had no control and he held so much power over her. She didn't feel even a cent of fear.

"Kagemane No Jutsu" he turned to her "check and mate" was all he said as he raised her kunai to her neck. Locking eyes with her, he smirked at her when he saw the astonished look that was in her eyes.

She growled at him before allowing a smile to creep onto her face "Fine I give up" she said with a pout, but her eyes seemed to light up with a smile.

"Good fight" they said in unison and held out their hands. This caused them both to burst out laughing.


OK I hope you liked it. It is my first time writing a fighting scene so, be nice ok. REVIEW!!!!!