I posted this chapter last night in a rush out the door and I didn't check it properly, for that i'm sorry.

I have went through the story so hopefully now I have everything fixed.

Also can someone please help me as my grammar and spelling are actually that bad.

hope you like and please review!

Chapter Five

"Welcome Violet to Torchwood three-Cardiff,"said Toshiko Proudly.

"Woah,hate to see your rent and electric bill every month,"I said. I stared in awe at the building surrounding me with its many metal levels, its massive computers and bizarre looking machines.

"I see you redecorated in the last fifteen years then?"asked Nan in a jokey way.

"Yeah,well you know how new technology is always appearing in the bay all the time,"replied Tosh.

"Sorry to break up this little chat but your bloody computer won't stop beeping,"said Owen in an annoyed tone. The talking halted and I could hear a faint beeping noise coming from the nearby desk.

"That must be the tracking programme to find Gwen and Jack,"said Tosh in a professional tone,slipping her glasses on her face as she sat down by the computer,

"It should be complete in a few minutes."

"Good, that means we can found out where the Rifters want with them-" I interrupted Owen to ask,

"what's a Rifter?"I suppose I sounded like a naïve little child.

"It's a bit complicated to explain in great detail but there's a rift in time-"Tosh was cut off swiftly by Owen,

"To make it short,it's those things that took your parents,best not concern with something not doesn't have to be dealt with yet," The three Torchwood staff members turned there attention to the computer. I suppose these people have close friendships with my mum and dad,I mean they must spend so much time with them as there always here.

I hate the nagging feeling of fear and worry that kept looming at the back of my mind. It was like a illness trying to infect my spirit. I looked at the expressions of those around me. It seemed they too had been infected with this emotional disease.

"Ianto,could you get me the disk labelled TD.RT.1941 from Jacks office,I need his code disk to complete the tracking,"asked Tosh in a polite tone. Ianto gave a quick nod and begun to walk up the closest set of stairs when I stopped him and asked,

"Can I come too?" I don't know why I felt the need to go,I mean it's proably just a desk and a computer,but still I had this unknown curiosity to find out more about this mysterious side of my family. Ianto simply nodded again,we made our way up the stairs and went to to a large metal door. Ianto slowly turned the knob and I glanced around,

"So this is where I inherit the messy room Gene huh?"I stated in a sarcastic tone. The room was covered in mountains of files and loose pages hanging about everywhere.
"Jack doesn't organise well,usually your mum ends up shouting at him to clean his office,"said Ianto with a small laugh,searching threw a set of cupboards.

"Funny,she does the same thing with me and my room too,"I said,sharing a smile. It's nice to know people notice the same things like these about my parents also.

"Could you check on the desk for the desk Violet? I can't the desk in here,"asked Ianto politely as he begun to dig threw a chest of drawers.

"Erm...sure,"I replied and begun to searching threw the mountain of paper." I really must get my dad a paper shredder for Christmas"I thought to myself. I shifted a few files until I came across a disk in a small blue case,I noticed it was sitting on top of a picture frame. I lifted the disk and looked down at the photo, It was of my parents,Ianto,Owen,Tosh and a baby me in my dad's arms,by the background I could tell it was taken in the same building im in now.

"Found it,"I mumbled to Ianto as he turned round and I handed it to him. He noticed I had been looking at the photo and said,

"I remember thar day,you were only one day old,"he said in a sincere tone.

"really?"I asked in a naïve way ,a little surpised too that Ianto seemed to have known me since I was young.

"Yeah,your dad has had that on his desk since you were a baby,"he replied.

We quickly made our way down the the others and Ianto handed Tosh the disk which she quickly placed in the hard drive.

"The tracking is complete,their location should appear on screen now"said Tosh. The others and I held our breathe as we waited for the screen to load. I felt butterflies appear in my stomach.

A map of the world appeared,it zoomed in to Europe,then Wales,Cardiff,then stopped at the docks.

"Good their at the docks,lets get suited-"

"THIS IS A MESSAGE FOR THOSE WHO CALL THEMSLEVES TORCHWOOD"said a booming voice from the speakers. On screen appeared three hooded figures,

"WE HAVE THOSE WHO YOU CALL JACK AND GWEN HARKNESS. IF YOU WANT THEM ALIVE HAND OVER THERE CHILD,HAND OVER THE GATE-KEEPER OF THE RIFT!!!!"

please review

ttyl bye!