Phoenix:

So Harry keeps besting Snape, I like it. Remus and the angel of death? Looking forward to the next chapter to see if Remus pulls through.

Author:

Wow, I didn't mean to confuse anyone, but the angel of death is Lily. When I wrote that scene about Remus being the Speaker for the dead I wasn't thinking this through. At first I just wanted Remus to pop in and out, but now I feel like giving him cool powers.

Just as cookies for you guys I am going to post up the best review and answer it for the world to see. (At least the part of the world that reads this story)

Harry Potter didn't remember his homework when his aunt woke him up. Nor did cross his mind while he was cleaning Dudley's room. Not even his daily chore of sharpening all of Dudley's pencils reminded him of his unfinished business. Only when Mr. Snape called for all homework to be collected did he remember.

"Pass up your wretched excuses for a barely competent essay" Snape told his silent class.

"My homework, it's gone"

"I don't why I collect homework, I always burn it anyways"

Harry called up all his courage, with was quite a lot, and raised his hand.

Who knows why it happened to that little boy? Maybe it was fate or some reason someone was trying to get revenge? All that witness can tell is that when that little boy told Mr. Snape about his missing homework was that the time the bat was done with his eardrums was that he never spoke again. To this day the poor boy's mind still doesn't work for in fear of getting a telling off. Others that were sitting close to that boy would not be recovered for many years from that same state of mind.

Mr. Harry Potter was unfortunate enough to be one of the witnesses.

No, matter what parents did Severus Snape would be a sub until the rest of the school year. (Funny enough Snape's parole officer would never find about this.)

Harry was smart enough to put his hand down.

The days before Mr. Snape had been happy enough to just pick on Harry, but now the whole class was feeling the sting.

By the time class was over everyone couldn't line up fast enough. Lunch would be the only escape.

Harry sat at his usual table. It was thankfully empty. His Uncle would take Dudley out to eat everyday but Tuesday. The rest of the gang was too dumb to even know the way to their classroom. (Sadly, Dudley would have to guide them or they would get lost.)

For Harry lunchtime meant listening in to conversations.

"So I said to him 'punk, you better back off of my girl'" a male said.

"Oh please, that happens in movies not at school"

"Oh, Drakie what did you do then?" a girl said.

"Drakie? What did you call your dog? Dog. That's not creative"

"Then I gave the creep some Drakester action"

"I hope you guys didn't sign up for the creative writing class"

When Harry turned around another potion found it's way into Harry's drink. This time Harry would drink it all.

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It happened in math time. Harry was watching his classmates fail at the problem on the board. Mr. Snape had promised the class that if they got the problem right he wouldn't assign the class homework.

The problem was 4x2-9y 2 +32x-144y-5480 if x -1 and the class had to raise their hand to say the answer.

"55, sir"

"Dumbo"

"Gryffindor"

"No, are you insufferable, haphazard children even trying?"

"Look at me I know the answer"

" Show off of a Potter"

"6, sir"

"Dork"

"Muggle"

"No, were you even born with any brains behind those unbearable hairy ears?"

"Come on we both know that I know this one"

"Potter, put your hand down we both know that your too dumb to know the answer"

"7, sir"

"Dumbo"

"Gryffindor"

"No, undoubtly you puny excuse for a 6th year were transferred from one year to the next just your babying teachers could have a break."

"Now he has to pick me, there are no other hands up"

"Do I have to pick him"

"Potter"

"Finally, I was starting to think that he was blind as a bat"

" Do I need glasses, because I just saw Potter smile, AT ME"

"Negative eight"

The class had never heard Harry other than attendance. Their mouths were left wide open at the boldness Harry displayed. Poor Harry never saw anything coming.

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Remus Lupin couldn't handle the nightmares of the future. He saw Quirrell's 'roommate', Tom Riddle and his 'pet', Sirius's innocence, the Voldemont in flesh again, Sirius going through the veil, Dumbledore's death at the hands of Snape and lastly Harry's defeat.

It was enough to drive him mad and many of his friends were voting for a padded cell as his future home.

Right now Remus was in no state of mind to worry about that. He knew that only thing would stop his nightmares.

It was time to pack.

Hi everyone I have a question, what do you want to happen to Snape?

Become a nice guy and adopt Harry or be brain dead about Harry's homelife until he wises up or have a heart of stone forever?

Or more importantly do any of you think this story is moving too fast?

Thanks