(Sorry, but not a chapter. I was at my cousins house and I randomly wrote a poem, and thought I might as well post it – but I didn't want to post an entirely new thing so I'm just posting it under Undecided. I really would like to know what you guys think. Poems don't seem to get a lot of reviews, which is super-sad ;-( )
May the sun come and rise today,
But only for you and me.
Let twilight stay with us forever,
While dawn consumes the outside world.
For you are my world, dear.
You're my sun,
And may you never fade to night.
And if the night were to fall,
I know that you would be each star,
Twinkling with our timeless love.
(please review!!!!!!!! I wrote a poem and posted it not to long ago, but no one seemed to like it so I deleted it. I would really like to know if I should just give up poetry for good)
(disclaimer – not really sure if I need a disclaimer for this or not. Better safe than sorry. I don't own twilight or new moon – stephenie meyer does.)