Brambleclaw's Trouble
Sorry for some mistakes but I hope you like this new chap, and I will try to make my chaps longer.
Chapter 3: Surprise!
"The new deputy is Brambleclaw!" yowled Firestar.
The news hit Brambleclaw like a rock hitting his face. He couldn't decide to be either shocked or excited, and he wanted to scream and shout and jump for joy, but instead he dipped his head respectfully and thanked Firestar. He bounded up to the Highledge and took his place next to Firestar on a little lower ledge than Firestar. It felt strange to be high above his clanmates gazing down at them, some of them just as shocked as he was.
"This clan meeting is not over yet!" growled Firestar as some cats began to wander away. "Leafpool if you would." he bowed his head towards Leafpool and he gracefully hopped off the Highledge as his daughter leaped up.
"Brambleclaw with your permission I ask that when Lavenderkit has become old enough to have a mentor, I ask that I become her mentor." when Brambleclaw had already made up his mind he said this,"Leafpool out of all respects to my kits I wish to wait to see what attracts Lavenderkit the most. When she knows what it means to be a medicine cat and a warrior I wish to let her choose."
"That is okay with me." replied Leafpool with a hint of disapointment in her voice.
Leafpool whats wrong with you! You should of not embaraced Brambleclaw like that, even though Starclan depends on her. Leafpool went over in her head her dream the night her sisters kits had been born.
(This is a flashback of Leafpools)
Leafpool, Spottedleaf called her name in Thunderclans old home, but it looked like the Twolegs had never come or the terrible fire. It was normal. Leafpool, the one they call Lavender is the only hope for Starclan for it is in danger of being destroyed. More secrets will be revealed to Lavender when the time is right. Please tell her for now she is but a mere kit. Hurry!
Leafpool had woken for fear of Starclan's demolish. Leafpool had long since figured out who Lavender was, she hoped. All she knew was to get Lavenderkit to become her apprentice and that was it. Starclan would lead the rest of the way.
(Back to present moment)
Squirrelflight was gently licking Sagekit for he had just gotten all dusty (again) when Brambleclaw walked in. She saw something in his eyes that said he was ready to just start jumping for joy.
"I have wonderful news Squirrelflight!" he said quickly "I was just made deputy!"
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