Author's Note:
I would like to thank everybody who sent in a tip, all of which have been added to the first chapter.
Major thanks to Lon-Dubh, who submitted quite a few tips.
TheEnglishTeacher, Em'sGirl23, x. so far away, Jedi Bubbles, and in kisses-consume:
thanks for your help!!!
Other reviewers, all reviews are welcome, whether or not they contain a tip.
Corrections are appreciated.
Muchos Gracias!
Sagatis