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Well expect for one. The person was just rude. I won't name names but the person I'm talking about should know who you are. I'm only human; please don't expect me to be prefect.

Anywho, I made a few changes from certain comments and I think it's really improved because of them. Before I sit down and write I read my reviews and it helps me a lot. I look at everything and each chapter improves.

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Chapter 5: Was it a Mistake?

Kyo and Tohru walked home with Yuki. But Yuki was quite and kept to himself. He hoped Tohru would notice but she was indulged in a interesting convocation with Kyo.
"So you just walked out?" Tohru asked in astonishment.
"Yeah I just didn't want to be there." Kyo said nonchalantly.
"Wow, I could never do anything like that. Even, if I had to. I'd be too nervous." She confessed.
When they got back to the Sohma house Yuki left to go to his base and Shigure was in his office writing.
"Hey Tohru, will you come upstairs with me?" Kyo asked when they finished homework.
"Oh…" Tohru suddenly got nervous, like he was asking to go steady with her.
"Will you?" Kyo asked again becoming impatient.
"Yes," Tohru finally said. "yes I will."
They walked upstairs, both extremely nervous. Tohru could feel Kyo's heart beat in his hand.
When the reached the top stair they both stood there, not knowing what to really do from this point on. Kyo looked over at Tohru who was little pale and was fiddling with her hands in front of her lap.
He stepped in front of Tohru and looked straight in her eyes. He could see her fear but also her wanting for this as well.
He dipped his head down to kiss her. She was shocked at first but soon began to kiss him back. There was a rumble in her stomach, calling for more. Tohru moaned slightly and started the movement to his bedroom. When Kyo realized this, he ran his hands down her back and left her up when he reached her butt. She hopped up to round her legs around his hips. Both minding the distance between their chests.

Kyo couldn't take it. His room was to far away. He shoved her against the nearest wall. She broke the kiss from the small amount of pain. But surprisingly liked it.
Kyo feverishly started to unbutton her shirt while kissing her neck. Tohru gripped his hair as his cold fingers tips touched her skin. Pushing her pelvis forward, Kyo pushed against her but humped his back so their upper half's stayed away.

Already their breath became raged and Kyo became hard. Tohru felt something begging to be introduced in this event between her thighs.

She at first was feeling the same fear but it was soon replaced with the want of it being introduced. Kyo kissed around her collarbone and all up her neck. Pleasure sizzled through Tohru's body. 'More' she thought.

Instinctly she reached down and placed her hand on Kyo's…. he stopped his trails of kisses and looked in Tohru's eyes with shock. She started to rub softly. Kyo eye's roll back and he rested his head on Tohru's shoulder.

Grunt and groans leaked out of Kyo's mouth. When he was so close to reaching his peak, he started to lose strength. He let go of Tohru.

When she touched the ground, she moved her body in a better position, and she reached down under his pants. When she left the warm shaft she became scared, but Kyo's moans gave her strength to continue. She softly began to pump again.

Kyo loved her hands on him. He bit his lip from crying out in pure pleasure. He left her small hand grow strong and better with every movement. His hand gripped the wall and the other hand gripped Tohru's back. Soon he released him self over her hand and felt it sliver down his legs. She let go and looked in his eyes. What did she just do? He looked at her in such surprise.

'She really does love me.' He thought, looking in her wide eyes.

'Oh my…' was the only thing that she could make out of her scattered thoughts. She moved away and looked at him leaning against the wall smile.

"I guess I got to go change and clean up." He said smirking. He walked into his bedroom. She could hear him opening drawers and then heard the water running. She just stood horrid in her spot.

'Oh my…' she mind reeled. She looked down at her hand. It was covered in a white sticky liquid.

"Oh my." She whispered. She walked down stair and washed her hands in the kitchen.

When she was drying her hands, a strong pair of arms enclosed around her. Kyo's happy voice flowed through her ears.

"Hey." He said. She placed her little hands on his arms. She loved this feeling. Kyo couldn't get enough of her.

She heard the door open and close and Yuki stood before them. He said nothing and walked up stairs. They heard footsteps and his bedroom door closing.

Tohru didn't know why but felt guilt.

Kyo paid no attention to this and just held her close from the back, gently rocking. He started to hum a song in her ear. She didn't recognize it but she didn't hate it. It soothed her scared thoughts.

Okay if I made her sound like a completely slut, I'm so sorry. I reread this like ten times and changed it here and there but she just sounds like a slut in this chapter. Kind of deal with it I guess.

Tohru can't always be the innocent little girl who doesn't even know what a penis is. If I sound mean, I apologize but I have a feeling I'm going to get lots of flames for this chapter.

But I want them; please give me all you got. Anything helps really. I want to be a good writer and I can't if I don't get an outside opinion.

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-counting down the days-

BRAVO BRAVO! I really enjoyed it! Please keep it up! Kyo and Tohru were a

little OOC but it made them so cute so i don't mind! PLEASE UPDATE SOON:)

-What is OOC?

This is great! Please continue! I personall think that I can't be with Kyo

then Tohru should. So YEAH! The only thing that slightly nags at me is that

sometimes in the series if arms are around each other they change, and sometimes

you had that. But he didn't change. That's my only thing with it. You don't have

to change anything if you don't want. It's great!

-In which chapter?