Hey, it's me again. I promised a fast update, didn't I? Two chapters in two days. I feel so proud. It's short, but sorry…all the chapters are. I seem to be incapable of long chapters. .
Review replies…I got four reviews in one night. Thanks so much everyone!!
kishuxichigo4ever: Glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!!
Anhyvar: Thanks! I'll try to update more frequently…great story, by the way.
Rae-Anime-Neko: -sigh- I know. I am completely incapable of writing long chapters. But to make up for that, I'll try to update more often. Keyword being TRY.
SweetAsHoney: Glad you enjoyed it, even if it was short. Thanks for the sympathy-don't worry, I don't mind when people talk about it. I'm used to it. I'm happy the battle scene wasn't that bad…it took me forever to try to word it . Pai is awesome. Completely xD I will have lots of fun killing Deep Blue in the next chapter…-laughs evilly-
Anyway, here's the chapter!
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Last Time"Ribbon Mint Echo!" Mint was flying over everyone else, taking shots at the creature's back from above. All her arrows simply bounced off the creature's spikes, sometimes rebounding back towards her so she had to dodge her own attacks. She screamed in aggravation.
Zakuro, Tart and Pudding's luck wasn't much better. None of their attacks were effective against the giant dog.
"This isn't working!" Zakuro yelled despairingly.
"It's like it has no weak spots…" Tart sounded just as bleak as Zakuro. Mint was hit by a sudden burst of inspiration, and she landed close to the others. "What about it's stomach?" she asked hopefully.
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"Good idea. Let's try it," Zakuro said, looking a bit more hopeful. Tart dived at the creature, swinging his yo-yos (A/N: that's his weapon right? What's the attack…or does he even have one? Gah.) Mint fired an arrow in the air, straight for the creature's eye. The arrow forced it to dodge, distracting it momentarily, and Tart skimmed underneath the creature's belly, whipping his yo-yo at it. The thing howled in pain and thrashed its tail, trying to hit Tart, but he was too fast-within seconds he was in the air and out of range.
"Ribbon Mint Echo!" Mint tried her attack again, but this time she aimed for the creature's stomach. The arrow hit the thing square in the belly, and it shrieked and backed up a few steps.
"Ribbon Pudding Ring Inferno!" Pudding yelled abruptly. The creature didn't notice the attack and therefore could not dodge it. It was soon incased in a large jelly-like substance. "Yay!" Pudding yelled happily.
"My turn," Zakuro said coldly. "Ribbon Zakuro Spear!" She also aimed at the thing's underside, and hit it squarely. It howled again, but could not move because of Pudding's attack.
"One more!" Zakuro cried. "Everyone!"
Tart threw his yo-yo, and the three girls attacked.
"Ribbon Mint Echo!"
"Ribbon Pudding Ring Inferno!"
"Ribbon Zakuro Spear!"
The four attacks joined, and hit the creature straight on. It shrieked loudly and disappeared. Disheveled and tired, the four looked towards the other battle- Deep Blue.
"Let's go help."
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Alright…this chapter's finished. There is most likely only going to be one more chapter- the next one is probably the last, though I may make an epilogue after that. Please review! I think I know what's going to happen, but I need some ideas for the end. Ideas would be very helpful and appreciated, thanks!
